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message 751: by Quinley (last edited Feb 20, 2022 11:15AM) (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Book wrote: "Alex sighed. "No he didn't we haven't seen her, Jade is just pointing out how this castle is really dangerous and surviving here is.....difficult.""

"Got it!" said D.I. Time.
Annabelle still pointed her dagger at Jade, "do you have any second thoughts about threatening her?" She turned her head in the direction of Ophelia and then back to Jade.


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Jade scowl deepened.
"Why would I kill your daughter idiot? I don't kill children, just stupid hypocrites like you....but I won't...unless you give me a reason to."


message 753: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon ((Flashbacks to Ian punching a wall.....huh, weird that that's where my brain decided to go))


message 754: by Quinley (last edited Feb 20, 2022 11:20AM) (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: "Jade scowl deepened.
"Why would I kill your daughter idiot? I don't kill children, just stupid hypocrites like you....but I won't...unless you give me a reason to.""


"You just said-- also she isn't really a child" added D.I. Time. "She's much older but--"
Annabelle still pointed her dagger at Jade, "ah-hem? Why are you ignoring me?"


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Book wrote: "((Flashbacks to Ian punching a wall.....huh, weird that that's where my brain decided to go))"

((ahahahah))


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Carsie Rose wrote: "((oh dear

Flashbacks to that 'Ian-gets-almost-strangled-to-death-scene'

Jade bebe pls just walllkkk away. Put a zipper on the lipper.))"

((yeah.......see ANGER ISSUESSSS))


message 757: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon Alex pulled put her wand just in case a fight broke out.


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Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Jade scowl deepened.
"Why would I kill your daughter idiot? I don't kill children, just stupid hypocrites like you....but I won't...unless you give me a reason to.""
"You just said-- a..."


"I said she's probably dead. The castle's dangerous." He turned to Annabelle. "Because why not?"


message 759: by Quinley (last edited Feb 20, 2022 11:22AM) (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Book wrote: "Alex pulled put her wand just in case a fight broke out."

"I took it the wrong way, I apologize" replied D.I. Time.

Annabelle made a hand appear out of blue fire and had it take one of her daggers lying on the ground and pointed it at Jade as well.
"Am I really that forgettable" she asked, not sounding insulted but sounded mildly amused.


message 760: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon Alex snorted quietly.


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He raised a sarcastic eyebrow.
"Not really."


message 762: by Quinley (last edited Feb 20, 2022 11:24AM) (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: "He raised a sarcastic eyebrow.
"Not really.""


"Ah, then, as I was saying..." replied Annabelle, pointing both the dagger that was in the blue fire magic hand and in her normal hand at him, "do you regret insulting and threatening Ophelia now?"


message 763: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon Alex quietly pulled put her bow and strung an arrow.


message 764: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon *out


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"Who now? Is that your daughter's name?" He pulled out both daggers, sighing nonchalantly.


message 766: by Quinley (last edited Feb 20, 2022 11:28AM) (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: ""Who now? Is that your daughter's name?" He pulled out both daggers, sighing nonchalantly."

Annabelle moved the dagger in her magic hand closer to Jade, "alright please listen to me! This is not a request for a fight, but a request for you to stop threatening to kill Ophelia! Please stop! If you want a fight to break out than continue as you are, but if you don't...just do as I say"

D.I. Time groaned, "her name is Marigold!"


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Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: ""Who now? Is that your daughter's name?" He pulled out both daggers, sighing nonchalantly."

Annabelle moved the dagger in her magic closer to him, "alright please listen to me! This i..."


"Who is this Ophelia then?" He rubbed the metal cuff on his left wrist.


message 768: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: ""Who now? Is that your daughter's name?" He pulled out both daggers, sighing nonchalantly."

Annabelle moved the dagger in her magic closer to him, "alright please list..."


"You know, you we're just talking to her idiot! She is right here!" Annabelle pointed in the direction of where she was standing. "Why are you doing that?? Just stop!" Both daggers moved closer to him and were on either side of his head threatening to kill him if he hurt Ophelia.


message 769: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon Alex jumped up and raised her wand. "Back off." She warned.


message 770: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Book wrote: "Alex jumped up and raised her wand. "Back off." She warned."

