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[B]

i have written random paras. still not sure of the order.

[fish]

AAAAAAA IM SO EXCITED <333

[ananya ྀི]

YAAASSS BHAVYAAA SHARE UR SONG<3

[B]

Eden wrote: "AAAAAAA IM SO EXCITED <333"

its not good

[Unknown]

Yes, I’m interested too !!!

[fish]

Bhavya why are you saying it's not good :(( you're already letting yourself down before finishing the piece

[B]

song based on my fav book Letters to the Lost


Do you see the picture?
It means a lot to me.
It’s an entire mixture
Of feelings and agony

Ooooh It started off as ‘me too’,
but now it's getting out of hand.
Am I betraying her by doing this with you?
I do not understand.

I’m writing the words on paper,
It's so much easier to say than to your face
I feel like such a traitor
Is this all a special case?

Ooooh It started off as ‘me too’,
but now it's getting out of hand.
Am I betraying her by doing this with you?
I do not understand.

Each time I say I’ll stop
But something in me does not agree
[insert line i still need to think of]
Was this how you felt, when you hit the tree?

Ooooh It started off as ‘me too’,
but now it's getting out of hand.
Am I betraying her by doing this with you?
I do not understand.

We are such polar apart
Yet we are united with grief
You're fascinated with cars
And I’m interested in photographs

Ooooh It started off as ‘me too’,
but now it's getting out of hand.
Am I betraying her by doing this with you?
I do not understand.

Hmmm i have my own demons
I keep them hidden very well
[insert line i need to think of]
Everyone else thinks i am an utter rebel

Ooooh It started off as ‘me too’,
but now it's getting out of hand.
Am I betraying her by doing this with you?
I do not understand.

Ooooh It started off as ‘me too’,
but now it's getting out of hand.
Am I betraying her by doing this with you?
I’m still doing it, consequences be damned.

[B]

Bhavya wrote: "i have written random paras. still not sure of the order."

keep that in mind

[B]

Eden wrote: "Bhavya why are you saying it's not good :(( you're already letting yourself down before finishing the piece"

aah i have never written a song before 👀

[fish]

IT'S GOOD

[B]

me waiting for feedback 👀

[fish]

is this juliet???

[Unknown]

WOW ! THAT’S SERIOUSLY GOOD !!
😍😍

[B]

Eden wrote: "is this juliet???"

yes most of it. though the 'Hmmm i have my own demons (...) rebel' is declan. i still need to write more paras from his pov.

[fish]

what would the melody be? if you're going to sing it? IT'S GOOD but the second verses kept being repeated, you should like add some verse 1, bridge, chorus etc.. just a suggestion tho!

[ananya ྀི]

'Tis good Bhavyaaaa

[B]

i put some references from the book. like the grief uniting us is a quote, as well as the 'me too' thing. and the 'am i betraying her' is juliet about her mom. (hoping someone caught on)

[B]

Eden wrote: "IT'S GOOD"

THANK YOU

[B]

Eden wrote: "what would the melody be? if you're going to sing it? IT'S GOOD but the second verses kept being repeated, you should like add some verse 1, bridge, chorus etc.. just a suggestion tho!"

yes this till needs lots more work. i will probably sing and upload on my yt channel. :)

[Unknown]

Bhavya wrote: "i put some references from the book. like the grief uniting us is a quote, as well as the 'me too' thing. and the 'am i betraying her' is juliet about her mom. (hoping someone caught on)"

Yes !! I got that.
Though it’s been a while since I read the book.

[B]

Ananya ♡ wrote: "'Tis good Bhavyaaaa"

thank you ananyaa

[B]

Unknown wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "i put some references from the book. like the grief uniting us is a quote, as well as the 'me too' thing. and the 'am i betraying her' is juliet about her mom. (hoping someone caught..."

how did you find the book?

[fish]

so devastated when we found out about what really happened about her mom. I felt so betrayed dksjbdnd

[Unknown]

Bhavya wrote: "Unknown wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "i put some references from the book. like the grief uniting us is a quote, as well as the 'me too' thing. and the 'am i betraying her' is juliet about her mom. (hopin..."

It’s good. The ending was a bit rushed.

