ᴛʜᴇ ʀᴏʏᴀʟ sᴇʟᴇᴄᴛɪᴏɴ - advanced roleplay discussion
note: This topic has been closed to new comments.
ᴀʀᴄʜɪᴠᴇᴅ ɢᴇɴᴇʀᴀʟ ᴛʜʀᴇᴀᴅs
>
General - Group Chat
message 18701:
by
Savannah
(new)
Jun 01, 2015 03:29PM

reply
|
flag
![lil' Lily [ filled with DETERMINATION ] (runelily)](https://images.gr-assets.com/users/1452196293p1/39792905.jpg)

http://republicanhour.com/wp-content/...
Out of these two guys who looks more like him
http://neonlimelight.com/wp-content/u...

True, but that doesn't mean you can't post and have your charrie arrive first ^_^

Hey guys!!! ^_^ So I take it the first news thing is finished?


Totally didn't mean to point out all the wrong things. RED I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT. LIKE YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND I'M GRINNING AND LAUGHING AND IT'S WONDERFUL!!!

You Are
You are my light
In the day and the dark.
You are my fight
When I've lost my spark.
You have the voice
I silence the world to hear
You are the choice
I have wanted every year.
You're the first and last thought
That I wake up and go to sleep with
It is not a secret I have been caught
And fallen in so deep with.
![lil' Lily [ filled with DETERMINATION ] (runelily)](https://images.gr-assets.com/users/1452196293p1/39792905.jpg)
MILO MILO WHAT IS IT?!? SERIOUSLY JUST GIMME A REASON AND I WILL DANCE AROUND THE THREAD WITH YOU
![lil' Lily [ filled with DETERMINATION ] (runelily)](https://images.gr-assets.com/users/1452196293p1/39792905.jpg)

![lil' Lily [ filled with DETERMINATION ] (runelily)](https://images.gr-assets.com/users/1452196293p1/39792905.jpg)
YES OMGSH MILO YES!! That would be perf!! Like, no one uses fat people, so it would make them so unique! I would totally do a romantic collab if no one else has already dibbed them by the time I post this!


![lil' Lily [ filled with DETERMINATION ] (runelily)](https://images.gr-assets.com/users/1452196293p1/39792905.jpg)
(view spoiler)
Okay, so, I just took my post with Lillian so it's easier to work off of and I don't have to keep checking back.
ANYWAY, LET US BEGIN!! XD First of all, I find I can typically get a good paragraph for each action/major development, depending on what it is. For instance, you'll find that in each paragraph Lillian makes at least one small movement, and her thoughts will typically change subject every paragraph. So first, you wanna decide upon which actions your gonna take, and from there you can basically figure out how long your post will be. After this its just the writing part, so of course I can't tell you what to do for it, bu here are a few things that I find help.
1; LOTS AND LOTS AND LOTS OF ADJECTIVES! Like seriously, every chance you get, add a couple adjectives. At first it will seem small, but you'll find by the end you may have 2 whole lines worth of adjectives.
2; THOUGHTS!!! I find this ESPECIALLY helpful with Lillian, as she won't actually talk. Basically, at any given point your character will be thinking SOMETHING, so all you have to do is add it to your post and BAM, like, a good few extra lines right there.
3; SURROUNDINGS!! Pay lots of attention to your character's surroundings! Feel free to add a few "Her gaze darted to a stray leaf by her boot" or "The tree's unusual marking caught her eye"s. They can really help you and your reader really FEEL the character.
4; RANDOM MOVEMENTS!! Chances are your character isn't standing stock still between running around and punching people. Feel free to note if they're fidgeting, pushing hair behind their ear, anything! You can even have them develop a habit or something!
5; EMOTION!!!! I gave this 4 exclamation points because its SUPER important. You really wanna add how your character is feeling no matter what, if they're nervous or scared ir delighted or enrages, everyone always has emotions no matter the situation!
So yeah, that kinda came off as a lecture and its probably really boring and won't help much, but let me know if you found it slightly useful!

Hehe yay, I'm glad you like it Ella. ^_^ Working on the reply now, which you'll love, of course. Cayan is my baby. <3


ITS ONE OF YOU GUYS SO GO POST HAHA XD I AM HYPER OR DRUNK OR SOME MIX BETWEEN THE TWO

otherwise we have to skip potential cute scenes in order for him to be kidnapped >.> and thats no fun

This topic has been frozen by the moderator. No new comments can be posted.