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Nash (all too unwell)
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Jun 27, 2021 12:18AM

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OMGGGG I JUST WROTE A TEST ON THAT TODAY AND IT IS SO BORING!!!

OMGGGG I JUST WROTE A TEST ON THAT TODAY AND IT IS SO BORING!!!"
Indeed the epitome of boring :(

All my friends who picked Geo for GCSE hated it too XD

Yess ahh"
my geography teacher gave us long google docs to fill out along with resources to use to help us fill it out :/ It could be fun, but also rather annoying :(((

im very confused because i dont know what tvd is lol

NAd i told it was good(it was)
Then i asked if she wanted like any feedback on what to change
Since we always do that here when we share we ask fr feedbacks right?

If this is a short story da... it's okay but I think u want to write more and more
so I suggest u spread the info throughout the story
the best thing u could do in the first chp is lay a foundation. show who she is what her ordinary life is like instead of talking abt every aspect of her character. U can maybe start with second para as u start with the riding in a car and that would be a good start
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