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Alex didn't know who anyone he just said was. "Well, you're not from my world, that's for sure." She sighed.
Carsie Rose wrote: "Eenin gaped and sat up."Oberon? What? Who's Ober-"
He was fairly baffled. What was she talking about?
"No. No, not Oberon, the King is...Riken. King Riken. What country are you from? I've never he..."
"Lord Oberon is...I hate to say it, my father." Annabelle replied, "He is the ruler of Dragon's Province." She still didn't lower the magical hand with the dagger. "She means, that you're probably from another realm...Which isn't either of ours..."
Alex put her wand in her pocket and walked up to the guy. "So, basically, you have fallen out of your world into a magic castle that wants to kill us."
Carsie Rose wrote: "Eenin stared.From another realm...dragon province...magic castle...fallen out of your world...
It definitely ruled out kidnapping, but added further possibilities of a fever dream and maybe poison..."
"I don't know but Alex probably does..." replied Annabelle, still keeping her eyes and magical hand with her dagger fixed on him, "What country are you from? I answered the question, but you never answered it yourself...As far as I can tell."
Alex shrugged. "I don't know, because we're annoying? Anyway..."
Book wrote: "Alex shrugged. "I don't know, because we're annoying? Anyway..."""That describes Jade for sure." grumbled Annabelle.
Alex laughed. "Nah, I'll bet its cause he and Angelina keep acting all RoMaNtIc...bleh." She made a grossed out face.
Jade heard a new voice, and came out to find who it was. There was another male. Something about him stopped Jade from making a snarky comment.
"Hey. What's your name?" He asked the guy.
"Hey. What's your name?" He asked the guy.
((Hopefully he didn't hear what Alex said....))
Alex nodded her head in Jade's direction. "That's Jade."
"Hello Eenin. I'm Jade." He gave a small smile. He stuck out his hand to shake.
Carsie Rose wrote: ""I'm from Derillon, the Western Province. Who's Jade?"He glanced Annabelle up and down, a little put off by how aggressive she was. She reminded him of Marn and his old bunk mates. Though instead ..."
"Ugh, I can't imagine him in a romance..." she muttered. Annabelle looked over great, Jade was back, she bit her lip. Why did he have to come in and ruin everything?
"Good to know." she added quickly to the newcomer and shot a glare at Jade.
Alex grabbed his hand and pulled him up. "You're not going to get anywhere just sitting on the floor." She commented.
Quinley wrote: "Carsie Rose wrote: ""I'm from Derillon, the Western Province. Who's Jade?"
He glanced Annabelle up and down, a little put off by how aggressive she was. She reminded him of Marn and his old bunk ma..."
"Why is that hard to imagine? Because your too blinded by all my faults to see the good side of me? Or do I not have a good side." He scowled at Annabelle, but it disappeared when he looked at Eenin.
"You seem like a fighter."
He glanced Annabelle up and down, a little put off by how aggressive she was. She reminded him of Marn and his old bunk ma..."
"Why is that hard to imagine? Because your too blinded by all my faults to see the good side of me? Or do I not have a good side." He scowled at Annabelle, but it disappeared when he looked at Eenin.
"You seem like a fighter."
"You're far too violent to be in love!" she replied quickly, "and besides you're not vulnerable enough or as some would say 'feminine' enough to be good in a relationship. You hide your other emotions, which isn't a good thing." Annabelle lowered her dagger and made the blue fire hand vanish in a puff of smoke. She was annoyed that Jade had decided to wander in, couldn't he just be off murdering someone rather than interrupting her conversation with this newcomer? And well, her other plan to prove that she was a better man than him...
"So." she said quickly to the newcomer leading him to another door to get away from Jade, "does magic exist in your...country?"
Kara wrote: "(( Can I smack Annabelle? ))"
((Jade hasn't done anything yet. He's only threatened once, and then annabelle decided to keeep pestering him and makes a big deal about him threatening like he did it 100 times, so like yeah )
Alex sighed. "I shoulda done it when I had the chance." She mumbled.
