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Dio worked on my WIP novel, prologue and two chapters. He was fast (about 24 hours), thorough (I got both inline comments and a detailed report of not just what's wrong but how it could be fixed, the invaluable specifics), and frank. If you are faint of heart, give him a miss. But if you have a croc hide when it comes to deserved criticism then he's the man for your book.Thanks Gio, for the honesty and the encouragement. I hope to be back.
Hi Jackie,Please do me a favor and send me
contact info for Dio. He sounds like
just what I need.
Thank you,
Joyce
It's Gio with a G lolAnd I hope to see you soon!
Are you available to read my book, tentative title: My 60 ...? I'll send you the first x-pages if you agree. Mainly to see if it suits your interest. The story is told in memoir form and is about a marriage that lasted 60 years. Its dysfunction, insights, understanding, and awareness. Theme: sizzling erotica
I'll need your email.
EN wrote: "Are you available to read my book, tentative title: My 60 ...? I'll send you the first x-pages if you agree. Mainly to see if it suits your interest. The story is told in memoir form and is about a..."Hey there
I'll give your first 2 chapters a shot!
my gmail is giojacobs1996@gmail.com
Hope to hear from you soon.
EN wrote: "Thanks abunch"Hey there!
I'm still waiting for your email!
hi there, i have a finished 88k YA sci-fi/dystopian novel in a school setting. I would love to take you up on the offer of a free edit for first few chapters!It on it's 4th draft and i would like to send out some queries after the next round of edits so would be interested in what you think.
Meika has always known it was her destiny to graduate a star musician from the prestigious Cultural Arts Academy, just as her parents had before her. But when a family tragedy plunges her future into uncertainty, Meika is forced to choose how much she is willing to sacrifice in order to achieve her dream.
In a city where the elite value their 'organic' bodies above all else, and an underclass of Toxin addicts sell their organs and replace them with cheap mechanical 'medmech' alternatives, can Meika keep the song in her heart without selling her soul?
Jessie wrote: "hi there, i have a finished 88k YA sci-fi/dystopian novel in a school setting. I would love to take you up on the offer of a free edit for first few chapters!It on it's 4th draft and i would like..."
Whoa that went from low stakes to high stake sooo very quickly.
And she sure I'll take a look at it for ya
DM me or email me at giojacobs1996@gmail.com
Need a quick edit so your first few pages are absolutely sparkling for literary agents?
I've got a postgrad in English and an editing certificate from my alma mater, the University of Cape Town, which is in the top 1% of universities in the world.
I'll line and developmentally edit the first two chapters of your novel for free.
this includes
spelling and grammar
repetition
flow
tone
style
prose/infofumping corrections
pacing
DM me for further details! I hope to work with you soon!