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is this good...? i triedName: Darkradience
Age: 29 moons
Gender: she~cat
Rank: deputy?
Description: Darkradience is a little bit larger than other warriors. she gets her name form her smokey blue-black pelt, and her peircing, icy blue eyes that seem to glow. her paws are also a lot larger than other cats', and she isn't exactly the best looking creature the clans have every seen, but she really doesnt care all that much
Personality: darkradience is very stubburn, and has a short temper, and can seem very vague at times, as if her thoughts are somewhere else, but her actions normally dont show the way she actually feels. she is very defensive, and a little odd, and if she sees someone breaking a rule, she wont hesitate to punish them. she has a sort of crooked sense of justice, and a darker look on things, but that doesnt prevent her from trying her best to do what she believes is right. shecan also be rather thick headed sometimes, and a little too harsh, but she tries to change that... quite a bit of the time, and then feels bad when she fails
History: when darkradience was a kit, she had gotten very ill, and her parents thought that she wouldnt make it through leaf fall, and so therefore, her apprenticeship had been delayed a moon. afterwards, she had trouble behaving, and at times debating on weather to leave the clans or not. when her father left, though, she had decided against leaving, because she saw the way the rest of the clan had treated her father apon hearing his decision. her resolve after that was to help her clan the best she could.
Kin: open
Mate: open
Mentor: (please specify which one) sparrowstar?
Apprentice: she's had one... they died... *tear*
Other:
How's this?Name: Shadesnow
Age: 12 moons
Gender: tom
Rank: warrior
Clan: LeafClan (right?)
Apprentice: none yet
Crush/mate: open
Kin: open
Description: He was named for his white-and-black splashed fur, but also for the reasons listed below in history. He has pale gold eyes. He is slightly above medium build, has a long spotted tail, along with one black ear and one white ear. As a young warrior, he is in his prime adn very strong, with broad shoulders and unusually long, narrow claws. As a kit, he was a very dark, smudgy gray with some white(because his patches of black and white fur weren't as clearly defined) but as he grew, the colors of his pelt began to be more distinct, and he now looks very noble. Some patches of fur are gray and cream, as well.
Personalilty: Shadesnow has a very dry sense of humor, is very witty, and widely thought of as intelligent. He can be quiet when thinking deeply (which he does often). Most of the time, he is adventurous, out-going, and friendly. He considers obedience to the warrior code the most important thing in his life, second only to his unwavering faith in StarClan. On occasion, this makes him too serious, and he can try to be too 'noble' and mature. He is not as easy-going as some cats, but still optimistic.
History: Shadesnow was born in the middle of the night at half-moon, while the medicine cat was gone, making it a very long, difficult delivery for his mother. She named him both because of the blackness of night (based on his fur) and the darkness and oppresion she felt until the medicine cat arrived to help. He was apprenticed early because of a shortage of warriors, and entirely devoted himself to becoming a great warrior. His first leaf-bare as an apprentice was difficult for the Clan, and he became a warrior during a blizzard after chasing off a whole patrol of an enemy Clan, intent on stealiing prey, on his own while most other warriors were sick and unable to help. This earned him his warrior name. He is well-liekd and enjoys spending time with other cats, but never made any best friends because he felt isolated as a young cat, on account of his striving to figure out who he would be. Since kithood, his whole life has been a quest for self-discovery and answers to deep questions about himself.
http://www.findakitten.co.uk/images/g...
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Name:FawnpawAge:7 moons
Gender:she~cat
Rank:apprentice
Mentor:not sure
Crush/mate:open
Kin:Her mother was a fiery ginger she~cat named Aspenfire respectively, he father a kittypet Siamese named Max
Description: Fawnpaw is a slender she~cat that is unusually small. She was given the prefix Fawn because of her light tawny colouring and soft white belly. He fur has always kept its kitten softness and she's embarassed by it. She has light spots,or splashes of cream on her flank near her tail that also aided in her name. Despite her size she is well-muscled and swift. Her paws are white except for her fore left paw that is a darker brown even than her body.
Personality: Fawnpaw is an extremely shy cat. She has been she almost since the moment she was born.Because she is shy cats are quick to underestimate her and that has helped to make her close herself off from the other apprentices. She sports and intellectual level beyond the other apprentices. She is a very gentle cat and can pick up things quickly. She cares deeply for her Clanmates and would be the first to lay down her life to prove her loyalty. She struggles with her beliefs in StarClan and can often be found consulting the medicine cat. She has a strong memory for herbs but chose the life of a warrior when she was appointed an apprentice. Upon turning the medicine apprenticeship she said,"My roots have aided in the pull of my paws. I am now certain which path has been laid down for me, whether by StarClan or some other unknown force.I will do my best to provide what I can for my Clan."
History:Fawnpaw was born at the beginning of newleaf upon kittypet territory. The leader was at first adamant in his rejection of her mother's kittypet spawn into the Clan but eventually gave in. Fawnpaw had a hard life when she was first accepted because her mother was shunned as were her brothers. It got so bad that at one point a badger found its way into camp and attacked the nursery and the Clan watched as it killed Aspenfire's kits.She managed to save Fawnpaw and get her over the border where a rival Clan accepted her. Once again the apprentices and kits ignored her but she was accepted by the warriors. She spent most of her kithood in the medicine den learning what she could and occasionally helping out in the elder's den.She loved their stories of the cats of before who would never be forgotten and from that day forth she vowed to make a name for herself and be the best warrior her Clan had ever seen.
http://warriors-soul.webs.com/Smokesh...
