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message 1: by Jeff (last edited Nov 12, 2022 07:52AM) (new)

Jeff Storm | 8 comments Looking for beta swap for WIP sci-fi - +/- 60k so far (20 chapters + prologue)

'Waiting Proximity' (working title)

Fate can be fickle. But not necessarily cruel.
Castor Diep didn’t ask to find the artifact. Origin? Progenitors? Good Lord! Such burdens were better fit upon the shoulders of greater men than he. Now, pursued by Bun T’Lal thugs, aided by the cleverest of companions and wise words of his mentor, he finds himself faced with an unfathomable task…

“He remembered how carelessly he’d kicked the orb across the relic floor those months ago, wondered if here was just as clumsy an introduction for one’s first time speaking with God.”

Cheers all!

Jeff


message 2: by T. (new)

T. E. Fair | 2 comments I’d be interested in a swap if you’re still looking. Let me know


message 3: by Jeff (new)

Jeff Storm | 8 comments Hey T.E. I might just be. Can you give a little info on what you're working on? I'd be happy to swap 2 or 3 sample chapters to be sure we're on the same page, then go from there.

Thanks for the reply!

Jeff


message 4: by T. (new)

T. E. Fair | 2 comments Jeff, I’m writing a sci-fi fantasy novel, working title is “The Somniloquist “ about 40k words and growing. Short idea as to what to expect

Corvus is looking towards a future of monotony when Monday offers her a chance for adventure . She’s now embroiled in a quest to save the universe across time and space and discovering that nothing is exactly what it seems.

2 to 3 chapters to test the water sounds reasonable.

T. Fair


message 5: by Jeff (new)

Jeff Storm | 8 comments Cool! I just compiled 3 chapters and a prologue for another reader (select from throughout the narrative to give a good feel for style). I can email that to you if you want to DM me with you address. Then we can go from there.

Thx


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