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Is switching from 1st person to 3rd effective for Amnesia?
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You could use deep POV for the beginning, then draw back a bit fot the amnesia part. Perhaps the other way round. Might be better, though. Or even keep in deep POV all the time. Readers would then be with your protagonist, inside her head, feeling her emotions and thoughts at the beginning, then the confusion she is feelingduring the amnesia . I think that it's important to feel her confusion.



I could just stick to third person but for a small chunk of the story the main character loses her memories.
I was thinking of using 1st person when she has her memories (reader self insert), then 3rd person when she has amnesia. I'm hoping this would create the impression that she is almost a new character without her memories and the reader only returns to being her (1st person) when she regains them.
Do you think that would be effective or would you find it unnecessary/ too confusing for majority of readers.