Name:Harepaw
Age:8 moons
Gender:Male
Rank:Apprentice
Mentor: ?
Crush:Fawnpaw
Mate:Too young...
Kin:His mother is a light chestnut she-cat named Oakfeather, his father is dark brown tabby with very broad, muscular shoulders named Strongclaw. He had two female littermates, but they both died soon after birth.
Description: Harepaw has a light brown pelt with darker streaks of brown going down his back. His under-belly is white and so is the tip of his tail. He has broad shoulders, that go with his muscular yet slender body. Harepaw has one green eyes and one blue eye. The tips of Harepaw's ears are a very dark brown.
Personality: Harepaw isn't afraid to break the rules, and sometimes does just to bother the older cats. He has a good sense of humor, and likes to pull pranks on others. Harepaw is shy around she-cats around his age, but once he gets his mind set on getting a she-cat to like him he is a total flirt. He is very stubborn and isn't afraid to stand-up to warriors.
History: Harepaw was born in the middle of leaf-bare. He and his litter mates were all very small and sickly when they were born. Both his sisters died, he just barely pulled through. Right after Harepaw was made an apprentice his father died, he hit him hard and had a lot of trouble at the beginning of his apprenticeship. Harepaw's mother was so sad over her mate dying, that she was moved to the elders den. Harepaw was ashamed of his mother, and has never gone into the elders den since.
Age:8 moons
Gender:Male
Rank:Apprentice
Mentor: ?
Crush:Fawnpaw
Mate:Too young...
Kin:His mother is a light chestnut she-cat named Oakfeather, his father is dark brown tabby with very broad, muscular shoulders named Strongclaw. He had two female littermates, but they both died soon after birth.
Description: Harepaw has a light brown pelt with darker streaks of brown going down his back. His under-belly is white and so is the tip of his tail. He has broad shoulders, that go with his muscular yet slender body. Harepaw has one green eyes and one blue eye. The tips of Harepaw's ears are a very dark brown.
Personality: Harepaw isn't afraid to break the rules, and sometimes does just to bother the older cats. He has a good sense of humor, and likes to pull pranks on others. Harepaw is shy around she-cats around his age, but once he gets his mind set on getting a she-cat to like him he is a total flirt. He is very stubborn and isn't afraid to stand-up to warriors.
History: Harepaw was born in the middle of leaf-bare. He and his litter mates were all very small and sickly when they were born. Both his sisters died, he just barely pulled through. Right after Harepaw was made an apprentice his father died, he hit him hard and had a lot of trouble at the beginning of his apprenticeship. Harepaw's mother was so sad over her mate dying, that she was moved to the elders den. Harepaw was ashamed of his mother, and has never gone into the elders den since.
Name: Smokekit (Smokepelt)Age: Barely 6 moons
Gender: She-cat
Rank: Kit
Description: Smokekit is a tiny-framed cat with dainty paws. She has long, creamy white fur with wispy gray patches on her ears, nose, paws, and her long puffy tail. Her eyes are light blue-gray, and her whiskers are mostly gray with white tips. Her small frame means she isn't too strong, but it helps her be agile and quick.
Personality: Smokekit is thoughtful and generally serious, but likes to have fun from time to time. She is quite shy.
Though she isn't clanborn, she has a deep sense of loyalty to her clanmates and the warrior code. She is very respectful and always obeys orders. She probably wouldn't if the orders conflicted with her sense of right and wrong, but that hasn't happened yet
She dislikes unnecessary violence, and will avoid fighting unless it's needed. She is slow to anger, but when she is angry her temper is fiery.
Her small frame helps her to dart in and out of small places, and she can't wait to leave camp and hunt. She has been practicing on tails, leaves, and moss for a long time.
As a younger kit she never left camp. She was too afraid that they wouldn't make her an apprentice if she did anything wrong.
All in all, Smokekit is a quiet cat with potential, if she can get over her natural shyness that is sometimes interpreted as timidity or laziness.
History: Her mother was a kittypet who mated with a clan cat. As the only surviving kit, she was doted upon openly. She lived with her mother for the first four moons of her life as a kittypet, and it would be a lie to say she longed for more. She loved the twolegs, and enjoyed doing tricks for them or basking in the sun.
One day she was sitting on the garden wall and heard the sounds of cats yowling in the forest. It wasn't the Warriors, but it awoke some tiny part of her that wished for the forest. She didn't act on it, though, for a long time. After a while she started slowly venturing into the edge of the forest, and eventually caught a glimpse of a wild cat. She ran back to her mother and told her about the experience. Her mother told her not to leave, since she was just a kit, but then Skye got ill and passed away. Her twolegs thought she was lonely and got another cat, who hated Smoky (her kittypet name) and openly told her to leave. So she did. She was tentatively accepted into the clan, and worked quietly to make them happy they had. She is now six moons, and wants to be an apprentice.
Kin: Skye (mother, kittypet) clan cat father (unknown), five stillborn littermates
Mate: Nope!
Mentor: open
Other:
http://www.leilanissugarfree.com/Tink... Stupid images never work for me..
So now I post in the assessment roleplay?