"Only if he backs off!" replied Annabelle.


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Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: ""Who now? Is that your daughter's name?" He pulled out both daggers, sighing nonchalantly."

Annabelle moved the dagger in her magic closer to him, "alrigh..."

Jade raised both arms, blocked her daggers. He quickly kneed his knee into her stomach, and unarmed her in a blink of an eye.
"Okay. I'm so sorry." He walked out of the room, dropping her daggers on his way out. He went into another room, thinking.


message 772: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon Alex sighed. "Jade...."


message 773: by Quinley (last edited Feb 20, 2022 11:36AM) (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: ""Who now? Is that your daughter's name?" He pulled out both daggers, sighing nonchalantly."

Annabelle moved the dagger in her magic closer..."


Annabelle looked around a bit confused. At least no one died, perhaps she shouldn't have gone that far, that was a bit far even for her...She stood up. And picked up her daggers putting them away and put them back where they used to be, one she tied on her leg again.


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He strapped on his chest belt, from his left shoulder to right hip. There were at least 5 daggers, then a dagger on his leg, and a few more around his hip. He took a deep breath, standing up straight, shoulders back.


message 775: by Quinley (last edited Feb 20, 2022 11:42AM) (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: "He strapped on his chest belt, from his left shoulder to right hip. There were at least 5 daggers, then a dagger on his leg, and a few more around his hip. He took a deep breath, standing up straig..."

D.I. Time walked in Jade's direction and stood in the doorway, staring at him and observing what he was doing...He didn't trust him...at all.


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Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) KC | Queen of Cheese | wrote: "Angelina was merely standing in a corner, watching as the fight unraveled out. Then she merely tried to slip out, after Jade, from the shadows, inching her way along the wall, practically invisible..."


Annabelle looked around and back in the direction of Alex, "I don't know how I can trust you, when you appear to be a bunch of criminals..."


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He saw Angelina, and pulled her to his side.
"Hey...you okay? Did they hurt you after I left?" He scowled.


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Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: "He saw Angelina, and pulled her to his side.
"Hey...you okay? Did they hurt you after I left?" He scowled."


" they as in us!" exclaimed Ophelia, "we didn't do anything when you decided to just threaten us! You're the one at fault here!"


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He scowled,
"I know. Everythings my fault 'round here ay?"


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Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: "He scowled,
"I know. Everythings my fault 'round here ay?""


'Yes it is, also why do you care so much about my gods and keep saying they aren't real? What's wrong with you? Do you know how long I've been training to be a priestess do you--" glared Ophelia.

"Ophelia I think that's enough" sighed D.I. Time.


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Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "He scowled,
"I know. Everythings my fault 'round here ay?""

'Yes it is, also why do you care so much about my gods and keep saying they aren't real? What's wrong with you? Do you k..."


"And what do you do as a priestess hm? Stand around and sprinkle holy water on people and damn people who you don't agree with to wherever you want? Hm? Doesn't sound like much to me."


message 782: by Quinley (last edited Feb 20, 2022 11:53AM) (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "He scowled,
"I know. Everythings my fault 'round here ay?""

'Yes it is, also why do you care so much about my gods and keep saying they aren't real? What's wrong with..."


"You seem not to understand, I understand if you don't believe in it, I am not forcing you to. But I am not that kind of person and I will condemn people who I don't agree with. I am a healer, I heal the sick with my magic from the gods whom I worship, and I help those who are in need and need guidance," replied Ophelia.


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Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "He scowled,
"I know. Everythings my fault 'round here ay?""

'Yes it is, also why do you care so much about my gods and keep saying they aren't real? What..."


"Hmph." Is all Jade said. He twirled a dagger around his finger.


message 784: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon Alex laughed out loud suddenly.


message 785: by Quinley (last edited Feb 20, 2022 11:58AM) (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: "He scowled,
"I know. Everythings my fault 'round here ay?""

