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Hello, I'm looking for a beta reader / critic.
Novel: YA - teens 9-15 age
topic: sci-fi -horror, sci-fi fantasy
I'm now in the middle of the story, so it is not finished yet.
I'm willing to beta read other fantasy / YA stories.
Thanks Arla
Novel: YA - teens 9-15 age
topic: sci-fi -horror, sci-fi fantasy
I'm now in the middle of the story, so it is not finished yet.
I'm willing to beta read other fantasy / YA stories.
Thanks Arla
Arhazo wrote: "Hi!
I'm looking for someone to send the first chapter of my WIP to. It's a fantasy novel about a witch who hates magic. I'm open to becoming writing buddies too, and can beta read fantasy."
Hello, I would like to read and also, what kind of comments do you expect? Grammar? storyline? plot? or anything?
PM me if you like me to beta read.
Arla
I'm looking for someone to send the first chapter of my WIP to. It's a fantasy novel about a witch who hates magic. I'm open to becoming writing buddies too, and can beta read fantasy."
Hello, I would like to read and also, what kind of comments do you expect? Grammar? storyline? plot? or anything?
PM me if you like me to beta read.
Arla
Arhazo wrote: "Katie wrote: "Hey! Anybody want to read the prologue of my book?"
me!"
Yes, I can read it. Is it a prologue or a first chapter?
me!"
Yes, I can read it. Is it a prologue or a first chapter?


Would you be open to doing a critique swap? I've got an LGBTQ+ YA romance manuscript that I would love feedback on.


What is the word count?

I am looking for a beta reader for my very short sci-fi story, 'The Void' (~1,600 words). Willing to swap!
Thanks!

Trying to find a couple of beta readers.
It's a supernatural fantasy, RH romance. Just shy of 48,000 words. It's the first book of a series. (CW- contains strong language, graphic sexual scenes and graphic violence.)
Title: Lost Memories: Fallen Celestial.
Blurb:
Emily was just a normal woman. A mother. A Paediatric nurse. A lover of boozy brunches with her best friend.
Sure, she had total amnesia from her life before turning 18, and she might have strange dreams from time to time, but that didn't mean anything!
Or so she thought.
Then, on a sporadic weekend away, a man with emerald eyes swirling with silver changed everything.
Will Emily's memories reveal the truth that she knew she needed?
In her journey to restore the balance, only one question matters.
Mercy or revenge?

Hey! I'd be interested in reading

i’m two drafts into a book (its 70,000 words) thats fantasy mystery, YA/NA and set in Oregon with scenes from the 1920s sprinkled in! it’s about a murder mystery, and there’s a hint of magic.
if anyone’s interested i’m looking for beta readers, but i could also be a critique partner too!

word count: 43k


In the land of Corrail there are five species, using hate and spite to make the land a violent cesspool. Raven, a badly burned Mundus, knows that better than anyone. Betrayed by her Kingdom, and left for dead in enemy territory, she wants nothing but revenge against the Mundus King.
Years after the incident, an unlikely trio forms with similar interests: Colt, an anxiety-ridden Shifter, and Richard, an overly strict Farian. The small group devised a plan to ensure the Kingdom they live in is protected against the others that oppose it and prevent war.
Just as they begin to make progress, a new player in their twisted game appears: Death. Moving the players, the group end up in Raven’s old Kingdom with a new mission for her to follow that will take her to her limits. With Death promising that Colt and Richard will be hurt if she doesn’t do as she’s told, she agrees to the deal. But vengeance courses so fast beneath her skin that nothing can stop her from getting what she wants.
Please PM me :)

Dr. Remi Anderson leads a routine life. Long shifts at the ER, and nights off spent at The Box, a ritzy club on Chrystie Street. A simple life means minimal risk, but it also makes you easy to follow. The new bartender, drunk but well dressed, switches up her drinking routine, and her usual Tom Collins is replaced by a Platinum Passion. That same night Anderson is put on call. Someone has passed out at the rooftop bar, and an AED operator is needed. But Remi wakes up at Lenox Hill hospital days later with a revoked license and whispers of murder circling her name. Now, the all too corrupt NYPD wants to take her in. Unless, that is, she can pay them off. She might not be able to, but Night-Rider, the man who framed her, can. She’ll have to enter a new line of work, and pull off impossible heists to raise the funds. But it could be made either a breeze or a chore with some strange new abilities, and a crew of other thieves who came to Rider not by choice, but force.

I'm looking for beta readers for my fantasy/fiction novella. I'm still in the drafting process, but I'd love to have some feedback on that.
Here's a little description:
The story is about a middle-aged woman who, after a lifetime of misadventures and bad luck, marches into the Heavenly Customer Service to file a formal complaint against her guardian angel, lamenting his utter incompetence in keeping her safe and protecting her. The subsequent investigation on her guardian’s behaviour becomes for her the opportunity to get a new perspective on her life and discover the world of guardian angels, where many things have already being established in advance... but not everything.
Thank you very much in advance :)

Looking for reader for reworked first 3 chapters of my MG fantasy Adventure. Book is complete at 76k.
Owliver Branchwilder doesn’t seem all that special, and no one expects that to change. But after reading from a book he found in a place books shouldn’t be, Owliver discovers he must become the only thing that can save his world from the threatening darkness—a diveling.
Email me at vaalund.marie@gmail.com if you're interested, and thanks in advance :)