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Name: PhoenixstarAge: 30 moons
Gender: she-cat
Rank: Leader
Clan: CloudClan
Kin: None left
Mate: Open
Apprentice: Open
Description: She is a fiery red-yellow she-cat. Her long, beautiful fur blazes with the colors of fire when she stands in the sunlight. Her eyes are alight with green and flicker with ambition and care for those she loves. Her eyes shine with intelligence and concentration, particularly when she is hunting. She is light on her feet; enemies hardly ever hear her pawsteps. Her fur is well-kempt and glossy and she always grooms her fur so it shines before every ceremony.
Personality: She is mild-mannered, preferring to reason things out rather than fight battles. She cares for all of her Clan members, old and young alike, just as a leader should. She can be stubborn and tries her hardest to make fair decisions. She tries her best not to make enemies, and in that way cares for her warriors greatly. She puts her Clan first, no matter what. She has been seen still helping apprentices clear out bedding for elders and queens. Phoenixstar loves to run and hunt. She loves to play with kits, and wants some of her own someday. All nine of her lives are intact.
History: She was born in the depths of a snowy, difficult winter, out in the middle of the forest. Her mother had been hunting for what prey remained in the forest that hadn't already been killed off. Her littermates died of cold and hunger, as did her mother. She barely survived the night before she was found. She was apprenticed six months later, but her first mentor was killed in a fox attack even though everyone knew it was senseless to try and attack the foxes. After that, she vowed to beocme leader so that no other cat could ever die because of a single senseless order.
Her warrior name, Phoenixheart, was bestowed upon her quickly, as she is a great hunter and tracker. Her diplomatic fairness and tendency toward reason allowed her to be appointed deputy, after training a young she-cat until that she-cat decided to switch to medicine cat training. She rose to leader just ten moons after she was appointed deputy, due to a bout of greencough that was especially difficult on the Clan.
Recently, however, Phoenixstar has been plagues by horrific nightmares, nightmares that no one knows about. They haunt her every pawstep.
Name: Shadowpaw
Age: 8 moons
Gender: Tom
Rank: Medicine cat Apprentice (maybe)
Description: Shadowpaw's pelt is a mixture of black and white which makes him look more like a shadow than a cat. At points he has these cristal clear blue eyes. During winter Shadowpaw's pelt looks really buetiful.He has long sharp claws That can kill.In the earlyy morning Shadowpaw's pelt has this beutiful design in the morning it Looks like a thousand leafs put together.Shadowpaw's tail has a White tip.Shadowpaw has a what spot on his chest and at some points it looks like a star but others it looks like a arrow.
Personality: Shadowpaw came to the clan as a skittish little kit he was afraid of everyone and thing .Since then Shadowpaw has became a brave defiant little tom he worked up his courage and became a strong tom which any cat can ask for help .Shadowpaw has become loving,and caring.In his time on need all the cats showed him love and Compaionship which is Shadowpaws best thing about him.
History: Mother abandoned him in the forest alone when he was born. He was atacked by a fox before anyone found him he ended up being blind in his left eye. His mother was a She-cat Named Snowsheen his fathers name was Redheart.His littermates died of cold and hunger . He barely survived the night before he was found.He has been a great tom ever since then.When he came to the clan he was a routy little kit he always got into trouble but he wasnt that bad.Shadowpaw was destined to become a Medicine cat Apprentice he always loved to save lives and he was alway in dept to the Medicine cat who saved his life.
Kin: open
Mate: open
Mentor: Dapplenose Maybe
Apprentice: nope
(( how is it now))
Age: 8 moons
Gender: Tom
Rank: Medicine cat Apprentice (maybe)
Description: Shadowpaw's pelt is a mixture of black and white which makes him look more like a shadow than a cat. At points he has these cristal clear blue eyes. During winter Shadowpaw's pelt looks really buetiful.He has long sharp claws That can kill.In the earlyy morning Shadowpaw's pelt has this beutiful design in the morning it Looks like a thousand leafs put together.Shadowpaw's tail has a White tip.Shadowpaw has a what spot on his chest and at some points it looks like a star but others it looks like a arrow.
Personality: Shadowpaw came to the clan as a skittish little kit he was afraid of everyone and thing .Since then Shadowpaw has became a brave defiant little tom he worked up his courage and became a strong tom which any cat can ask for help .Shadowpaw has become loving,and caring.In his time on need all the cats showed him love and Compaionship which is Shadowpaws best thing about him.
History: Mother abandoned him in the forest alone when he was born. He was atacked by a fox before anyone found him he ended up being blind in his left eye. His mother was a She-cat Named Snowsheen his fathers name was Redheart.His littermates died of cold and hunger . He barely survived the night before he was found.He has been a great tom ever since then.When he came to the clan he was a routy little kit he always got into trouble but he wasnt that bad.Shadowpaw was destined to become a Medicine cat Apprentice he always loved to save lives and he was alway in dept to the Medicine cat who saved his life.
Kin: open
Mate: open
Mentor: Dapplenose Maybe
Apprentice: nope
(( how is it now))
Name: MoondarkAge: 30 moons
Gender: Tom
Kin: Open
Mate: Open
Description: A huge tom, his coat is color something between deep blue and jet black, a hue no other cat has. His coat shines deep black in the moonlight, a shine aomewhat akin to an eerie glow. It only shines like that in the dead of night. His deep amber eyes glitter with malice and amibition both, making him sometimes seem insane. His muscles ripple underneath his pelt, making enemies think twice about attacking him. His long claws arc and are sharpened daily. He has four deep claw marks on his side, remnants of a battle with an intruder.
