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message 1951: by Book - Dragon, Queen of the Night Owls (new)

Book -  Dragon | 41 comments ((um, I'm going to look it up real fast))


message 1952: by Book - Dragon, Queen of the Night Owls (new)

Book -  Dragon | 41 comments ((well shoot, third degree burns require hospitalization. Maybe I should edit it to say just burns))


message 1953: by [deleted user] (new)

((LOL maybe there's a friendly medic in the castle somewhere...))


message 1954: by Book - Dragon, Queen of the Night Owls (new)

Book -  Dragon | 41 comments ((well, the castle seems pretty fourteenth century and I would not put my life in the hands of any doctors back then. WHAT WAS WITH ALL THE LEECHES?))


message 1955: by Book - Dragon, Queen of the Night Owls (new)

Book -  Dragon | 41 comments ((okay, so I fixed the comment and now it just says burns, I can give you a list of ways to treat regular burns if you would like))


message 1956: by [deleted user] (new)

((That'll be great, dr. book))


message 1957: by Book - Dragon, Queen of the Night Owls (new)

Book -  Dragon | 41 comments ((Okay, so the best home burn treatments are:
Cool water
cold compress
honey
Aloe Vera
and antibiotic ointments))


message 1958: by Book - Dragon, Queen of the Night Owls (new)

Book -  Dragon | 41 comments ((need anything else?))


message 1959: by [deleted user] (new)

Corpes set his ghosts out for a search. It was a later when the ghosts brought Corpes a bucket of cool water and some small towels. Corpes wet some towels and gently compress the un covered body parts of Kiara, such as the arms, neck, and face. The idea was too cool down her body and treat the pain.


message 1960: by Book - Dragon, Queen of the Night Owls (new)

Book -  Dragon | 41 comments Kiara was still unconscious, but she could feel a damp coolness soaking into her. It was so much better than the feel of fire on her skin. She shifted in her sleep.


message 1961: by Book - Dragon, Queen of the Night Owls (new)

Book -  Dragon | 41 comments ((I should write this all down into a story))


message 1962: by Avery (new)

Avery Judd (averyisabelle) A couple minutes after Biana blacked out, she began to have her nightmares. She was sweating and jerking her head back and forth and breathing very heavily. Biana felt a terrible pain in her leg and tried to wake up, but she stayed where she was.


message 1963: by EllieJellyBean :D, Elliphant Flavored Elliebean (new)

EllieJellyBean :D | 59 comments ((Lol! I don’t know how I’m going to write Alvay in at this point!!!))


message 1964: by Avery (new)

Avery Judd (averyisabelle) ((just have him help Biana i guess and cry over her 😂😂 do u know what happened?))


message 1965: by [deleted user] (new)

Okay, Corpes thought, she's looking a bit better than before. Now, all I have to do is keep her cooling and she should be fine...
And that's what he did. He was doing the best he for his woman, the one he loved the most, the one that he cannot let go ever.


message 1966: by EllieJellyBean :D, Elliphant Flavored Elliebean (new)

EllieJellyBean :D | 59 comments *Alvay rushed to Biana side.*
“Biana! Biana! Can you hear me! Please!”
*Tears we’re streaked across his cheeks, but he didn’t care. He quickly went to her leg. There was blood every were, and it looked like the wound was deep. Memories of the dreams he had had long ago flashed before his eyes. He choked on a sob, try desperately not to cry, but the tears flowed down, and filled his vision.
He wiped them away as best he could, and quickly went to work cleaning the wound as best he could*


message 1967: by [deleted user] (new)

((XD
If it weren't for Corpes, Kiara would have died in several occasions))


message 1968: by Avery (new)

Avery Judd (averyisabelle) Biana could hear someone. She didn’t know who it was. There was one person she wanted to be with her more than anything. She whispered, “Alvay.”


message 1969: by EllieJellyBean :D, Elliphant Flavored Elliebean (new)

EllieJellyBean :D | 59 comments *Alvay faintly heard his name. He quickly went over Biana.*
“Biana!? I’m here!”


message 1970: by Avery (new)

Avery Judd (averyisabelle) Biana slowly opened her eyes and smiled, coughing a little bit. She smiled at Alvay and reached up to touch his face.


message 1971: by [deleted user] (new)

Corpes kept trying to cool Kiara down. He looked over to the others and back to Kiara.
"C'mon...say something...Anything..." He whispered.


message 1972: by EllieJellyBean :D, Elliphant Flavored Elliebean (new)

EllieJellyBean :D | 59 comments *Alvay smiled, and this time he let the tears fall.*
“Are you ok? What hurts?”


message 1973: by Avery (new)

Avery Judd (averyisabelle) Biana remembered she got stabbed and felt the pain. Tears flooded down her face and her cut stung from her tears. She looked at Alvay, “Is it that bad?” she refused to look down.


message 1974: by EllieJellyBean :D, Elliphant Flavored Elliebean (new)

EllieJellyBean :D | 59 comments *Alvay brushed the tears of her face*
“ it’s pretty bad. It’s really to deep, and it’s gonna take a long time to heal with the right medicine.”


