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Critique Partners and Swaps > Alpha for Space Adventure. 16K

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message 1: by Dan (last edited Feb 10, 2021 09:55AM) (new)

Dan Mitchell | 31 comments I'm looking for some Alpha help with my Sci-fi space adventure with a sort-of romantic subplot. I have six solid chapters, a loose idea of a middle I need some help structuring, then a solid ending. 16K with some gritty language. I will swap services.
Blurb: Intergalactic bounty hunter Starla Hoffer tries to keep her crew and herself financially afloat. One complication after another has them struggling until a big bounty reward catches her eye. Another complication puts her in an uneasy partnership with a former flame who left her to die on a desert planet. Together, they face even more complications before they can cash in their prize.


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Kathleen Osborne (kaosborne1) | 8 comments wish I could help but on deadlines for my Novel and short stories for an antholigy by end of month


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Dan Mitchell | 31 comments Anyone?


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