Personality: He has a lot of ambition. He is a born fighter, and as such loves challenges. His seemingly boundless energy allows him to hunt for long periods of time, and helps him to carry back larger prey. He is usually not very helpful, and dislikes it when he is ordered to do domething. He can often be found hunting at night, simply because sometimes, he would rather hunt for himself. He is of the mindset that doesn't like non-Clanborn cats. He shuns any cat who was not completely Clanbred.
History: He is a Clanborn kit, born to Frostedleaf and Blackdawn. A fierce belief that Clanborn cats were, and always would be, better than non-Clanborn cats was instilled in him by his mother from the moment he could understand the difference. He was encouraged by his mother to play fierce games and always strive to be the best, no matter what the cost.
When he was an apprentice, Blackdawn, his father, was killed in a battle with an enemy, and this is when Moondark first began to gain his ambition. He vowed to never let another of his family die. He earned his warrior name with unusual swiftness, judging from his battle skills. So far, he has been loyal, but his ambition may be his undoing. Many an enemy's life has already been lost at his paws.
Dang! You all know that I hate to write a paragraph in the Character profile, but instead elaborate on its personality in the roleplay! But if its for the assessment, then I will do it. :D
I hate putting personality too. i sometimes forget my characters personalities.
Of course, writing a paragraph in the character profile will be good practice, and that's what this group is about, right?! :D
Name: OtterkitGender: She-cat
Clan: LeafClan
Rank: Kit
Pelt: Otterkit has a dark brown pelt, almost black, with some lighter flecks near her haunches. Her long, sleek tail has a white tail-tip, with light brown stripes leading up to it. Her head has a distinct black stripe running from in between her ears all the way down her back and to her tail. Otterkit's muzzle has a mixture of black furs with dark brown fur. Her underbelly is dappled with light speckles, against light brown fur, almost like a deer's. Her eyes are bright blue, and could light up the whole forest. They sparkle when she's delighted, and are dull when she's down. Her eyes look even brighter at night against her dark pelt.
Personality: Otterkit has a very cheerful personality. The only time she isn't energetic or exploring, is when she's sleeping. Though she is quite sensitive, so if some cat were to bruise her fragile feelings, she would be largely affected deep in the heart. Her adventurous personality often gets her in trouble, but she is used to it by now. Despite Otterkit's sensitivity, she is fairly tough and cannot be fazed easily. Though she could use some work on her physical strength, her will is impenetrable. She can take care of herself quite easily, but of course she has not yet witnessed the real life-threatening concepts in the forest. She is quite eager to become an apprentice, and is disappoied in herself for her clumsiness. Otterkit sometimes feels lonely since her sister would always spend time in the medicine cat den, and her mother would never tell her anything. She would give her life without hesitation for her Clan, and hopes to gain every skill she can so she can improve herself and do everything she can for her Clan.
History: When Otterkit was young, her father died a tragic death. She was too young to even know him, maybe three days old. She grew up after that living her life without a real father. She had heard great things about her deceased father as she had been developing, and had grown bold to show her Clan that she could live up to him. She had lived in a shadow most of her life, since her mother would never tell her what happened to her father, or let her know the cons of being a warrior. Her mother was not born a warrior, but Otterkit has not been told this for her own good. She has tried to improve herself everyday to show the cats she has loved and lost that she will never give up their dream; to fight for their Clan and defend, no matter what the toll may be.
Other: About a moon ago, some young foxes were reported in her Clan's territory. There weren't many warriors then, and most were infected with whitecough. She felt she needed to help her Clan out and went out to hunt down the foxes alone. She had thought a young fox would be easy to take down, even though she had not had any warrior training yet. It turns out the fox was much larger then she had thought and had broken her leg and in her desperate escape. Luckily before the fox could kill her, a warrior had appeared and warded the fox away. Otterkit is now six moons, but she is still recovering from her sore leg, so her apprenticeship has been delayed. Ever since she has been ashamed of herself, but her adventurous spirit had only gone up since then and she has been doing everything she was not supposed to do.
Kin: ? (If it's okay to add my own kin, then...) Willowkit (Sister) (Nobody has to rp her)...(She can just be there haha)
Mate: None
Crush: None
So is this okay?
If there is something I missed please tell me! (sorry about how it's more like bulleting than a paragraph.)Name: Moonflight
Age: 25 moons
Gender: She-cat
Rank: Medicine cat( if it isn't open I'll take med. apprentice )
Clan: Cloudclan
History:
Apprentice: open
Crush/mate: none
Kin: open
Description:
Moonflight is a slender she-cat with an exotic, beautiful silver colored fur with distinct dark gray tabby stripes and points. Enchanting ice blue eyes can enrapture any cat. Moonflight seems to have a much closer tie to Starclan than any cat. Her lithe structure makes her almost invisible when she is still. Despite being a medicine cat, she is very strong when it comes to battle. She uses her speed and clever attacks to her advantage. Moonflight's knowledge of herbs exceeds most medicine cats'. Most cat's think she is the most mysterious of all cats.
