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The Mystical Biloxi in The Great Gatsby

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JimF Biloxi is a well-structured riddle in The Great Gatsby. It's in Fitzgerald's pencil manuscript, removed from the galley proof, and put back again in the first edition. Answer of this riddle is one of the reasons Fitzgerald wouldn't reveal his secret of enigmatic writing.

The fault of "smokeing" may be noted first. It appears in the Schedule and General Resolves:
Dumbbell exercise and wall-scaling
. . .
No wasting time at Shafters or [a name, indecipherable]
No more smokeing or chewing.
Bath every other day
Read one improving book or magazine per week

The spelling was "smoking" in the galley proof and pencil manuscript. An -e- was added in the first edition to make a fault of "smokeing"; but we don't see scaleing, wasteing, or improveing. — An obvious fault can be treated as a "smoking" signal to alert readers.

Biloxi who "was from Biloxi, Tennessee" is a fault. The city is located in Mississippi. In the novel Biloxi represents KKK, a fault from Fitzgerald's view.


JimF Biloxi is an interlude can be removed as in the galley proof and inserted again in the first edition. I guess Fitzgerald hesitated for a while due to its impact. If you were the publisher in the 1920s, would you issue this novel knowing that it talks about KKK? If Perkins could detect this hidden plot, he could detect others (e.g. the two girls in yellow), and he would ban this novel.

Clues are spread in the dialogue. Direct hints are "Biloxi, Blocks, Boxes" in [3] and "three weeks" in [4].

Biloxi is located in Mississippi, close to Tennessee where KKK originated. Block has the usage of to bar, to hinder. Box has the usage of to confine, to hit. Biloxi Blocks Boxes all have the K sound.

The period is set to "three weeks" for K.K.K., not two or four or days. Somehow I believe it's three-weak's in Fitzgerald's mind, for Biloxi is the "Somebody fainted." [1]

"Bill Biloxi from Memphis" in [5] and "we didn't have any president" in [17] are more difficult. Other lines can be well reasoned after that.

"Still—I was married in the middle of June," Daisy remembered, "Louisville in June! Somebody fainted. Who was it fainted, Tom?" [1]

"Biloxi," he answered shortly. [2]

"A man named Biloxi. 'Blocks' Biloxi, and he made boxes—that's a fact—and he was from Biloxi, Tennessee." [3]

"They carried him into my house," appended Jordan, "because we lived just two doors from the church. And he stayed three weeks, until Daddy told him he had to get out. The day after he left Daddy died." After a moment she added. "There wasn't any connection." [4]

"I used to know a Bill Biloxi from Memphis," I remarked. [5]

"That was his cousin. I knew his whole family history before he left. He gave me an aluminum putter that I use to-day." [6]

The music had died down as the ceremony began and now a long cheer floated in at the window, followed by intermittent cries of "Yea—ea—ea!" and finally by a burst of jazz as the dancing began. [7]

"We're getting old," said Daisy. "If we were young we'd rise and dance." [8]

"Remember Biloxi," Jordan warned her. "Where'd you know him, Tom?" [9]

"Biloxi?" He concentrated with an effort. "I didn't know him. He was a friend of Daisy's." [10]

"He was not," she denied. "I'd never seen him before. He came down in the private car." [11]

"Well, he said he knew you. He said he was raised in Louisville. Asa Bird brought him around at the last minute and asked if we had room for him." [12]

Jordan smiled. [13]

"He was probably bumming his way home. He told me he was president of your class at Yale." [14]

Tom and I looked at each other blankly. [15]

"Biloxi?" [16]

"First place, we didn't have any president——" [17]



JimF Line 5:
"I used to know a Bill Biloxi from Memphis," I remarked.
To probe Fitzgerald's mind we need to know what he read. He bought a set of Encyclopedias and took them to Europe while writing The Great Gatsby. Item "Memphis" in the 1911 Encyclopædia Britannica:
Memphis was the chief city of the 1st nome of Lower Egypt; in its early days it was known as "the white walls" or the "white wall," a name which clung to its citadel down to Herodotus's day.
Bill: a written proposal for a new law.
Biloxi: a riddle of KKK.
Memphis: the white walls.

"Bill Biloxi from Memphis" alludes to a bill inclining KKK from white walls — Separate but Equal.


JimF Fitzgerald was 29 while writing The Great Gatsby. After five-year marriage his simple (single) life was fading away. The thirty, and thirsty, hit him. Nick as his substitute reflects that:
Human sympathy has its limits, and we were content to let all their tragic arguments fade with the city lights behind. Thirty—the promise of a decade of loneliness, a thinning list of single men to know, a thinning brief-case of enthusiasm, thinning hair.
Tragic arguments in Fitzgerald's 30: the promise of more years decayed alone, a long list for a married man to worry about, a cause of less enthusiasm in working, fewer papers in briefcase to sell, and losing an author's true nature (hair has the usage of one's nature).

Fitzgerald would isolate himself for writing, but was troubled by money and Zelda, especially her affair with Edouard Jozan. His popularity, "lights" on him, was fading after This Side of Paradise.

Originally it was "a thinning assortment of illusions" in Fitzgerald's pencil manuscript and galley proof. The last moment he changed that to "a thinning brief-case of enthusiasm." His short stories are full of illusions but thinning. He was thirsty in his thirty.


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