Chapters 1 -10

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[Júpiter]

I quite like this so far!
At first I expected a ghost story and got excited for it. There's still time for it to be ghosts, but in any case it's touching on that mood that I like.
I find Angela kind of awkward at some points, but the chapter from Corey's perspective gives me the impression that she's supposed not to be super likeable, and I like that she's the narrator for most of the story.
There's something about the writing style that doesn't work that well for me, not sure what it is, but I got used to it quickly. :)

[Júpiter]

(Correction: I meant I like that she's the focus. She's not the narrator. Oops. Is this 3rd Person Deep? Or 3rd Person Limited?)