'Yes it is, also why do you care so much about my gods and keep saying they a..."


"And there really isn't forever, whatever you're talking about where people are condemned. I think you're making terrible assumptions about my religion which aren't true...." replied Ophelia. "...And you're being very ignorant and offensive in general." She exhaled, and glanced over at Alex, "what's so funny?"


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"Well you are very hypocritical and stupid." He smiled.....but there was hate in his eyes.


message 787: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: ""Well you are very hypocritical and stupid." He smiled.....but there was hate in his eyes."

"Why...do you say that?" asked Ophelia, feeling hurt.
D.I. Time listened but didn't say a word.


message 788: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon Alex looked up. "Hmm? Oh....nothing."


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"You stand here and call me guilty of threatening and murder and say that you aren't forcing me to believe what you believe....and yet you just admitted that you condemn people you don't believe in....you threaten me with your so called gods and magical powers. You...ma'am, priestess or not...are a hypocrite."


message 790: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Book wrote: "Alex looked up. "Hmm? Oh....nothing.""

D.I. Time hated these people, they had done nothing...except Annabelle had, but it was out of rage, which he didn't quite understand. Why did she care about Ophelia so much?

"May I ask what we can do to get you to trust us?" he asked, he also tried to conceal how he was feeling towards Jade how dare he attack Annabelle like that.


message 791: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon Alex shrugged. "All of us have suffered, lost people, been lied to, cheated, played with, don't expect us to trust you right away."


message 792: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: ""You stand here and call me guilty of threatening and murder and say that you aren't forcing me to believe what you believe....and yet you just admitted that you condemn people you don't believe in..."

Ophelia bit her lip and didn't say a word, she didn't want...to go on and talk to this person anymore-- she didn't care what he did to her...She just didn't.

She sat on the ground and stared at the wall, she didn't care what he said to her anymore the words were just words...They could be anything...She felt as if she had failed.


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He noticed all sorts of emotions flash across her face, and felt bad.
He knelt down beside her...
"I'm sorry....I shouldn't have said those things." Everything in him said to leave her alone, and that he was right.....but he didn't really mean to hurt her. "I'm sorry..."


message 794: by Quinley (last edited Feb 20, 2022 12:12PM) (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: "He noticed all sorts of emotions flash across her face, and felt bad.
He knelt down beside her...
"I'm sorry....I shouldn't have said those things." Everything in him said to leave her alone, and ..."


Ophelia looked over at him, she didn't say a word for a moment. She wiped away her tears, at first she didn't want to forgive him, he had insulted her, threatened her, but eventually she gave in "it's...alright, I forgive you."


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"I..." He bit his tongue...dang it.. "I have some..er...issues with anger and I can say and do things without thinking." He rubbed the back of his neck, and stood up.


message 796: by Quinley (last edited Feb 20, 2022 12:13PM) (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: ""I..." He bit his tongue...dang it.. "I have some..er...issues with anger and I can say and do things without thinking." He rubbed the back of his neck, and stood up."

"It's alright." replied Ophelia, standing up "I understand, I knew someone who was like that and I tried to not judge him..." She held her hand out, "want to just be friends and move on?"


message 797: by Book - Dragon (new)

Book -  Dragon Alex was mad that she'd been ignored, although she was the youngest one there.


message 798: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Book wrote: "Alex was mad that she'd been ignored, although she was the youngest one there."

Annabelle walked over to where the rest of the group was and glanced over at Alex.


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Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: ""I..." He bit his tongue...dang it.. "I have some..er...issues with anger and I can say and do things without thinking." He rubbed the back of his neck, and stood up."

"It's alright."..."


Taking a breath, he cautiously shook her hand.
"Sure." He looked around, trying to find Angelina.


message 800: by Quinley (new)

Quinley (Phoenix_Bluefeather) (phoenix_bluefeather) Kara wrote: "Quinley wrote: "Kara wrote: ""I..." He bit his tongue...dang it.. "I have some..er...issues with anger and I can say and do things without thinking." He rubbed the back of his neck, and stood up."
..."


She smiled and shook his hand, "good."


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