Personalilty/History:
Dangerous when in battle and quick to act in critical situations Moonflight is the ideal cat to have around when in trouble. She is definetly a cat not to mess with.She can put doubt in any self confident cat. Her emotions can change from one second to the next. Moonflight's history is veiled with shadows most parts uncertain. She was born on the day of the full moon thus her name. No cat really knows for sure who her mother or father was because she was found by the former medicine cat but the former medicine cat refused to tell where she found her.
Other:
Moonflight is trusted by many cats despite her personality. Many cats go to her for advice. Her eyes glow silver in the moonlight. There is a prophecy about her.
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Name: Icetalon ((original?)) Age:13 moons
Gender:male
Rank:warrior
Mentor:too old
Crush:idk
Mate: none yet
Kin: haven't figured it out
history: Icetalon was born in Windclan and stayed as a Windclan cat all his life. Known for his fighting skills and cool head in battle Icetalon is one to have on your side.
Personality: Very quick to defend his pride. His passion and his love. He has pride in hunting and fighting other enemies in clans. He must defend his clan from any danger. His passions come from his everyday duties. He needs them to keep in touch with himself. Otherwise he would be as lost as medecine cats trying to decipher a prophecy from star clan. His love Windrush is most dear to him. He needs her to be happy.
picture- http://www.carto.net/neumann/travelling/...
Hi! Well, i'm Syeira-la, and i'm new here, so, here I go. You can all thank Sephiroth for her wondrous scary faces that pushed me here. :)Name: Ashensoul
Age: 30 moons
Gender: She-cat
Clan: Leafclan
Apprentice: Her former apprentice, Fallenpaw, was killed in a border skirmish a few moons ago. Fallenpaw was her only apprentice.
Rank: Warrior
Mate: None
Crush: Open
Kin: Pebblesplash (Mother), Duskfall (Father), no siblings.
Description: Ashensoul is a chocolate brown, long furred she-cat with slender limbs and piering dark green eyes. Dark golden tabby stripes mark her fur, along with a dark golden tail tip. Her left front paw is a strange mottled gray/golden, hence the name 'Ashen', for her paw looks as if it has been dipped in dirty ashes. She is a fairly large cat, with equal proportions, though she is slim.
Personality: Ashensoul, at first impression, seems a withdrawn and moody cat with a quick temper. She is oftentimes aloof and unsociable, and prefers to keep to herself. She is a loner at heart, though her loyalty to her clan is unwavering. Ashensoul has a great amount of restraint, and an air of quiet resentment when she is annoyed, but her temper can snap if provoked far enough.
Her moody, yet quiet, gaze and restraint betrays a stormy discontent within her, and shrouds old regrets and hurts behind a mask of withdrawal. In reality, Ashensoul is quite disturbed, but prefers to retreat within herself because confrontations can often end ugly at her claws, and she harbors regret from the times her temper does snap and she lashes out.
Towards other clans, Ashensoul is hateful and carries deep animosity toward them. Her normally restrained temper is unleashed when dealing with them, and they serve as a sort of punching bag for her temper and bottled emotion.
In battle, Ashensoul is a tornado of destruction and fury. Her claws are hardened with seasons of training and, of course, all her bottled furies. She is always first to leap to the action, and is not afraid to be first to end it. This is only in battles against other clans, though--civil strife within her clan she tends to shy away from, due to burning regrets that always come back to haunt.
History: Ashenfade was born to Pebblesplash and Duskfall as their only kit, and during kithood she was well-cherished and nourished by her attentive parents. As she grew older she became increasingly independent, and drew away from her parent's support, as was natural for a cat her age. Apprenticeship was fairly normal for Ashenfade, but she suffered a terrible loss when her best friend Tabbypaw lost her life to a fox. After that tragedy she became noticeably withdrawn from the clan, but it never affected her hard work for her clan. Several clanmates reported her as 'moody' and willful, but she would always submit to her clan's commands. Ashensoul became quieter and moodier as she earned her warrior name, but she never struck out at clanmates. She seemed to retreat further into herself, but other than that her history has gone smoothly with few hiccups along the way.
Other: Nothing much, I think I summed it all up.
Am I good for my assessment roleplaying?
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Name:CrispbreezeGender:Male
Age:18 moons
Clan:Leafclan
Apprentice:None yet, he is a new warrior
Rank:Warrior
Kin:Unknown, was found out by the edge of the territory
Crush:You'll see
Mate:None yet
Description:Crispbreeze is a light brown tom, his pelt short and shiny. He sometimes has trouble staying warm in leaf-bare because his coat never seems to be long enough for warmth purposes. Crispbreeze's muzzle is white and has little brown dots on around his whiskers. He has darker flecks on around his ears and tail tip, with a dark streak running down his back. Crispbreeze has a very slim build, and his legs are long, along with his tail. Crispbreeze's claws seem to be short for a full grown cat, and his ears also seem to be small for his size. He has dark green eyes, with brown flecks. His eyes rarely show his true emotions, and are very hard to read.
Personality: Crispbreeze has trouble showing, and dealing with his emotions, especially the more feminine ones. Even with his problems with emotions, he has a great sense of humor and is very fierce and loyal. One of Crispbreeze's talents, is his battle skills. He always excelled in them as an apprentice, and still practices now as a warrior... though that might be more out of habit than liking. Crispbreeze has a lot of trouble with getting she-cats to like him, he is a horrible flirt and gets very shy and nervous around them.