[Unknown]

Eden wrote: "so devastated when we found out about what really happened about her mom. I felt so betrayed dksjbdnd"

Yeah, that part.
But I loved when later (view spoiler)[ she reconciled with her dad, the one who was truly with her (hide spoiler)]

[ananya ྀི]

Bhavya wrote: "Eden wrote: "what would the melody be? if you're going to sing it? IT'S GOOD but the second verses kept being repeated, you should like add some verse 1, bridge, chorus etc.. just a suggestion tho!..."

YOU HAVE A YT CHANNEL WHERE??? LINK ITT

[B]

Eden wrote: "so devastated when we found out about what really happened about her mom. I felt so betrayed dksjbdnd"

exactly

[ananya ྀི]

Bhavya wrote: "Eden wrote: "what would the melody be? if you're going to sing it? IT'S GOOD but the second verses kept being repeated, you should like add some verse 1, bridge, chorus etc.. just a suggestion tho!..."

YOU HAVE A YT CHANNEL WHERE??? LINK ITT

[B]

Unknown wrote: "Eden wrote: "so devastated when we found out about what really happened about her mom. I felt so betrayed dksjbdnd"

Yeah, that part.
But I loved when later [spoilers removed]"

i loved that bit too

[ananya ྀི]

Bhavya wrote: "Eden wrote: "what would the melody be? if you're going to sing it? IT'S GOOD but the second verses kept being repeated, you should like add some verse 1, bridge, chorus etc.. just a suggestion tho!..."

YOU HAVE A YT CHANNEL WHERE??? LINK ITT

[Unknown]

Ananya ♡ wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Eden wrote: "what would the melody be? if you're going to sing it? IT'S GOOD but the second verses kept being repeated, you should like add some verse 1, bridge, chorus etc.. just a ..."

You do .??
I want to know too !!

[B]

Ananya ♡ wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Eden wrote: "what would the melody be? if you're going to sing it? IT'S GOOD but the second verses kept being repeated, you should like add some verse 1, bridge, chorus etc.. just a ..."

i have not uploaded anything there yet. its in my profile. gr won't let me link.

[Ishika]

Bhavya wowwwwwww

[B]

Ishika wrote: "Bhavya wowwwwwww"

thank you. :)
any feedback?

[Nash (all too unwell)]

Bhavya wrote: "song based on my fav book Letters to the Lost


Do you see the picture?
It means a lot to me.
It’s an entire mixture
Of feelings and agony

Ooooh It started off as ‘me too’,
but no..."

Love it❤️❤️❤️

[fish]

I really like the family stuff in lttl. I don't really care about declan tho, I am so sorry T.T

[Ishika]

Each time I say I’ll stop
But something in me does not agree
Now I'm stuck and I don't know if I'll ever get free
Was this how you felt, when you hit the tree?

[Ishika]

Maybe you could add that line? I'm just suggesting

[B]

Ishika wrote: "Each time I say I’ll stop
But something in me does not agree
Now I'm stuck and I don't know if I'll ever get free
Was this how you felt, when you hit the tree?"

i love this. only problem is that its a different rhyming scheme.

[B]

@Nashita
thank you
@Eden
i love everything bout the book so sad you don't like declan 😢

[Ishika]

Bhavya wrote: "Ishika wrote: "Each time I say I’ll stop
But something in me does not agree
Now I'm stuck and I don't know if I'll ever get free
Was this how you felt, when you hit the tree?"

i love this. only pr..."

Hmm you're right

[B]

we need to think of something that rhymes with 'stop'

[George]

mop

[fish]

I think I was into the family stuffs that time that's why I didn't like declan or anything abt romance (ب_ب)

[fish]

also, you can rhyme "drop" too if you wanna make it work

[Ishika]

Each time I say I’ll stop
But something in me does not agree
It feels like falling down straight from the top
Was this how you felt, when you hit the tree?

[Ishika]

Hmmm i have my own demons
I keep them hidden very well
No one ever tried to fix them
They think i am an utter rebel

[B]

@ishika these are amazing! thank you ❤❤

[B]

i am writing my review for the bronzed beats. i wrote 4 paras, but i need to sleep now so i will probably write it tom.

[B]

Bhavya wrote: "i am writing my review for the bronzed beats. i wrote 4 paras, but i need to sleep now so i will probably write it tom."

every time i think of this book i feel sad at the wasted potential