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Have a 113k YA fantasy, looking to swap.
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Hey Nic, you aren't accepting messages so I had to send you a friend request.
We can start with three chapters. I have a teen adventure, a empath gets his sight restored on the corporate lunar colony and tries to make a life there. scottrhinebooks at gmail.com
Fourteen year old Marri can create fire. If the magic-wielding soldiers that control the city find out, she’ll be shipped off to fight in their endless war. She has hidden her abilities for six years, but time is almost up - at fifteen, she’ll be eligible to enroll in the Magi’s program for mundane students, and her mother has made it clear that Marri will attend.
She will travel south and find her father, a soldier in exile, who rides with a famous outlaw known as the Wildstar. She has a plan, but that plan is dashed when the leader of the occupying force, her own aunt, pays a visit to inform her that she has been admitted early - she doesn’t have two months. She has two days. Worse, news soon arrives that the Wildstar has been captured, and brings with it an unexpected discovery. Her father doesn’t ride with the Wildstar, they are one and the same.
Marri’s plan fails, but inside their school she discovers that some of her fears might have been unfounded. She must stand up to her aunt while not endangering her new friends, and still find a way to rescue her father.