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message 51: by [deleted user] (new)

(are we allowed to do one twice in a row? oh well...)

"What does this have to do with us all dying? And if I am a fairy, where are my wings?" Ayla said, crossing her arms.


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jillian ౨ৎ (jilluminatixxxv) Conifeir looked down at Ayla, his gray eyes glistening in the golden light of the forest. A mischievous teased the sides of his lips but he remained silent, denying her an answer.


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(DANG IT GUYS WE KEEP ON SAYING AYLA ajk;lsdakj;ldj;kl i just remembered its aLya T_T)

Alya huffed. "You really do like making things difficult, don't you?"
"Maybe if you shut up for once you'd get some answers. Anyways, I should probably explain a little bit about Briar's Haven. You may think you've been on the run for a few hours, but you've actually been in the haven for four days. The haven works different for those with human blood."


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jillian ౨ৎ (jilluminatixxxv) I huffed. "I thought you said I was a fairy."
Conifeir chuckled, mischief radiating off of his like warmth from the sun. "I never confirmed you were fairy."
"Nor did you confirm I was fully human. You have human blood, but you aren't human."


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Mango (mango_lord) | 650 comments Alya huffed, "So what, my insides are human and my outsides are fairy? That doesn't make any sense, where are my wings?"


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Conifeir dramatically slapped his forehead and sighed. "You're a half blood, Alya! Really, you are a slow one! Your mother was a fairy that fell for a human."
Alya smirked. "So my parents had "forbidden love"? This is getting interesting...tell me more."


message 57: by Mango (new)

Mango (mango_lord) | 650 comments Conifeir groaned, "It was the most cheesiest love story of all. Moving on, we need you to settle our conflict. Are you skilled in any weaponry? Oh wait, of course you're not! You're just a worthless human."


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"I'm fighting this Briar person now? What do you think I am, a soldier? And also, if my mother is royalty, then aren't I a princess? Either way, I have no reason to believe you. My parents are alive, sadly, and not fairies."


message 59: by jillian ౨ৎ (new)

jillian ౨ৎ (jilluminatixxxv) Conifeir dramatically rolled his eyes. "Your real parents are dead, half-blood. Gosh you really do have the mind of a human." Alya furrowed her brow.
"That is no way to treat your queen." she said sarcastically.
"You are not queen yet! You are still merely princess." Conifeir grumbled. "Oh, and don't expect me to treat you like royalty, either. Not until you can fight Briar and take back your throne."


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Alya's amber eyes lit up and a wicked grin filled her face. "When I'm queen I'll make sure to humiliate you."
"I thought you didn't believe in this "fairy tale"?" Conifeir cocked his head, bemused.
"Not yet. Not until you show me something actually proves my life is a lie and my parents are somehow fakes even though my "doppelganger parents" and I look far too alike for my liking."


message 61: by jillian ౨ৎ (new)

jillian ౨ৎ (jilluminatixxxv) Conifeir's lips teased at a smile. "All that information will come to you, princess. I have told you nothing but the truth."
Alya groaned her displeasure. "If you aren't going to give me a straight answer, can you at least tell me how to kill Briar?"
Conifeir grinned. "I thought you would never ask."


message 62: by [deleted user] (last edited Apr 20, 2021 07:02AM) (new)

(the end of chapter 1?)

"What am I supposed to be looking at? A rock?" Alya said as she walked carefully around the towering mound of stone, eyeing it suspiciously.
"It's not just any rock! In fact, it's not even a rock at all."
"Mhm. It looks like a rock to me."


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jillian ౨ৎ (jilluminatixxxv) Alya kicked the large rock. To her surprise, Conifeir was right. A huge, stone gray snake uncoiled and whipped around to face her. A foul hiss escaped it.
Alya screamed, and jumped back. Conifeir chuckled, flashing his white teeth. "WHAT AM I SUPPOSED TO DO WITH THAT?!" she exclaimed. He handed her a sword with a blue-gray iron hilt.
"Kill it."


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The snake hissed as it peered at her, gray scales glinting in the light. Alya held the sword in her hand unsteadily and backed away, crying out, "W-what...is that thing?"


message 65: by jillian ౨ৎ (new)

jillian ౨ৎ (jilluminatixxxv) "Worry not what is, princess. Worry that it will kill you if you don't kill it first." Conifeir said, clearly enjoying himself.


