CLOUD ACADEMY discussion

exactly, the pain, and I didn't see her as the type to try and be a good guy you know like run away and be a hero. so next best thing spy agency that is the closest thing to a mafia. (me too, even though the characters basically don't ever see it)

yeah, I thought that last part, so I added she doesn't like to be forced into combat. But you guys probably know she uses the nervous system to her advantage, so that is her style, just dodge and pinch the right set of nerves then they are down. that is her extent, she knows more about anatomy, the mind and plants so that's handy for vos

ooh that makes sense for her. wait so does she get along with her mom or no in this group?

(its still pretty!)
ohh yeah. okay. that makes sense, and like, I mean I guess some spy agencies are for good, but hey, some can definitely be for more shadier businesses, or like, even since the group here I think the description said it was to save the world, I feel like not everyone would necessarily believe in that?

I think we are all kinda struggling slightly with these changes, I am with the fact of not doing them but that fact that I have to change vos

yeah, vos is not the save the world type of person, more so the follow your job and don't talk to me or I will try and kill you

yeah, like on one hand, I can probably fit cal in, I mean, I can, but I guess I've made her more and more of a cold and morally grey person the longer I've had her and idk if that fits here? I mean it does but also I made her past more and more tragic the longer I've written her and idk how to keep that here
wait, is vos a student in here? or a teacher?

oh,
no.
absolutely not lolol.

oh boy lol
this sounds bad for aster

the personality is kind of all over the place and a bit inconsistent. probably a bit of repetition and such. i'm a bit to vague on things that should probably have more information and have too much information on things that could probably be shortened and i feel like i didn't really give enough information on how she acts around the school but rather pretty much everything else. but at the same time, i don't really know how to word it all better and i'm tired

i probably could have organized the personality better rather than jumping from one bit to another. ( and now that i'm looking at it, i mentioned her 'mask' cracking, but i didn't really describe what that meant for her and what that would entail, but if i change it, i'd have to rewrite quite a bit. i also don't have much room left in that post ). I meant to write about her vulnerability though, how she'd be like when everything just crumbles rather than just how she acts and seems to be like.

i feel like i wrote more about her outer personality than how she really is deep down, so i'm not really satisfied with it, but at the same time, i'm someone who's lazy and doesn't feel like rewriting everything now that i've noticed it.

I mean honestly, I like aster anyway haha. But yeah I get that about not wanting to rewrite things, the profiles and stuff can be so detailed that it can be a lot of effort to go rewrite them, hence partially why I dislike having to edit characters for each new groups XD
though that said I think aster looks fine! but I'm sorry you're not too happy with the profile/character

thanks you guys < 3
I think i just have a problem with following through with my thoughts and like, properly conveying them. But, I had also been working on that character for like, three hours straight

of course ;)
And yeah I get some of that. And it’s like, sometimes I wish my thoughts automatically appeared on paper it would be so much easier than writing it all out
Oh wow that’s a long time!
Hopefully I’ll get my angry bean out soon but also I just…idk the history is a roadblock. Like I have some ideas more now but still I feel like I need more

maybe something like, their mother used to go to the school and she, who had grown up close to her mother, wanted to attend the same school as her to be as cool as her. but one day, her mother left for a 'weekend trip' ( a mission ) and disappears? she soon finds out that her mother was actually a spy and the awesome school she supposedly grew up in was one to train superspies? which, explains a lot, like why her mother was training her in self-defense and everything from a young age. So, when she ends up getting recruited in the school, she decides to attend to maybe try to find out what happened to her mother?
( so kind of similar to her marvel backstories? )
totally not me copying a spy kids plot lol

maybe something like, their mother used to go to the school and she, who had grown up close to her mother, wanted to attend the same school as her to be as cool as her. but one day, her mother ..."
she would have probably just been told her mother was a government official or something, which would technically be true, but yknow, not the full truth

Hmmm okay yeah thank you! so I may take some of that, so I think her mom definitely went to CLOUD and she'd close to her AND I LIKE THAT IDEA OF HER DISAPPEARING
oh
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and then when she vanished, Cal is like,. devastated and then it turns out her psycho father like...also went to CLOUD but he works there and up until her mom vanished, she was keeping him at bay or something and then when she dies her dad takes her in and its been bad since then
idk
because something has to make her all cold
(lol yeah so I actually created Cal for a marvel group last year--it was the first time I ever made her, and she was originally Hill's kid and ever since then when I made her for other groups, thats why her mom was always the spy/person who taught her stuff, etch)

i'm sitting here reading, right? so, i listen to music since it helps me focus when I'm reading so i put on a random youtube playlist video and i was thinking about how it was getting late and how i should go to bed and the song I Should Probably Go To Bed by Day + Shay started playing and i was kind of spooked.
( the playlist i've been listening to for the past two hours : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a3htJ... )
hey so I just skimmed over literally everything because yeah but I just want to add that all students are taught those main skill sets like stealth and combat and lying but the houses are really just defined as “what do you excel in the most”

no, for the one with dagger, the group one
i'm still trying to find an fc for that one lol

me remembering cal and vos' interactions, I should make the triplets!

aster won't super respect cal in this
instead, maybe, just maybe
she just like, really dislikes cal as a person. ( not so much she fucks with her like alianna but yknow )
because like, aster is fundamentally the same, but there is a lot of things that have changed.

XD that works for me, I mean to be fair cal is going to have more issues too than she did in my first renditions of her in other groups like, last year.
(yeah alianna will never not mess with her)
I feel like Katniss will still...admire Aster?
i haven't even begin to think about what I'll do with aster's history tbh. rn, all i really know is that i want the academy to have been her way out when they found her, a way of survival.