sequel and why

[Ztyu]

My sequel to forbidden


Well suppose that the semi nice prison guard that
Lochie had the encounter with helped him
escaped, using a decoy body instead? Maybe he
understood what Lochie went though because he
went through it himself, and had to rescue
Lochie.. So Lochie escapes staying away "living"
for about 15 years, waiting for the right moment to
make an appearance.. He searches and reaches
out Maya first and the rest later.. he explains the
decoy body, and the closed casket funeral, and the
way that he wanted to be with her but had to stay
away... and the story is basically seeing how,if,
and how far hes accepted back into each of their
lives...and how he accepting he is of the way life
turned out, and is and how he has changed and
the others... and of course the relationship with
Maya... maybe it could be called, "Accepting", or
"Acceptance".
Mar 6, 2013

[Sabrina]

Ztyu wrote: "My sequel to forbidden


Well suppose that the semi nice prison guard that
Lochie had the encounter with helped him
escaped, using a decoy body instead? Maybe he
understood what Lochie went though ..."

YES PLEASE

[Rachel]

it's an incest ! it can NEVER work ! and that's why the book was a hit ! because everybody loved the pain in the end ! and that's how it should stay ! no changes

[Sofia]

I was expecting a happy ending. When they are having sex and before that happened everything is so beautifully described and then BOOM, The mum enters and everything is a mess. It had to end that way, one of them dying but I really wanted a happy ending, I really really did wanted to hear how they did it, how they managed to be together after all but that was it. All butterflies and then just the huge huge HUGE thunderstorm. I would not change it but at the same time it would be so comforting to me to read the alternative happy ending.

[Lan]

I really loved Forbidden, so if you decide to write a sequel to it, I'd totally love to read it ;) but yeah, I partly agree with rachel that everybody loved the pain at the end and that made the book such a big hit. Bringing in a happy ending will kinda spoil Mrs. Suzuma's intention, don't you think? Although it did leave me a sobbing mess in the middle of a public library :'))