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As if waiting for him to say that, the snake lurched toward Alya. She screamed and swung her sword wildly, not managing a single hit on the stone monster.


message 67: by jillian ౨ৎ (new)

jillian ౨ৎ (jilluminatixxxv) The snake whirled around and chased Alya for at least ten minutes. Conifeir laughed uncontrollably the whole time.
He eventually tired of this nonsense and drew his own sword with a matching hilt. "Alright, princess. Since you have proved you are useless with a sword, your lesson is finished.'' He pushed Alya out of his way and shoved his sword through the roof of the snake's mouth.


message 68: by Mango (new)

Mango (mango_lord) | 650 comments Alya scrambled away from the corpse, gasping. She huffed and straightened up, "Give me a dagger and you'll wish you were dead."


message 69: by jillian ౨ৎ (new)

jillian ౨ৎ (jilluminatixxxv) Conifeir threw his head back and laughed. "You?! A dagger?" He smiled devilishly. "As you wish princess." he said, tossing her a dagger. He readied himself in a battle state, and lifted his sword. "Let's see what you can do."


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Alya gritted her teeth and took a stance. He came hurtling towards her, sword aimed for her heart. Alya gasped and ducked, swiftly moving the dagger toward his thigh. Conifeir let out a yelp of pain and shrunk into his tiny fairy form, clutching his leg.


message 71: by jillian ౨ৎ (new)

jillian ౨ৎ (jilluminatixxxv) "You idiot!" he shrieked. "I wasn't actually going to do anything to you!"
Alya cackled with glee. "Maybe you won't underestimate me next time." Conifier fluttered over to a flat patch of land and expanded to human size. Alya leans in to examine her damage. But the thing she saw shocked her more.
His blood was a deep, shiny purple.


message 72: by Mango (last edited Apr 20, 2021 09:27AM) (new)

Mango (mango_lord) | 650 comments Conifeir grumbled, "Well done, Alya. Guess you are of some use. But look! Whenever metal that's not silver touches my blood it turns purple and it gets contaminated."

Alya scoffed, "Ah now who's the wimp?"


message 73: by [deleted user] (last edited Apr 20, 2021 09:50AM) (new)

"Fairies have horrible immune systems. It's not my fault," Conifeir huffed.
"You're right. Some are just born weak."


message 74: by jillian ౨ৎ (new)

jillian ౨ৎ (jilluminatixxxv) Conifeir's glare could have cut through the toughest metal. "I could die now, Alya."
His response caught her off guard. "I...I um,-" Alya stammered. "I'm sorry, I guess." she mumbled. Conifeir's facial expression softened. Silently, he pulled out a silvery potion and poured a few drops on the wound. It, miraculously, healed in a minute.


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Mango (mango_lord) | 650 comments (haha we all replied at the same time lol)


message 76: by [deleted user] (new)

(no i meant- i meant the other one- okay now im confused)


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(whatever let's just try again mango you can do it)


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(wait should we delete mine or jillians)


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(also is this weird but im starting to kind of ship alya and conifeir together sdflkjj;aj;kld)


message 80: by Mango (last edited Apr 20, 2021 09:57AM) (new)

Mango (mango_lord) | 650 comments (wait what- ok sure)

Alya's eyes widened, "What the heck is that?"
Conifeir replied gravely, "Moonberry serum. Even though it heals, it always comes with a price."
"What's the price?"
"I don't know, last time it was no food for my wife. But the more you use, the more horrible the price is. Luckily you just gave me a scratch, but we have yet to see what the price is."


message 81: by Mango (new)

Mango (mango_lord) | 650 comments alice仙境 wrote: "(also is this weird but im starting to kind of ship alya and conifeir together sdflkjj;aj;kld)"

(oops...I gave him a gf lmaoo)


dagger [ain't that a kick in the head] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) Mango wrote: "alice仙境 wrote: "(also is this weird but im starting to kind of ship alya and conifeir together sdflkjj;aj;kld)"

(oops...I gave him a gf lmaoo)"


(love triangle in which alya and the girlfriend get together in the end)


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Mango (mango_lord) | 650 comments ƑìɾҽƒӀվ | Be Gay Do Crime wrote: "Mango wrote: "alice仙境 wrote: "(also is this weird but im starting to kind of ship alya and conifeir together sdflkjj;aj;kld)"

(oops...I gave him a gf lmaoo)"

(love triangle in which alya and the ..."


