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message 51: by Edvard (new)

Edvard (flickerwisp) | 1 comments I am currently working on an LGBTQ YA romance novel and I would love to get someone to read over it. It's still in it's early stages of editing, so it is no masterpiece, but I would like some feedback before making major changes and such. It's around 50000 words long.
Email me at vaalund.marie@gmail.com if you're interested, and thanks in advance :)


message 52: by [deleted user] (new)

Hello, I'm looking for a beta reader / critic.
Novel: YA - teens 9-15 age
topic: sci-fi -horror, sci-fi fantasy

I'm now in the middle of the story, so it is not finished yet.

I'm willing to beta read other fantasy / YA stories.
Thanks Arla


message 53: by [deleted user] (new)

Arhazo wrote: "Hi!

I'm looking for someone to send the first chapter of my WIP to. It's a fantasy novel about a witch who hates magic. I'm open to becoming writing buddies too, and can beta read fantasy."


Hello, I would like to read and also, what kind of comments do you expect? Grammar? storyline? plot? or anything?

PM me if you like me to beta read.
Arla


message 54: by [deleted user] (new)

Arhazo wrote: "Katie wrote: "Hey! Anybody want to read the prologue of my book?"

me!"


Yes, I can read it. Is it a prologue or a first chapter?


message 55: by Rafia (new)

Rafia  (rafiagreste) | 0 comments Hello! So I a currently writing a book called Illusion for this book I have written a poem which is also called Illusion. If anyone can read it and tell me their thoughts it would be a great help. I have written the poem in goodreads Creative Writing page Just click Rafia's Writing and you will find it. PM me your thoughts!


Saloni (earnestlyeccentric) Fiona wrote: "Would anybody want to read some of my WIPs? All but one are romance because I'm a sap"

Would you be open to doing a critique swap? I've got an LGBTQ+ YA romance manuscript that I would love feedback on.


message 57: by Nicole (new)

Nicole Olena | 1 comments Hi! I'm looking for a beta reader or someone willing to do a MS swap. My novel is a new adult fantasy with elements of romance, and this is the third draft of the novel so it's pretty close to done. Let me know if this sounds like something you're interested in:-)


message 58: by TKZ (new)

TKZ | 10 comments Nicole wrote: "Hi! I'm looking for a beta reader or someone willing to do a MS swap. My novel is a new adult fantasy with elements of romance, and this is the third draft of the novel so it's pretty close to done..."

What is the word count?


message 59: by Lewis (new)

Lewis Whitehouse (lewwhitehouse) | 1 comments Hello everyone,

I am looking for a beta reader for my very short sci-fi story, 'The Void' (~1,600 words). Willing to swap!

Thanks!


message 60: by Nell (last edited May 08, 2021 12:50AM) (new)

Nell (daniellemarvell) Hi all!
Trying to find a couple of beta readers.
It's a supernatural fantasy, RH romance. Just shy of 48,000 words. It's the first book of a series. (CW- contains strong language, graphic sexual scenes and graphic violence.)
Title: Lost Memories: Fallen Celestial.
Blurb:
Emily was just a normal woman. A mother. A Paediatric nurse. A lover of boozy brunches with her best friend.
Sure, she had total amnesia from her life before turning 18, and she might have strange dreams from time to time, but that didn't mean anything!
Or so she thought.
Then, on a sporadic weekend away, a man with emerald eyes swirling with silver changed everything.
Will Emily's memories reveal the truth that she knew she needed?
In her journey to restore the balance, only one question matters.
Mercy or revenge?


message 61: by Nell (new)

Nell (daniellemarvell) Nicole wrote: "Hi! I'm looking for a beta reader or someone willing to do a MS swap. My novel is a new adult fantasy with elements of romance, and this is the third draft of the novel so it's pretty close to done..."

