Paid: Seeking beta reader for two stories: one science fiction and one feminist historical romance

[Simon]

We've had some great feedback so far, and we would love some more paid Beta Readers to read and comment on two feature film treatments:

1. HONEYSUCKLE ROSE (16k-word treatment)
A romantic historical drama in 1930s and 40s' England.

Set during the 1930s' obsession with motorbikes and Speedway racing, with the Great Depression and a looming WWII in the background, this is the story of Rose Saunders, a butcher’s daughter who becomes a rising star in the male-dominated sport of Speedway.

2. SON OF LIFE (8k-word treatment)
A sci-fi, modern-language reimagining of Shakespeare’s Macbeth.

Set on the warring planets of Alba and Sa-Sun, whose inhabitants battle over the vast energy sources of the moon Deò, this retelling of Shakespeare’s tragedy tells of the rise and fall of Alban commander Beathan and his ambitious wife Gruoch, in a sci-fi universe of other-worldly creatures, planet-engulfing firestorms, and hand-to-hand battles.

We are offering £20 per treatment to read, comment, and answer a few questions.

We are New Forest Film Co, a new-form production company who believe in opening up the creative process to scrutiny and feedback from beginning to end. Find out more about our projects and our process at our website.

[Michelle]

Hi, your stories sound interesting. I would be glad to read them.

Thank you,
Michelle

[Fanna]

Hey! I'm very much interested in beta reading both the film treatments and have sent you a message on here.

[Lydia]

Hi Simon,
I would love to read both stories if you're still looking for a reader. I love Shakespeare and history. I can read both of them today and have them back to you if you'd like. If you're interested, you can message me or email me at lydia.redwine@gmail.com

Thank you,
Lydia

[Isabelle]

Hi

I am very interested in Beta reading your manuscript. I have experience as alpha and beta reader as well as editing experience. I am an obsessive reader, i read about 450 - 500 books a year (beta read included). I read different genres as long as the blurb is interesting, i read it.

Regarding prices I have a fixed rate of 50 euro for 50K and above. Below 50K depends on length and expectations, so that is to be determined each request separately.. I work with half upfront and the rest after delivery via PayPal.

What you get from me:
* in document comments (if necessary)
* my personal comment om the story
* likes / dislikes
* * character development
* flow of the story
* inconsistencies
* typo, grammar and overall error comment
* *... Things that you request

All neatly bundled in a word document.
I am also available for questions.

My turnaround time is normally one week per book but in these times with homeschooling I rather say 2 weeks per book, to be on the safe side.

You can contact me by email : dweerdi@gmail.com or via goodreads.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely
Isabelle

[L. Willi]

I have had some time open up to do some beta reading outside of the work I do with an editing co. Your manuscripts both sound very interesting, and I would love to beta read for you if you are still in need of a reader.
If your interested lmk.
readingtimelw@gmail.com
Thanks!

[Dave]

Hi Simon. I'm game. although I have a set price, I'm interested in your process, so am willing to work with your compensation. Are you looking for additional content. I have 4 thriller (2 are part of a series with a 3rd in planning) and a fantasy that have all been adapted for feature film.

[Katelyn Rothney]

Hi Simon!

I am an experienced beta reader and screenwriter/producer. I think that I can assist with your second feature! Love the re-imagining of Macbeth with a Sci-Fi twist.

A little bit about me:

I am offering expert Beta Reading & Alpha Reading services. I am an experienced writer (and avid reader) who specializes in writing fiction novels and screenplays. I am specifically familiar with YA (coming-of-age), speculative fiction (sci-fi and fantasy) novels.

My feedback includes:
- Reader report
- Sample in-line edits
- Characters, story arcs, protagonist deep-dive
- Plot/3-Story Structure feedback
- Dialogue
- Narration/POV
- Tone
- Setting
- Language

Rates:
- Basic: $10 base for 5,000, additional $15 per 5,000 words
- Standard: Up to 40,000 words for $70 / or a feature screenplay
- Premium: Up to 80,000 words for $140

Link to my Fivver listings to view my pricing packages-
- Beta/Alpha Reading (https://www.fiverr.com/katelynrothney...)
- Line Editing, if you are interested in more in-depth line editing (https://www.fiverr.com/katelynrothney...

Who is your target audience? I represent a readership that is:
- Cisgender, straight woman
- Caucasian
- Canadian
- In their late-20s
- Interested in Literary/Genre Fiction; Science Fiction, Fantasy, coming-of-age, young adult fiction

If you would like more information:
- My author website (https://katelynrothney.com)
- My Twitter (https://twitter.com/KatelynRothney)
- My Instagram (https://www.instagram.com/katelynroth...)

[Carrie D.]

Hello Simon,

I sent you a message. I look forward to hearing from you. Take care!

Kind regards,
Carrie Krause

[Cece]

Hello Simon!

I’m not sure if you’re still looking for beta readers, but your stories are definitely in my wheelhouse! Sci-fi and Historical are two of my top genres.
I’m good at looking for plot inconsistencies, character depth, and problematic tropes.

Form of payment would have to be negotiated, seeing as I live in the U.S. and don’t deal in £s.

If you’re interested, you can contact me on Instagram @cece.hawks :)

[ernie]

Hello, Simon! Beautiful stories here just waiting to be beta read. The Macbeth re-imagining with sci-fi elements Sen the most intriguing. Lucky for you, I beta read two of these genres excellently. I will attach the links to my rates below, as well as a more in-depth description of my services. Please do check them out.

For the historical romance story:
https://www.fiverr.com/s2/27b44faede
For the new adult-themed sci-fi story: https://www.fiverr.com/s2/e29d9cef11

My rates for 16k and 8k words are in dollars but are approximately £20, so not to worry. After beta reading, I put up a report with my honest and detailed feedback regarding the major points in your book. I'll attach a sample of the report below:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/14EFN...

If you're interested in line and copy editing, here is the link to my services below:
https://www.fiverr.com/s2/511f2f7d2d

Please don't hesitate to contact me so I can begin helping you make your manuscript the best it can possibly be.

[Aditi]

Hey, Simon

I would love to beta read your book.
https://www.fiverr.com/s2/fca408040c
You can check my previous work in the link here.
My Charges are
55k $15
100k $30
and so on depending on the pages of the book.
I can't wait to hear from you.

Regards
Aditi