(AYYY that sounds awesome XD)


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"You have a wife?! Just how old are you?" Alya looked away, repulsed.


dagger [ain't that a kick in the head] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) "Aw, why so disgusted? You jealous, human?" Conifier's grim expression dropped for a moment, replaced by a mischievous grin.


message 86: by Mango (new)

Mango (mango_lord) | 650 comments Alya's face turned red, "Why would I be jealous of someone as annoying as you?"


message 87: by dagger [ain't that a kick in the head] (last edited Apr 20, 2021 09:59AM) (new)

dagger [ain't that a kick in the head] (aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh) "Because I'm pretty," He said simply, clearly taking delight in her discomfort.


message 88: by Mango (new)

Mango (mango_lord) | 650 comments Alya groaned loudly, "What the heck man? Do you want me to stab you with the dagger again?"


message 89: by jillian ౨ৎ (new)

jillian ౨ৎ (jilluminatixxxv) (Sorry for the confusion earlier, we are replied at the same time.)

Conifeir set the serum beside him and grinned. "You have a dagger, I have a serum. Give me your best shot, your highness."
Alya threw herself at him, not daring to let him doubt her abilities again. Conifeir simply sat, clearly giving up. His face looked so innocent. She stopped herself, and realized what she felt for Conifeir...


message 90: by Mango (new)

Mango (mango_lord) | 650 comments Alya shook her head, what the heck was wrong with her? Conifeir was married.

Conifeir smirked, "Go on."
Alya shook her head again, and stepped back, "Never mind that."


message 91: by jillian ౨ৎ (new)

jillian ౨ৎ (jilluminatixxxv) Conifeir grinned, watching as Alya paced around, turning her dagger in her hands.
"You know, princess...maybe I haven't been completley honest with you."


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Alya veered her eyes towards him, but didn't dare look up. She was afraid he'd see her blushing.


message 93: by Mango (new)

Mango (mango_lord) | 650 comments Conifeir gave a smile, "I'm not married, I am only dating. I am forbidden to marry anyone because...I am royalty too."


message 94: by andrea (last edited Apr 20, 2021 11:01AM) (new)

andrea hartmann (andrea_h111) | 1446 comments Alya gasped, rendered speechless. Conifeir smirked, moving his tongue to the roof of his mouth in such a way that made her insides heat up. She wasn't used to feeling this way. Her vow almost permitted her from having these sorts of feelings, especially towards an opposing royal. But now...

(I'd just like to say I am SO HAPPY that I get the credit for the main character's name)


message 95: by Mango (new)

Mango (mango_lord) | 650 comments Alya shook this feeling off. What the heck was wrong with her? As much as she liked Conifeir, she had more important things to do.

(Haha, you should be! It's a great name :))


message 96: by jillian ౨ৎ (new)

jillian ౨ৎ (jilluminatixxxv) Alya felt hopeful. "So, can you only marry royals?" she asked, not daring to let her peculiar feelings show.
Conifeir nodded, but remained silent. He start to examine Alya, walking around her in a circle. His gray eyes glistened gold under the light of the afternoon sun.


message 97: by andrea (last edited Apr 20, 2021 11:08AM) (new)

andrea hartmann (andrea_h111) | 1446 comments "A royal, huh..." Alya stated, trying not to look phased by that revelation. She noticed Conifier begin to check her up and her mouth tensed. This...was this what she wanted? No. She had priorities. "Well...I think I should be off now. By any chance...you wouldn't happen know the whereabouts of my brother, would you? Willus? Could you at least tell me that?"


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"Willus? I don't keep track of mortals, dear. But I might make an exception for you, you being a princess and all. I'll see what I an find."


message 99: by andrea (new)

andrea hartmann (andrea_h111) | 1446 comments She was never one for flights of fancy or faerie tales, but Alya liked the sound of that word. Princess. She was a princess.


message 100: by Mango (new)

Mango (mango_lord) | 650 comments As Conifeir walked away, Alya said, "Wait, may I please have the dagger so I can train?"


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