Hey! I'd be interested in reading


message 62: by NJ (new)

NJ Standley  (njstandley) | 1 comments hi guys!

i’m two drafts into a book (its 70,000 words) thats fantasy mystery, YA/NA and set in Oregon with scenes from the 1920s sprinkled in! it’s about a murder mystery, and there’s a hint of magic.

if anyone’s interested i’m looking for beta readers, but i could also be a critique partner too!


message 63: by Ros (new)

Ros Yazz | 2 comments Hi! I'm looking for a beta reader for an A/Contemporary/Romance. It's a little on the steamy side in the beginning but dies down towards the middle. It's a rollercoaster ride, so I want to make sure that my character is relatable and the storyline clear. It's only on the 2nd edit, so it's rough.
word count: 43k


message 64: by Melina (new)

Melina Hotza (melinasreadingspace) | 4 comments Okay, I started writing a story called ''Masks'', I am looking for someone to review my chapters (as drafts) so I can make the book better. I will be sending every chapter I write to this person while it is available and also give credits if they want. I am writing on word but it also slowly publishes on wattpad. I will leave the wattpad link but dm me if you want the word with your email. You can also check my other story on wattpad ''level one'' which is a short one and probably in desperate need of reviews. https://www.wattpad.com/story/2727442...


message 65: by Molly (new)

Molly Stegall (mollystegall) | 1 comments Hello, I have recently finished my Fantasy book: Ashes of Revenge (98k words). I would describe this as a YA Fantasy book and would love to have a Beta Reader(s) read and review it! If you would only be willing/able to do a chapter or two that is fine as well!

In the land of Corrail there are five species, using hate and spite to make the land a violent cesspool. Raven, a badly burned Mundus, knows that better than anyone. Betrayed by her Kingdom, and left for dead in enemy territory, she wants nothing but revenge against the Mundus King.

Years after the incident, an unlikely trio forms with similar interests: Colt, an anxiety-ridden Shifter, and Richard, an overly strict Farian. The small group devised a plan to ensure the Kingdom they live in is protected against the others that oppose it and prevent war.

Just as they begin to make progress, a new player in their twisted game appears: Death. Moving the players, the group end up in Raven’s old Kingdom with a new mission for her to follow that will take her to her limits. With Death promising that Colt and Richard will be hurt if she doesn’t do as she’s told, she agrees to the deal. But vengeance courses so fast beneath her skin that nothing can stop her from getting what she wants.

Please PM me :)


message 66: by Mahdiyah (new)

Mahdiyah I hope someone will consider reading my contemporary YA fantasy novel, Results of the Fallen. Results of the Fallen is a stand-alone (on its fourth draft) with series potential and will appeal to readers of Nora Sakavics, The Foxhole Court.

Dr. Remi Anderson leads a routine life. Long shifts at the ER, and nights off spent at The Box, a ritzy club on Chrystie Street. A simple life means minimal risk, but it also makes you easy to follow. The new bartender, drunk but well dressed, switches up her drinking routine, and her usual Tom Collins is replaced by a Platinum Passion. That same night Anderson is put on call. Someone has passed out at the rooftop bar, and an AED operator is needed. But Remi wakes up at Lenox Hill hospital days later with a revoked license and whispers of murder circling her name. Now, the all too corrupt NYPD wants to take her in. Unless, that is, she can pay them off. She might not be able to, but Night-Rider, the man who framed her, can. She’ll have to enter a new line of work, and pull off impossible heists to raise the funds. But it could be made either a breeze or a chore with some strange new abilities, and a crew of other thieves who came to Rider not by choice, but force.


message 67: by Jo (new)

Jo Quill | 1 comments Hello!
I'm looking for beta readers for my fantasy/fiction novella. I'm still in the drafting process, but I'd love to have some feedback on that.

Here's a little description:
The story is about a middle-aged woman who, after a lifetime of misadventures and bad luck, marches into the Heavenly Customer Service to file a formal complaint against her guardian angel, lamenting his utter incompetence in keeping her safe and protecting her. The subsequent investigation on her guardian’s behaviour becomes for her the opportunity to get a new perspective on her life and discover the world of guardian angels, where many things have already being established in advance... but not everything.

Thank you very much in advance :)


message 68: by Adam (new)

Adam | 1 comments Hello!
Looking for reader for reworked first 3 chapters of my MG fantasy Adventure. Book is complete at 76k.
Owliver Branchwilder doesn’t seem all that special, and no one expects that to change. But after reading from a book he found in a place books shouldn’t be, Owliver discovers he must become the only thing that can save his world from the threatening darkness—a diveling.


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