History: Crispbreeze was found near the edge of the border, when he was right around two moons old. He has no memory of his real parents and his first memories are from the nursery being taken care by one of the queens that had kits at the time. He was made an apprentice along with his "siblings", and was mentored by Thistledown one of the senior warriors at the time. He excelled in battle-training, but had trouble with the hunting. Crispbreeze went to the elders den after almost every hunting patrol, telling them about the problems he was having, he created a very strong relationship with all of them and willing takes care of them to this day. He finally got the hang of hunting, but isn't the best at it, and sees that as his weakness. Crispbreeze was made a warrior, and is now sleeping near the entrance to the warriors den feeling the very cold drafts during the leaf-bare and being woken-up by dawn-patrol as they leave.
Other:...
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Dapplenose wrote: "i'm sorry but as it clearly states, you must do assesments first! if you have questions, please visit the customer service topic."what?
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lol,Dapplenose is actually a very nice person..im sorry ive been slacking off with police work chief
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Umm, I'm new but here it is! (Not much to say)http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l29...
Name- Silvermist
Age- 21 Moons
Gender- Female
Rank- Warrior
Description- A short-haired Fierce misty grey cat (silverish) with dark grey stripes and blazing blue eyes, she has a knack for water and loves fish. Starclan favours this girl who is always shining with water, and visits her often. Many males find her attractive she does not require much food. Loves thrills
Personality- A Kind, Warmhearted, can be VERY persuasive and fierce when she wants to. She loves kits, protects her clan with all her might, is Fierce, enjoies fighting, and is very good with stealth. Silvermist preffers catching prey or going on patrols, rather than relaxing or sleeping in. She is very loyal to her clan and has a brave and strong heart.
History- An abandoned kit, grew into an amazing hunter, fighter and is loyal to her clan. She has yet to make friends, which will not be hard with her outgoing personality. Silvermist has no mate and is searching for one. She does not want to be descriminaated because of her gender and will get in a fight with anybody who makes a sexist comment about her that is meant to be an insult. Dewdrop often gets visits from Starclan, though unsure why. Though she has outragous potential with medicine, she has no desire to heal the injured, but to fight.
Kin- BFF w/ Moonstream (Iz that OK?)
Crush- jaggedfang (Iz that OK?)
Apprectice- none
Other- SMART!! Loves fighting and kits, though she has yet to find a mate. Doesn't talk unneccesarily. Loves water, feels herself around water.
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Name: JaggedfangAge:
Gender: Tom
Rank: warrior
Description: Jaggedfang is an average size, plump golden tabby tom. Jaggedfang has black or dark brown tabby stripes. He has a white chest, paws, chin, muzzle and neck. He has eyes that are commonly golden yellow but will change to green-gold depending on his mood. His pads are mixed pink and black bearing short, pointy claws. Jaggedfang has light brown, check mark shaped on the side of his face. He looks like he has dark brown teerdrops comming from his glinting eyes.
Personality: This cat isn't the smartest guy around but thinks he is. He thinks the she~cats are padding behind him in total awe. He acts very flity and syisticated(sp) around any she~cat. But don't let his sweet face fool you, in battle, his claws are just as feirce as his hunger for the ladies! He doesn't beleive in StarClan but would never defy the warrior code. He is irritable and a nosy apprentice or kit can be just enough to set him off but he is ussually just a harmless fun-lover.
History: Jaggedfang's mother was kitty-pet. Her name was Cupcake, or Nightfur when she joinned ThunderClan.
his father was clanborn but raised as a kitty-pet. Mario or Scartail. Scartail wa sent away as a kit to die in the forest as his mother, patchpelt, was the medicine cat.
Jaggedfang had four siblings, Nightclaw(named after her mother), Tigerslash, Sweetheart, and Darkstripe. NightClaw and Darkstripe decided to leave there home in the forest to become kitty-pets, as they thought forest life was to dificult. Tigerslash and Sweetheart passed away in battle as did Scartail. Nightfur died in the kits birthing, never seing or naming them before she died.
Kin: dead
Mate: open
Mentor: (please specify which one) none
Apprentice: none yet
Other: none
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Name: Moonstream
Age: 20 moons
Gender:Female
Rank: Warrior
Description: Moonstream is a little smaller than most cats. She has silver fur that looks like it's shining in the moonlight. Silver dots speckle her piercing blue eyes and she usually smiles! Her paws and belly are a slightly darker silver then the rest of her body. During her free-time, Moonstream is often found near the water where she likes to stay. Sometimes, if she's lucky, she is able to add a stray fish or two to the prey-pile. She is slim and attractive.
Personality: Moonstream is a cheerful cat and is hard to anger. But watch out! When she's mad, she's REALLY mad! Moonstream isn't a morning cat so she doesn't like early patrols but she'll still do it if you ask. It's easy to be friends with Moonstream although she can get really hyper sometimes! When it comes to guys though, she's pretty quiet. Although she doesn't know it, some guys think she's pretty attractive but she's really shy. Moonstream loves kits and she likes to help apprentices. She is very loyal to her clan and tries to give everything she has to it. During battle, she uses all she has and can strike down almost any foe. Because of her history, Moonstream had tried to be very good at fighting so she could protect other cats she loved. Because of that, she practiced in her training more than the average apprentice so she is very good at fighting. Despite her small size and cheerful attitude she can be very fierce and it would be a bad idea to be her enemy. Although she's been through hard times, Moonstream always tries to be happy because she knows the loner that took care of her would want that.
