DECEMBER 2022 SCIENCE FICTION MICROSTORY CONTEST (Critiques only)

[J.F.]

Theme: Failure or defeat
Element: the number "10"

[Paula]

Hah--nice one, Jeremy.

[Jeremy]

Thanks Paula. I didn't spend as much time editing as I should have though. It's rough in places.

[Greg]

got one in. it was a quickie. I also had some IT issues this week but its over for now.