Query Letter Feedback

[Arshan]

I recently finished writing my first query letter and have edited a few times while following guidelines that I found online and as well in a couple of books but I wanted to get some feedback on my letter from a few people before I send them out.

The letter is around 250 words and if you're interested, please message me and I will send you a link. Also open to swapping query letters.

[E.L.]

I too am at the query letter stage and would love to look at your letter, and perhaps you could take a look at mine?

[Arshan]

E.L. wrote: "I too am at the query letter stage and would love to look at your letter, and perhaps you could take a look at mine?"

Hello, that sounds good to me. I'm open to swapping query letters. Send me a message so we can exchange more detailed info.

[E.L.]

Your account is not accepting messages, but feel free to email me at genewgene@juno.com

[Arshan]

E.L. wrote: "Your account is not accepting messages, but feel free to email me at genewgene@juno.com"

Hey, I did email you a link. Thanks.