message 1975: by Avery (new)

Avery Judd (averyisabelle) Biana turned to look at Kiara, “Did…did I do that?” She looked at the burns horrified.


message 1976: by Avery (new)

Avery Judd (averyisabelle) Biana sobbed at Alvay's answer, "I was so dumb."


message 1977: by EllieJellyBean :D, Elliphant Flavored Elliebean (new)

EllieJellyBean :D | 59 comments *Alvay hugged Biana*
“You are not dumb. She started it.”


message 1978: by Avery (new)

Avery Judd (averyisabelle) Biana clung to Alvay, “Can I lay in your lap?” She looked tired and wanted to sleep.


message 1979: by EllieJellyBean :D, Elliphant Flavored Elliebean (new)

EllieJellyBean :D | 59 comments *Alvay smiled*
“Of course!”
*He shifted so his back was against the wall, and Biana was in his lap*
“I’ll be here when you wake up!”


message 1980: by Avery (new)

Avery Judd (averyisabelle) ((ITS SNOWINGGGG))

Biana smiled and fell asleep at once


message 1981: by EllieJellyBean :D, Elliphant Flavored Elliebean (new)

EllieJellyBean :D | 59 comments *Alvay gently strokes Bianas hair. Thankful to the God above that she’s ok*


message 1982: by Avery (new)

Avery Judd (averyisabelle) ((can we just pretend it’s morning now? lol))


message 1983: by EllieJellyBean :D, Elliphant Flavored Elliebean (new)

EllieJellyBean :D | 59 comments ((Lol! I guess!! Btw, love your PFP!!!!))


message 1984: by Avery (new)

Avery Judd (averyisabelle) ((thank uuu :))


Biana opens her eyes and yawns. She stayed in Alvay’s lap and then remembered her leg. The pain was unbearable, but she bit her lip to keep from screaming. Instead she just cried silently, she turned away from Alvay, so he wouldn’t see her crying.


message 1985: by Book - Dragon, Queen of the Night Owls (new)

Book -  Dragon | 41 comments Kiara slowly regained consciousness. She opened her eyes and blinked a few times. "Corpes?"


message 1986: by [deleted user] (new)

Corpes' eye lit up at the sight of her eyes open, and he cried when he heard her sweet voice. "I'm here, Ki. I'm here." He whispered softly.


message 1987: by Book - Dragon, Queen of the Night Owls (new)

Book -  Dragon | 41 comments Kiara breathed heavily. "What happened?"


message 1988: by [deleted user] (new)

"You fought with Biana, remember? It was a draw when you guys knocked out of each other. I had to pull both of you two out of the fire as well."


message 1989: by Book - Dragon, Queen of the Night Owls (new)

Book -  Dragon | 41 comments Kiara looked a little ashamed of herself for fighting with Biana. "How's Biana? I didn't hurt her too badly did I?"


message 1990: by [deleted user] (new)

"Ooh, you hurt her. Really bad. But in the end, she deserved it. Both of you did. You guys will recover, and I expect you two to think on the foolishness you've done to each other." Corpes stared at her sternly.


message 1991: by Book - Dragon, Queen of the Night Owls (new)

Book -  Dragon | 41 comments Kiara tried to sit up so she could apologize to Biana.


message 1992: by [deleted user] (new)

"Sit back down. You need rest." Corpes growled. "Idiot. You could of died, you know that? You said you were gonna be with me forever! I thought I was gonna lose my best friend, my lover! Please, don't do this to me ever again, Kiara. It keeps breaking my heart when you almost knock on death's door."


message 1993: by Book - Dragon, Queen of the Night Owls (new)

Book -  Dragon | 41 comments Kiara hung her head. "I'm sorry" she whispered. "I'm sorry I acted like such a jealous idiotic moron."


message 1994: by Avery (new)

Avery Judd (averyisabelle) Biana looked at Kiara, “No, it was my fault. I continued it. I’m sorry I hurt you. Those burns don’t look too good.” she smiled a little.


message 1995: by Book - Dragon, Queen of the Night Owls (new)

Book -  Dragon | 41 comments "But I started it and you didn't even know why I wanted to fight you. Its really all my fault, you just acted in self defense." Kiara examined the burns on her arms.


message 1996: by Avery (new)

Avery Judd (averyisabelle) Biana looked away, “I forgive you.”


message 1997: by Book - Dragon, Queen of the Night Owls (new)

Book -  Dragon | 41 comments "Thank you, and I know it won't be easy, but I'm willing to put aside my dislike for you so we can work together to escape the castle."


message 1998: by Avery (new)

Avery Judd (averyisabelle) Biana nodded, “Same.”


message 1999: by Book - Dragon, Queen of the Night Owls (new)

Book -  Dragon | 41 comments Kiara smiled. She put out her hand to shake, but instead of saying friends she said. "Allies?" She didn't hate Biana, but being friends wouldn't really work out.


message 2000: by Avery (new)

Avery Judd (averyisabelle) Biana smiled, and her eyes sparkled, just a bit, “Allies.” She smiled again and lay back down.


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