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message 1: by Amber (new)

Amber Forbes (amberforbes) | 2 comments This is the blurb for the second book in a series. It's set ten years after the first one.

Does this intrigue you enough to want to read it? What do you think the story will be about?

Any and all feedback is more than welcome!

After all this time, the threat returns. Can Kara keep her secrets?
Peace has held for ten years as the Jade Fleet protects the colonies from the Dark Raiders. Kara has found purpose in working for the Elites of the Rhaslok Empire. But a rogue transmission threatens to destroy all that she has achieved.

Now Kara must travel to Geejo in the Jade Zone and face a past she hoped she could forget. Facing hostility from locals and Fleet personnel alike, all she wants is to get in, complete her mission, and get out.

Until a threat from her past forces her to make a choice. Will she obey her orders or will she risk everything to save the people of Geejo?

SHADOW STALKING is a gripping tale of atonement, sacrifice, and a race against time. Read it today to continue the dramatic, action-packed sci-fi in the Rhaslok Chronicles!


message 2: by WJ (new)

WJ | 36 comments It sounds like a potentially interesting story, but you are so vague about the nature of the primary conflict, (a secret something haunting from the past) that I can't tell if this story would be for me.


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