Looking for beta readers for my Dystopian thriller, Digital Prison

[Jordan]

Hi readers,

I am looking for a fresh set of betas of my manuscript. I have done quite a few re-writes and so I really want to understand how good/bad the plot, story etc is on a fundamental level

The first three chapters are here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1I...

The blurb is here

It's 2084. Quill Killian's family business is confiscated by a mega-corp. Left with crippling debts, he is classified as a Burden to Society and finds himself enrolled in the government's euthanasia program. His life will end in four weeks; unless he can find a fortune.

Aya St Vincent is a staunch member of the Robespierre; a left-wing protest group whose aim is to return America to Communism. She sees Quill's predicament as a way to achieve her goals and offers her help.

They find themselves in the centre of the bloody game to determine the next American President and with it, the lives of millions.

NB, I am only looking for beta readers who have complete fluency with English

[Sue]

Jordan, Hi. I note you are not accepting messages. I am a beta reader and proofreader. I only proofread in US English, but I read all English variants. My fluency is excellent - it's my native tongue and while I very rarely win at Scrabble against my lawyer husband I give him a solid run for his money.

Your blurb sounds like something I would be interested in, but your link to the first three chapters doesn't work.

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[Alyssa]

Hey there!
I would love to be considered. My turnaround rate is less than 7 days and this is one of my favorite genres.
Please send me a message on fivrr if you’re interested!

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[Abii]

Hi Jordan ,
Your novel sounds great. Do you have an email address I can contact you on?

[Archivist Reads]

Hi Jordan!
If you're still looking for beta readers I would love to read your book. The blurb sounds very interesting and I have worked on many dystopian and grim futurism novels so I think I could offer you some useful insight as a fan of this genre. I would be able to read your book within about 3 to 5 days depending on the length. You can contact me using direct messages on here or through my email tealanna984@gmail.com (I usually respond to emails quicker).

Regards, Mars

[L.E.]

Hi Jordan!

My name is Lauren! I'm very interested in beta reading for you. This is one of my favorite genres to work with.

Here is my website if you are interested in learning more about my services: https://laurenelmorewrites.wordpress....

You can contact me by email at: lauren.elmore.09@gmail.com

Congrats on your novel, and I wish you the best of luck in all of your future writing endeavors!

Best wishes,
Lauren

[Dylan]

Feel free to email me at dylanalpers@gmail.com - I've read the provided 3 chapters, and I'm interested in beta reading the rest!

[M.T.]

Hi Jordan,
If you're still looking for betas, I specialize in science fiction/fantasy and would be glad to help out. You can find more about me at my site https://kitnkabookle.com and email me to chat at mary@kitnkabookle.com.