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ooh this is cool! I probably wont share much... maybe just some ideas?
Lady Lemonade wrote: "This is a short story I wrote:
Take a glass plate Aiden. Take it and throw it on the ground until it shatters into a million pieces. Now apologize to the plate. Does anything change?,” I whispered..."
thats so good i love it!
Take a glass plate Aiden. Take it and throw it on the ground until it shatters into a million pieces. Now apologize to the plate. Does anything change?,” I whispered..."
thats so good i love it!
Thats so good!!!! I love it! I, of course, won't steal it. I'm already working in 50 books of my own :)
"Memories of his pain and agony, the sting of dirt and sweat in his wounds, watching his blood run down his body, the tightness of the chains around his arms and legs, and holding Leila in his arms as she shivered from the pain and loss of blood."LOVE IT
Woah, that is good! For the critical info, I would say that I like it because what you start with is something that makes people question what's happening. I would just say carry on going, I would love to read it!
RowenVy wrote: "Oh daaahhhhhhlinngggggggggI cannot"
OMG I LOVE THIS
This is just a random poem I wrote
"I don’t know why I’m always sad
Why I’m always angry
Why I'm always happy
I don’t know why I hate the way I look
The way I talk
Am I annoying?
I’m insecure
Am I broken?
But it’s so hard to be open
So I’ll plaster that smile on my face
And for my time, I’ll just wait
Maybe sometime you will figure it out
But for now
I’ll pretend I’m happy
And be patient with everyone around me
I’ll be good
I’ll be happy
I’ll love myself the way I am
And you won’t figure out
That I am drowning under my smile
"I don’t know why I’m always sad
Why I’m always angry
Why I'm always happy
I don’t know why I hate the way I look
The way I talk
Am I annoying?
I’m insecure
Am I broken?
But it’s so hard to be open
So I’ll plaster that smile on my face
And for my time, I’ll just wait
Maybe sometime you will figure it out
But for now
I’ll pretend I’m happy
And be patient with everyone around me
I’ll be good
I’ll be happy
I’ll love myself the way I am
And you won’t figure out
That I am drowning under my smile
WOw - i am vry happy rn i just solved my rubix cube for the first time ever
OMg not to be like creepy but are you teenager kinda age? im just wondering because your writing skills are one of the best ive ever seen!
yeah i get ya, should i show one of my poems?
um im marvel obsessed at the mo so here is a recernt poem!I grew up thinking that I was the only one.
That I was the only one that grew up alone.
I didn't have parents.
I didn't have any friends.
Those things were as distant to me as the sun is to the moon.
No one knew who I was.
No one knew I existed.
No one cared.
I was just a small girl.
Insignificant.
It didn't matter what happened to me.
Until I met Them.
They cared.
They wanted to know what happened to me.
I felt like I belonged.
I knew i couldn't replace everyone they had lost
The man of Iron.
The Widow.
The First Captain.
But
For the first time.
In my life.
I felt Loved.
I wasn't alone anymore.
Queen of Hearts (hiatus) wrote: "My first guess was that it’s about Natasha but it’s about Wanda isn’t it?Gahhhh I love it so much though!!"
OMg i didnt even realise that! lets say it is! it was about my oc nova but it fits better with wanda, I am Team Hulk cause i dont really care i love them both (hehe i didnt cry when cap died tho- i did when MR STARKy did tho)
RowenVy wrote: "Padfoot wrote: "OMg not to be like creepy but are you teenager kinda age? im just wondering because your writing skills are one of the best ive ever seen!"HA SEE NAJI"
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Sierra wrote: "This is just a random poem I wrote"I don’t know why I’m always sad
Why I’m always angry
Why I'm always happy
I don’t know why I hate the way I look
The way I talk
Am I annoying?
I’m insecure
Am..."
You should turn it into a song!!
Queen of Hearts (hiatus) wrote: "The spring bleeds into fall,And the leaves begin to wilt,
Becoming a reminiscent reflection,
Of the division within us.
Every shade and hue,
A different piece,
of this indecipherable puzzle,
Calle..."
You should turn yours into a song too! Oh MY GOD it would be so good!! Make sure to add "That's the poem i wrote at the end"
wow i missed out on a lot THANKS GUYS FOR GERAT FEEDBACK
Queen of Hearts (hiatus) wrote: "I love it!!"
Thanks!!
Thanks!!
Andi wrote: "Sierra wrote: "This is just a random poem I wrote
"I don’t know why I’m always sad
Why I’m always angry
Why I'm always happy
I don’t know why I hate the way I look
The way I talk
Am I annoying?
I’..."
That would be pretty cool!
"I don’t know why I’m always sad
Why I’m always angry
Why I'm always happy
I don’t know why I hate the way I look
The way I talk
Am I annoying?
I’..."
That would be pretty cool!
Y'all's poems and writings and stuff are so good lol
Ok, so. I need your opinions on this book idea I got today.So there are three books/parts.
In the first part: There's this fantasy world and there's just lots of drama. It's just a fantasy world ig? Oh, it's also a few years after most of humanity died and city's got destroyed. In the end of the book the main character #dies and right before they close their eyes the main villain whispers in their ear "It's not real"
In the second book: The main character wakes up in the normal world (where we live, sadly). People claim that they were in a coma for 4 years and their family died in a car crash. They try to get over their trauma. Eventually they start to believe that everything that happened in the first book was a dream. At the end of the book they get a letter with a note written on it in the main villains handwriting "Don't believe anything they say. I'll see you soon." they don't think much of it and just go to bed that night.
In the third book: The main character wakes up in the world that the first book took place in. But. . . they wake up in the main villains base. They try to get out of there and eventually succeed. Maybe a war (not with the main villain) and at the end of the book the main character and the main villain fall in love?
Ok, so, in the book that I'm writing there's a villain that actually turns out to be the hero. But I had the idea to start writing in their POV before the group of hero's find out they're actually good. ( I write in multiple POV'S). To make it clear, in the book the 'villain' is known by A.J. (their initials). Their first name is Alexander. So, if I do this I was thinking about just starting randomly with a 'new' character called Alexander but at the end you find out that Alexander and A.J. are the same person. Should I do this or not?
That sounds awesome!!
I’ll get on my laptop later to put some of them on here