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Beta read swap 78k LBGTQ+ Historical. Will read other genres in return.
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(last edited May 06, 2022 08:55AM)
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May 04, 2022 11:25AM
Willing to swap reads, no editing required. 78K historical LBGTQ+ novel. Open to reading non-historical MS in return. Looking for feedback on; weak points in plot, character development and pacing. The archangels tell me I’m dead, but when I wake, I don’t feel dead. It’s still 1776 on the Wilkinson farm in RI, but I’m not Jemima anymore, I’m a spirit – a non-binary spirit – sent to save souls before the impending apocalypse. Can my own family be convinced, let alone anyone else? Will I be chained up as crazy, branded a witch, arrested for heresy? Will I even survive war in the colonies, going on all around me? Many thanks.
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Great Michael. How would you like to proceed? I'll finish another edit by this evening. If you like, I can email you a link to a google doc or whatever format you prefer. Let me know. Thanks for reaching out. Best, EJS