History: Moonstream has no idea who her parents were. She was found, abandoned, by a river. A loner, whose name was Inferno,found her and did his best to take care of her. Moonstream was very young so she had always thought that the loner who found her was her parent. She felt very happy with Inferno. But then, one day while Moonstream was playing by the riverside she noticed a fox den. Moonstream had never smelled or known what a fox was so she went to investigate. A female fox was in that den and protecting her cubs. When Moonstream entered the den, she saw the mother fox and was terrified. She ran away from the den as fast as she could but the fox smelled her. Chasing after her, the fox almost caught up to Moonstream but then Inferno came. When he saw Moonstream being chased by a fox he had no thought of his own safety and rushed after Moonstream. Hissing he tried to distract the fox. Inferno told Moonstream to run back home. Hours passed. Moonstream paced back and forth. She was worried about Inferno. She heard a faint sound and ran toward the noise. She saw Inferno. He was lying there, injured but the fox was lying dead next to him. Rushing toward him she realized that he was dying. Tears trickled down her face as Inferno told her that he knew he was dying. He told her about how he found her abandoned on the riverbank and how much he loved her. Right before he died, he told Moonstream about a group of cats that he had heard of. They grouped themselves in Clans. Inferno urged Moonstream to go to the clans and live with them. After that, he took his final breath and died. Moonstream buried him and then searched for the clans. When she was about 6 moons old ,she found the clans and they adopted her. After about half a moon, she started her apprenticeship and trained hard until she became a warrior.
Kin: None known
Mate: none
Apprentice: none
Other: I know I mentioned this but she LOVES water!!! and she's pretty smart and brave.
hope you liked it!
I hope I did this right!!!
Name: Moonstream
Age: 20 moons
Gender:Female
Rank: Warrior
Description: Moonstream is a little smaller than most cats. She has silver fur that looks like it's shining in the moonlight. Silver dots speckle her piercing blue eyes and she usually smiles! Her paws and belly are a slightly darker silver then the rest of her body. During her free-time, Moonstream is often found near the water where she likes to stay. Sometimes, if she's lucky, she is able to add a stray fish or two to the prey-pile. She is slim and attractive.
Personality: Moonstream is a cheerful cat and is hard to anger. But watch out! When she's mad, she's REALLY mad! Moonstream isn't a morning cat so she doesn't like early patrols but she'll still do it if you ask. It's easy to be friends with Moonstream although she can get really hyper sometimes! When it comes to guys though, she's pretty quiet. Although she doesn't know it, some guys think she's pretty attractive but she's really shy. Moonstream loves kits and she likes to help apprentices. She is very loyal to her clan and tries to give everything she has to it. During battle, she uses all she has and can strike down almost any foe. Because of her history, Moonstream had tried to be very good at fighting so she could protect other cats she loved. Because of that, she practiced in her training more than the average apprentice so she is very good at fighting. Despite her small size and cheerful attitude she can be very fierce and it would be a bad idea to be her enemy. Although she's been through hard times, Moonstream always tries to be happy because she knows the loner that took care of her would want that.
History: Moonstream has no idea who her parents were. She was found, abandoned, by a river. A loner, whose name was Inferno,found her and did his best to take care of her. Moonstream was very young so she had always thought that the loner who found her was her parent. She felt very happy with Inferno. But then, one day while Moonstream was playing by the riverside she noticed a fox den. Moonstream had never smelled or known what a fox was so she went to investigate. A female fox was in that den and protecting her cubs. When Moonstream entered the den, she saw the mother fox and was terrified. She ran away from the den as fast as she could but the fox smelled her. Chasing after her, the fox almost caught up to Moonstream but then Inferno came. When he saw Moonstream being chased by a fox he had no thought of his own safety and rushed after Moonstream. Hissing he tried to distract the fox. Inferno told Moonstream to run back home. Hours passed. Moonstream paced back and forth. She was worried about Inferno. She heard a faint sound and ran toward the noise. She saw Inferno. He was lying there, injured but the fox was lying dead next to him. Rushing toward him she realized that he was dying. Tears trickled down her face as Inferno told her that he knew he was dying. He told her about how he found her abandoned on the riverbank and how much he loved her. Right before he died, he told Moonstream about a group of cats that he had heard of. They grouped themselves in Clans. Inferno urged Moonstream to go to the clans and live with them. After that, he took his final breath and died. Moonstream buried him and then searched for the clans. When she was about 6 moons old ,she found the clans and they adopted her. After about half a moon, she started her apprenticeship and trained hard until she became a warrior.
Kin: None known
Mate: none
Apprentice: none
Other: I know I mentioned this but she LOVES water!!! and she's pretty smart and brave.
hope you liked it!