Kara wrote: "((Jade hasn't done anything yet. He's only threatened once, and then annabelle decided to keeep pestering him and makes a big deal about him threatening like he did it 100 times, so like yeah)"(In all fairness, he threatened someone she loved (not 100 times, but still..) and Annabelle got a little too defensive about it, overreacting to a threat that she was worried could not would happen. If you've witnessed several murders and someone threatens to kill someone you love, I would be reacting that way too. Murder is not a thing to really joke about doing...)
Alex stood off to the side....again. Wow, this was turning out to be just like home. Except she didn't have Michael here to help her through it. Oh.....stupid flashbacks. Alex wiped her eyes and blinked hard.
"Alright..." she sighed, leading him to a small room and locking the door quickly. "So, first we need to get away from them..." She turned back to Eenin, "So, just tell me more about it then...If it doesn't have magic what does it have?"
Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "((Jade hasn't done anything yet. He's only threatened once, and then annabelle decided to keeep pestering him and makes a big deal about him threatening like he did it 100 times, so li..."
((Yeah well when you're trained to kill for like 18 years (and kinda indoctrinated about it) then murder isn't a big deal for him)
((Yeah well when you're trained to kill for like 18 years (and kinda indoctrinated about it) then murder isn't a big deal for him)
Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "((Jade hasn't done anything yet. He's only threatened once, and then annabelle decided to keeep pestering him and makes a big deal about him threatening like he did it ..."(Understand, but murder is a big deal for her. She's a detective after all who solves murders.)
Carsie Rose wrote: "((XD. And Jade has had to watch hundreds of murders and been forced to kill since he was 9. So...both got issues.))"
((yeah....and and he was then trained to be an assassin for 4 years..)
((yeah....and and he was then trained to be an assassin for 4 years..)
Quinley wrote: ""Alright..." she sighed, leading him to a small room and locking the door quickly. "So, first we need to get away from them..." She turned back to Eenin, "So, just tell me more about it then...If i..."
Jade growled, he'd watned to learn more about this Eenin kid. Something about him reminded himself of...well...himself.
Jade growled, he'd watned to learn more about this Eenin kid. Something about him reminded himself of...well...himself.
Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: ""Alright..." she sighed, leading him to a small room and locking the door quickly. "So, first we need to get away from them..." She turned back to Eenin, "So, just tell me more abou..."D.I. Time walked in, he had heard voices arguing and a screech he wondered what had happened...He looked over at Jade.
"What..um happened?" he asked.
Alex was both furious and sad. She glanced at the others and then kicked a wall.
"Nothing." Jade kicked the wall, and went into the room where he'd found the dummies.
Kara wrote: ""Nothing." Jade kicked the wall, and went into the room where he'd found the dummies."D.I. Time shrugged his shoulders, and followed them he didn't know where Annabelle was but he didn't care...that much.
Gwen and Marigold walked were sitting on the ground, Gwen was sharpening her daggers and talking to Marigold about something.
"Thank the gods you're alright!" exclaimed D.I. Time on seeing that Marigold was alright...and not dead.
Argh, so if Jade kicked a wall they asked if he was okay, but if she kicked a wall it was what? Normal teenage behavior? She huffed and started walking away.
Carsie Rose wrote: "((Annabelle's nonverbally threatened other people though...Just like Jade she's got trust issues and gets defensive))"(Very true...I think they both have issues...)
((That would be nice, cause she's going to so something stupid in about two seconds))
He pictured Annabelle's face in the arena and began circling the dummy, sparring.
Alex was still walking away down the hall. No one had noticed, wow, so surprising. She pulled out her knife and threw it.
((yep. THis is what he does when he's angery he actually does this in the book. Ky's way of dealing with anger is to yell run off and then throw daggers at things and smile at pretending the person is in pain...joking she yells yells maybe crys a little yells some more runs off and then goes off and cuts tree with her daggers)
((I don't know what Alex does yet, but my gut is saying she'll jump and try to forget about everything))
Carsie Rose wrote: ""If it doesn't have magic, what does it have?"Eenin blinked.
