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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

Basically we write a story one line at a time. Like so:

I dropped the coffee mug, and it shattered on the ground.

I went to clean up the mess, but before I could, my father barged in, his expression told me he was NOT happy.

He wasn't. He yelled, about the coffee mug, about his stressful life, all of it.

He made me feel bad for him. He didn't deserve something like this. I wanted to make it up to him....


And so on


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

I'll start:

I turned my head sharply, because I thought I heard something, hiding in the shadows of the room's corner.


message 3: by Artemis (new)

Artemis ✨ (artemis_goddessofthemoon) | 2 comments the air chilled, my skin prickled. a lead like feeling filled me. I couldn't quite place it but something was wrong


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I couldn't bear it. Was something there to hurt me? "Hello?" I called in a small voice.


message 5: by Artemis (new)

Artemis ✨ (artemis_goddessofthemoon) | 2 comments "good evening" a voice answered.
I could feel my blood drain.
because I knew I was alone


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

I went still, except for my hand, that reached for a small knife on the counter. '"Who are you?" I called in my most confident voice, though even to me it sounded weak.


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

"I am someone you might know, actually, no, you know who I am,"


message 8: by Lita (new)

Lita (lita_books) | 46 comments "I don't know you" "You do but you don't know you do."


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

"I am not quite positive right now."


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

The voice laughed, "Remember me, remember. I've always been with you, child. Just not in the way you think."


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Unsure of what to do, I back away slowly


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

His laugh slowly died, and I felt my spine go ice-cold. That creep was staring at me. I took another trembling step back, away from the talking figure.


message 13: by Lita (new)

Lita (lita_books) | 46 comments But he was folowing my steps. I staretd going faster.


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

I was running. I don't know when I had started, but all the sudden I was racing to the door, a knife in my hand, hot tears streaming down my face.


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I sprinted as hard as I could, and just kept on going.


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

The knife slipped from my hand, and then I looked down, and I finally realized I was in a alleyway, all alone.


message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

My breath was sharp and my eyes were wide. I had no idea what I had just done.


message 18: by Hailey (new)

Hailey Brock (haileysdigest) | 4 comments A shadowed figure crawled it’s way around the corner. It’s hunched back preventing me from seeing its face, though I wasn’t sure I wanted to.


message 19: by [deleted user] (new)

A slight whine of fear escaped my mouth. I reached over and picked up the knife again, my shaking hands pointing it wearily at the figure. "W-who a-are you-u?"


message 20: by [deleted user] (new)

Your worst fear........................


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

"I-I don't-t u-unders-stand-d," I whimpered, feeling the tears pour down my cheeks again.


message 22: by [deleted user] (new)

I know you don't


message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

"Then explain-n i-it to m-me?"


message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

No


message 25: by Dragobreak (new)

Dragobreak | 1 comments Shadows flickered across the wall, I can almost hear them laughing at me.


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

I feel as though I don't exist and question my very existence


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

the voice screams
"WHATCHA GONNA DO?"


message 28: by Kara (new)

Kara (ladykarasgmailcom) I stood up tall, figuring that if this thing is gonna try to take me down, I was gonna go down fighting for a change.


message 29: by [deleted user] (new)

As I stand my fear slowly fades away from me.


message 30: by Kara (new)

Kara (ladykarasgmailcom) Still having the knife clenched tightly in my hand, I yelled out, "I'm not going run anymore, come here and face me", though I wished my voice wasn't so shaky.


message 31: by [deleted user] (new)

"Fine" the figure said
As he came out of the darkness I immediately knew who it was.


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

The shadows still cloaking his eyes, he steps forward.


message 33: by [deleted user] (new)

I gasped


message 34: by Ayesha (new)

Ayesha the Great 🍉 (Barbie's Version) (ayeshathegreat) | 28 comments Shaggy blond hair, wideset blue eyes, lanky stature... I was looking at myself.


message 35: by [deleted user] (new)

I wanted to say something, but there were no words coming out of my mouth


message 36: by Ayesha (new)

Ayesha the Great 🍉 (Barbie's Version) (ayeshathegreat) | 28 comments "Recognize me?"
He wore my smile as he looked at me, but it had a knife-sharp, icy edge to it. It was the smile of a wildcat that had successfully cornered its prey.


message 37: by [deleted user] (new)

I wanted to run, but I felt oddly drawn to him. His appearance, his eyes, even the knife in his hands.


message 38: by Ayesha (new)

Ayesha the Great 🍉 (Barbie's Version) (ayeshathegreat) | 28 comments Why did he look exactly like me? What was this version of me doing here, in front of me?


message 39: by [deleted user] (new)

I was going to ask him, but the sound of a thud echoed through the hall. I shuddered.


message 40: by Ayesha (new)

Ayesha the Great 🍉 (Barbie's Version) (ayeshathegreat) | 28 comments "Why won't you speak?" he demanded, voice bristling with impatience. "We are the same person. Do you not want to know why I am here?"
I nodded tentatively, and managed to choke out a weak answer. Yes.


message 41: by [deleted user] (new)

I was trembling real bad now.


message 42: by Ayesha (new)

Ayesha the Great 🍉 (Barbie's Version) (ayeshathegreat) | 28 comments "Good," he said, looking both sides before continuing, "But we can't talk here. Too many people. Let's head over to your apartment. Street 7, District 19, if I remember correct?"
"How do you know my address?" I had found my voice, and my courage with it.
"As cliched as it may sound," he answered with a huff, grabbing my hand and dragging me across the lobby. "I am you from the future."


message 43: by [deleted user] (new)

If I was going to be like this in the future, then I didn't think I wanted to live, I thought.


message 44: by [deleted user] (new)

Every good thing about the now me has disappeared. The easy smile, the innocent eyes... this stranger seems so cold, so deadly...


message 45: by [deleted user] (new)

He dragged me across the room, with no pity or regret for his past self. I dare not think that this will be me some years later


message 46: by [deleted user] (new)

He throws me into a chair and leans over me with a hard, menacing stare. He looks me in the eyes and in a gravelly voice says, "Where is she?? What did you do with her? I've been searching for years and I know it all comes back to you!"

He throws an accusing finger my way before grabbing another chair and chucking it across the parlor in pure hatred.


message 47: by [deleted user] (new)

"I-I-I don't know what you are talking about." I replied, though I thought I knew something.


message 48: by Ayesha (new)

Ayesha the Great 🍉 (Barbie's Version) (ayeshathegreat) | 28 comments He glared at me, murderous gaze boring into my own as he scoured for a lie. He looked past the panic, confusion and traces of anger in my eyes before sighing as he stepped away.
"Of course you wouldn't know her. You are from the past. I suppose I'll have to fill you in, and hope that you remember."


message 49: by [deleted user] (new)

"Do it quick. I have got homework to complete at home". I tried to sound confident, but I kinda choked on the last words. He noticed it.
"Don't think I don't know you well. I am you". He leaned over me. "Any word now from your mouth and I will cut one of your toes. So, shut up and listen." He was becoming impatient now.


message 50: by [deleted user] (new)

((me over here thinking dang unable to form a coherent thought))

"You know what.. NO. If you have all your toes.. which I'm assuming you do, and you're me from the future than this already happened to you... me... whatever, so you're not going to hurt me! Now get on with your stupid story that my brain psychologically blocked me out of... but sure GO ON!"


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