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Critique Partners and Swaps > Beta read swap 78k LBGTQ+ Historical. Will read other genres in return.

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message 1: by EJS (last edited May 06, 2022 08:55AM) (new)

EJS | 8 comments Willing to swap reads, no editing required. 78K historical LBGTQ+ novel. Open to reading non-historical MS in return. Looking for feedback on; weak points in plot, character development and pacing. The archangels tell me I’m dead, but when I wake, I don’t feel dead. It’s still 1776 on the Wilkinson farm in RI, but I’m not Jemima anymore, I’m a spirit – a non-binary spirit – sent to save souls before the impending apocalypse. Can my own family be convinced, let alone anyone else? Will I be chained up as crazy, branded a witch, arrested for heresy? Will I even survive war in the colonies, going on all around me? Many thanks.


message 2: by Michael (new)

Michael Reardon | 16 comments Hey! I'd be willing to swap! I'm working on a queer monster story. Yours looks really cool!


message 3: by EJS (new)

EJS | 8 comments Great Michael. How would you like to proceed? I'll finish another edit by this evening. If you like, I can email you a link to a google doc or whatever format you prefer. Let me know. Thanks for reaching out. Best, EJS


message 4: by Leonie (new)

Leonie Rose (leonierose) | 2 comments I would be interested in a swap maybe? I'm writing a M/M fantasy novel with dystopian/ritual vibes.


message 5: by EJS (new)

EJS | 8 comments Thanks Leonie. Let's chat about details. I'm in the midst of another revision, but can always use another set of eyes. DM me and we'll discuss what you need. EJS


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