"It has..."
Was she asking for a whole exposition on the exports and imports and trade routes and natural resources of his world? Becau..."
"I mean do gods and goddesses exist? Are there other 'creatures' as humans like to call them, like elves, which I am...half, it's complicated, or fairies...Or dragons?" she asked, trying to define what she meant by 'what other things' exist, hopefully it would make sense to him.
He stopped, and looked over at her.
"I'll try not to."
"I'll try not to."
Kara wrote: "He pictured Annabelle's face in the arena and began circling the dummy, sparring."Gwen also walked in, staring at Jade, she had an interest in fighting, so sometimes it was fun to watch someone do it, then she could learn... When he stopped she finally spoke up.
"Sorry to bother you." she began, "but I was wondering...What is this place?"
Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "He pictured Annabelle's face in the arena and began circling the dummy, sparring."
Gwen walked in, staring at Jade, she had an interest in fighting, so sometimes it was fun to watch s..."
He looked over at the other girl.
"Hello.....uh a sparring room I guess."
Gwen walked in, staring at Jade, she had an interest in fighting, so sometimes it was fun to watch s..."
He looked over at the other girl.
"Hello.....uh a sparring room I guess."
Kara wrote: "((yep. THis is what he does when he's angery he actually does this in the book. Ky's way of dealing with anger is to yell run off and then throw daggers at things and smile at pretending the person..."(That honestly feels like something Gwen or D.I. Time would do...as well.)
Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "He pictured Annabelle's face in the arena and began circling the dummy, sparring."Gwen walked in, staring at Jade, she had an interest in fighting, so sometimes it wa..."
Gwen cleared her throat, "I mean this castle , not the room..." she looked over, "you're a very good fighter, I should add."
He blinked at her, before saying.
"Uh, thanks. I don't know what this place is."
"Uh, thanks. I don't know what this place is."
Kara wrote: "He blinked at her, before saying."Uh, thanks. I don't know what this place is.""
"Neither do I, so I was wondering...so I could find a way to get back home." She smiled. "But I suppose we're in this together. You call me 'Gwen' by the way." She reached out her hand to shake.
Carsie Rose wrote: "Eenin blinked."Um..."
Exactly. Exactly like from the old myths and legends.
"No...well, I suppose there are gods or something, for there to be...well, a world."
Eenin frowned. He hadn't ever reall..."
Carsie Rose wrote: "Eenin blinked.
"Um..."
Exactly. Exactly like from the old myths and legends.
"No...well, I suppose there are gods or something, for there to be...well, a world."
Eenin frowned. He hadn't ever reall..."
"Yes, true." replied Annabelle, "a creation story you mean, Ophelia would always talk about, do tend to have the gods creating the world in some way..." She paused looking perplexed at him, "but that was more of a 'yes' or 'no' question rather than you know, a 'maybe' one."
KC | Queen of Cheese | wrote: "Angelina followed and then leaned against the stone brick wall.She checked her nails for a moment, picking off a scab, and then took her wand out of her pocket and twirled it around her fingers as..."
KC | Queen of Cheese | wrote: "Angelina followed and then leaned against the stone brick wall.
She checked her nails for a moment, picking off a scab, and then took her wand out of her pocket and twirled it around her fingers as..."
"That was Marigold." replied Gwen, "She uh, is someone I met here, she was looking for her...father, who she had lost within this place."
"Okay. Hi Alex. I..."
"I'm Annabelle," said the woman, and Eenin returned her scrutinizing gaze, before his eyes just about bugged out of his..."
"Who's your king?" asked Annabelle. "Is it Oberon? Or someone else?" She still used the hand to point the dagger at him, glowing blue as it was. It seemed to frighten him, which was good...
She doubted he was from her world...But she didn't want to completely rule it out.