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name: LakeView age:8 moons
gender:she-cat
rank: a great warrior
description: LakeView is beutiful,cream colored,slender she-cat with a big heart.She has a strip of black going down her back and a big spot of black on her chest.in the evening LakeView's pelt turns a dark maple color.She has blue eyes and her tail has a tip the color of black.Lakeview has the pounce of a tiger and can kill an animal with a single bite to the neck.Her pelt can camofluage into the ground giving her the help to be unseen by her pray.
personality:Lakeview is very helpful to all cats but can be frisky to those who deserve it.she does not enjoy cats that think of themselves more than their clan.Lakeview is brave and dosen't get in the way of another clanmate.she is very strict about the warrior code but is not afraid to get into trouble sometimes.In battle she is as strong as an ox and will defend her caln with all her might.
history: After being abandoned by her mother,FreeFall,Lakeview was taken in by a cat named ForestFire. Soon after her rescue by the frienly cat,he died due to white-cough.Lakeview was forced to learn the way of the forest by herslef along with hunting,eating,finding shelter,destionational skills and other independent skills a cat must know.Being found by a badger and fighting alone was only one of a Lakeview's great adventures in war.The fight with the badger helped Lakeview become a great cat and independent warrior.but with other friends she is willing to become even better than what and who she is now.
kin: unknown. but is the daughter of FreeFall and ShadowMist.
mate: open
mentor:wishes it to be Lionheart
apprintence: no
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Name:WindpawGender:Tom
Age:young maybe ten moons?
Personality:Kind is nothing like his parents,Hawkwing and Leafstorm. He loves cats for who they are not what other cats say they are. He is kind and caring. Windpaw is a good friend. He is looked down on by his father.
History:Windpaw was born in ((what clan is it?))After becoming an apperntice his sister,Galepaw,died. He has been sad about that for along time and trys to think about good things.
Mentor:?
crush:OPEN
Kin:sister died. parents are Leafstorm and Hawkwing
apperntice:Hah!
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Name- Orangelight
Gender- She-cat
Age- 24 moons
Personality- Always loyal to her clan. Kind to her best friends, but quiet to others she doesn't know as well. Is always curious about things. Eager to help clan mates when in need.
History- Born in the nursery but her Froststorm died from too much blood. She was raised by Tawnystem and became an apprentice. She was bit by a fox on her front leg and she hasn't been able to walk the way since. She became a medicine apprentice after that injury.
Mentor- ??? (The medicine cat.)
Kin- Open
Appearance- Orange fur with white and yellow spots. She has black socks and black ears and has only three good legs. (Her front right is injured.)blue eyes and a flat face. Her tail is black with yellow and orange specks in it.
Other-
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name: yasaryn age : 18 moons
gender:werewolf
rank: warrior
crush: none
mate: none yet
kin: were killed
clan: shadow clan
history: parent was hunted and killed and wwas kiked out of the sjy clan for going on the ground and killing the people who killed my parents and also as a brother that is lost and a sister that lives in another country a spell was casted on im to make him a were wolf for ever
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name: Hawkclaw
age: 18 moons
gender: tom
rank: warrior
Clan: FireClan
apearance:
personality:
history:
mate: none
kin: His parants were killed
needs a paragraph each of apearance, personality, and history. It's okay that you haven't read the warriors books, but you will need to learn a little more before you can roleplay.
Hi Dapplenose!Name: Featherheart
Clan: LeafClan
Age: 14 moons
Gender: F
Appearance: Light gray with flecks above her eyes, and white paws. She has a bright pink tongue with snow-white teeth. Her tail is long and bushy, with little flecks as well. Her eyes are bright blue, and she has really long whiskers. Her claws are short but sharp, and the fur on her toes have just a little bit of black.
Personality: She is really gentle to pretty much anybody, so long as they don't try to boss her around. Anyone can give her orders - so long as they ask her to do them, not force her to. She has a mean streak when it comes to toms trying to boss her around, but for the most part, she is very sweet.
History: Her father was a Rogue and her mother was a Clan cat. She lived with her mother mainly, and her two sisters, Moonkit and Barkkit. But then one day her dad called them to the forest and ambushed them with two other rogues. Her mother and Moonkit were slaughtered, while Barkkit fell into the river. She ran before he could touch her, and now lives in her birth Clan, LeafClan.
Name:Wildpelt
Clan:Leafclan
Age:29 moons
Gender:Male
Appearance-Light brown skinny tom with glowing yellow eyes. He is a light brown tom, which he got from his mother. His yellow eyes are just like his father's, and he likes them. He hopes to be just like his father.
Kin:OPEN
Mate:none
Personality: he is very nice and strong, and likes to get in a lot of fights.He likes she-cats, and hopes to have a mate some day. He loves kits, and cares for all as if they were his own.
History:He has always cared for kits. He is very nice, and has always cared for sick cats. He used to think that he wanted to be a medicine cat, but he changed his mind later. His brothers all died, and his mother was out in the forest and died. No cat knew how, she died. Wildpelt tried to figure it out, but he just couldn't. His father was a noble warrior, and died in the horrible battle with a big group of rouges.
Clan:Leafclan
Age:29 moons
Gender:Male
Appearance-Light brown skinny tom with glowing yellow eyes. He is a light brown tom, which he got from his mother. His yellow eyes are just like his father's, and he likes them. He hopes to be just like his father.
Kin:OPEN
Mate:none
Personality: he is very nice and strong, and likes to get in a lot of fights.He likes she-cats, and hopes to have a mate some day. He loves kits, and cares for all as if they were his own.
History:He has always cared for kits. He is very nice, and has always cared for sick cats. He used to think that he wanted to be a medicine cat, but he changed his mind later. His brothers all died, and his mother was out in the forest and died. No cat knew how, she died. Wildpelt tried to figure it out, but he just couldn't. His father was a noble warrior, and died in the horrible battle with a big group of rouges.
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Follow the guideleines in exceptions, and I will be looking at how complete the information is.