Looking for Beta Readers for The Myth of Krisodoris

[Arjun]

Story Blurb: Periodically throughout Lumise's history the byzantine factions of the city, (or some significant amount of the factions), becomes collectively fixated on the Great Game. Sometimes the goal of the Great Game is to acquire an object of arcane importance, sometimes it would be a position. Other times, The goal is a secret known to a few. This is the case with this Great Game. At first, it was merely known that Lord Octvener had hidden something in Lumise before he left for the Ten-Pen Peaks. But it was not long before players realized that what he left was the largest vault seen on either side of the Ten-Pen. When the vast scope of his embezzlement, rumored to be close to half a billion gold pieces, the pursuit became more frenzied. But few knew of, or were interested in the proceedings of this Grand Game. Six such destinies would become entwined one morning in a crowded bar Beginning a tale so sprawling and epic that wand will never be known again.

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