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Fallen (fallencatalyst) Derrick put more pressure on the wound, trying to stop the bleeding. "Stay with me, Raina." He whispered.

She met his eyes.


We Are The Fallen~I’m sending a raven with blood on its wings~ | 2499 comments Fire burned her insides. She was in agony. She could feel it. He'd punctured a lung. They were filling with blood.

Jeb looked at her. "I'm sorry Emma," he said.


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Fallen (fallencatalyst) Derrick looked at Emily, knowing Raina needed help. "Emily!"

Emily nodded. She turned, hearing Derrick's voice.


We Are The Fallen~I’m sending a raven with blood on its wings~ | 2499 comments Raina couldn't die. She couldn't right? She thought.

Jeb turned towards the girl and backed away.


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Fallen (fallencatalyst) Emily rushed over, kneeling by Derrick and Raina.

Derrick looked nervously at Emily.


We Are The Fallen~I’m sending a raven with blood on its wings~ | 2499 comments Raina looked up at the two figures in front of her. She couldn't breathe.

Jeb looked at his hands. "No he whispered."


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Fallen (fallencatalyst) "Help her." He looked at Emily.

"We need to get her to the mayors house."


We Are The Fallen~I’m sending a raven with blood on its wings~ | 2499 comments She closed her eyes against her will. Her grip was slowly dispersing.


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Fallen (fallencatalyst) "No. Raina. Stay awake." He kept pressure on the wound, gently picking her up. He glared at Jeb.


We Are The Fallen~I’m sending a raven with blood on its wings~ | 2499 comments Jeb stared in horror. He ran.

Raina couldn't do it. A thin line of blood trickled down her chin.


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Fallen (fallencatalyst) "Stay.." He whispered, quickly carrying Raina to the house.


We Are The Fallen~I’m sending a raven with blood on its wings~ | 2499 comments Raina used the rest f her strength to open her eyes. "Derrick?" She asked.


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Fallen (fallencatalyst) "Right here," he promised.

Emily had ran ahead to get help.


We Are The Fallen~I’m sending a raven with blood on its wings~ | 2499 comments She smiled slightly. " I accept your apology" she said.


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Fallen (fallencatalyst) Derrick smiled, but it was weak.


We Are The Fallen~I’m sending a raven with blood on its wings~ | 2499 comments She new not to laugh. She did anyway. More blood.


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Fallen (fallencatalyst) "Try not to laugh," he said, keeping pressure on her wound.


We Are The Fallen~I’m sending a raven with blood on its wings~ | 2499 comments "Says you," she says closing her eyes again.


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Fallen (fallencatalyst) He sighed.


We Are The Fallen~I’m sending a raven with blood on its wings~ | 2499 comments "Help," she said. She couldn't do it.


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Fallen (fallencatalyst) "Keep talking," he said softly. They were almost to the house.


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Fallen (fallencatalyst) "Try." He whispered.


We Are The Fallen~I’m sending a raven with blood on its wings~ | 2499 comments "Tell me something," she said her voice fading.


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Fallen (fallencatalyst) "I love you." Was the first thing that came to mind.


We Are The Fallen~I’m sending a raven with blood on its wings~ | 2499 comments She sighed but couldn't keep talking her hand was heavy and started to fall from his. 'Love you too' she thought before she sunk in oblivion.


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Fallen (fallencatalyst) Derrick shook his head. "No. Raina." He whispered.


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Fallen (fallencatalyst) ((What if. She like disappears and reappears on the ferry with no memory of him?! And maybe they aren't sure if she'll be a lifer?!)


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Fallen (fallencatalyst) Okay))


We Are The Fallen~I’m sending a raven with blood on its wings~ | 2499 comments Raina was falling. She was drowning. She was sinking. A small shudder racked her body her breaths becoming more shallow.

The mayor opened the door at the sound of her name. She ran to find Emily.


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Fallen (fallencatalyst) "No raina. Don't leave me." He begged.

Emily found the mayor.


We Are The Fallen~I’m sending a raven with blood on its wings~ | 2499 comments Raina was slipping.

The mayor looked over to Emily. "What are you doing here at this time of night?" She asked slightly bewildered.


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Fallen (fallencatalyst) "No." He whispered, reaching the steps of the house.

"Raina, she's hurt. Really badly."


We Are The Fallen~I’m sending a raven with blood on its wings~ | 2499 comments Her hand fell.


She followed Emily to see Raina in Derricks arms in a pool of blood.


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Fallen (fallencatalyst) Derrick bit his lip.

Emily helped carry Raina.


We Are The Fallen~I’m sending a raven with blood on its wings~ | 2499 comments Raina died. Again. She was gone.

The mayor was nervous but she made them set her down.


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Fallen (fallencatalyst) Derrick complied.


We Are The Fallen~I’m sending a raven with blood on its wings~ | 2499 comments The mayor felt for a pulse but found none. She didn't understand. She had to be wrong. She checked again. Still nothing.


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Fallen (fallencatalyst) Derrick knelt next to Raina. He put a hand to his throat to see if it was still bleeding.


We Are The Fallen~I’m sending a raven with blood on its wings~ | 2499 comments ((Where's Emily?))

"No" she said confused. Lifers couldn't doe on juniper landing. They were already dead.


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Fallen (fallencatalyst) Derrick bit his lip, feeling blood still.

Emily stood silent, unsure what to do.

(I forgot about her..)


We Are The Fallen~I’m sending a raven with blood on its wings~ | 2499 comments ((That's ok))

The mayor didn't understand. "She-she's dead"


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Fallen (fallencatalyst) "Dead? She can't be dead. She already is dead..." Derrick muttered, lost.

Emily looked at the mayor.


We Are The Fallen~I’m sending a raven with blood on its wings~ | 2499 comments "She's dead!" She repeated again. This time much more forcefully. "There's no way to bring her back!"


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Fallen (fallencatalyst) "There's gotta be a way. Her being dead is impossible."


We Are The Fallen~I’m sending a raven with blood on its wings~ | 2499 comments ((Who said that?)

"We'll not anymore, we got figure out what's going on!" She stood.


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Fallen (fallencatalyst) ((Derrick. Sorry. I'm zoning out.))

Derrick sighed. Looking at Raina's lifeless body, he fought back tears. "I'm gonna kill him."


We Are The Fallen~I’m sending a raven with blood on its wings~ | 2499 comments ((Idea? Should he actually usher the mayor?))

The Mayor looked up. "There will be no killing, now that it is possible."


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