Hi! I’m looking for a critique partner for my first novel: Run and Hide (80K). It is the first of a trilogy. Its genre is Action with romance. Each book in the trilogy will focus on a separate couple. Run and Hide will introduce the other characters that will be the focus of books two and three.
As said before, this is my first novel. I’ve self-edited this three times, and I know there’s still a lot more work to be done. I’m looking for any feedback but specifically whether the idea, plot, and characters work. I am willing to read anything, but I will not read erotica. Please email me at anhusler@gmail.com if you’re interested in reading it. Thank you.
Growing up, Ivan Kakovich always heard his parents died protecting their intelligence agency, the International Specialists Organization (ISO). But when he finds out the truth about their deaths, he knows he can no longer stay. Reaching out to a foreign intelligence agency, he bargains his knowledge of ISO for protection.
Wealthy, entitled, and expected to uphold appearances, Ashley Dobrescu fights for her own path. Shunning the jewels, ballgowns, and dressage lessons, she joins the United Republic Intelligence Agency (URIA), quickly rising as a top agent and pilot. When a call for protection in exchange for knowledge comes, URIA sends Ashley and her team to get the asset home.
Betrayal, deceit, and lies war with trust as Ivan and Ashley work together to escape. As they’re on the run, they learn how to trust and even how to love.
As said before, this is my first novel. I’ve self-edited this three times, and I know there’s still a lot more work to be done. I’m looking for any feedback but specifically whether the idea, plot, and characters work. I am willing to read anything, but I will not read erotica. Please email me at anhusler@gmail.com if you’re interested in reading it. Thank you.
Growing up, Ivan Kakovich always heard his parents died protecting their intelligence agency, the International Specialists Organization (ISO). But when he finds out the truth about their deaths, he knows he can no longer stay. Reaching out to a foreign intelligence agency, he bargains his knowledge of ISO for protection.
Wealthy, entitled, and expected to uphold appearances, Ashley Dobrescu fights for her own path. Shunning the jewels, ballgowns, and dressage lessons, she joins the United Republic Intelligence Agency (URIA), quickly rising as a top agent and pilot. When a call for protection in exchange for knowledge comes, URIA sends Ashley and her team to get the asset home.
Betrayal, deceit, and lies war with trust as Ivan and Ashley work together to escape. As they’re on the run, they learn how to trust and even how to love.