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Birdsong231☾ (pm before invs) (birdsong231) | 750 comments We've already got around 5 humans... I dont think we should have any more than we alteady do. I'm not a moderator, but it's my personal opinion. This academy is for monsters, not humans. Also you're missing more personality and history.

For Adhar, I think seven health issues is far too many... There is such a thing as too many flaws. Again, this is my personal opinion.


Birdsong231☾ (pm before invs) (birdsong231) | 750 comments Yep, we have 5 humans in total. If I remember right, that was the limit, anyways. I don't think there will be any approval of a sixth.


Birdsong231☾ (pm before invs) (birdsong231) | 750 comments Artoria wrote: "Its also called, mod have a life and you know, aren't on 7/24. They sleep, eat and have activities too. The best you can do is wait, and if it take too much time, like one week, you go dm some to a..."

I agree, but this isn't the most "rude" I've seen. I've been cyber bullied by some Goodreads members for having mental health problems. Said I was faking it to get attention. One person said me and my fellow moderators were incompetent because if our inactivity. For context, it was an extremely busy and stressful time of the year. It was taking a horrible mental toll on me, especially because it was winter.

Besides all of that, I've seen quite a bit of activity from these moderators in different groups... I'm pretty sure they've forgotten or have too much on their plate to deal with aporovals.


Birdsong231☾ (pm before invs) (birdsong231) | 750 comments Henry wrote: "aawww darn I don't know what else to choose tho"

Maybe a humanoid type?? Maybe he fears his species or power and refuses to use them, therefore seems as if he's human until he says otherwise?


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Name: Momoka (Moma) Fukui
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Race: Shapeshifter
Sexuality: Bisexual
Personality: Sweet, kind, cute, friendly, smart, a bit anxious.
Best friend: None yet
Relationship/Crush: None yet
Dorm Partner: None yet
Backstory: Her parents died when she was very young. She took care of herself until she was taken to an orphanage and was adopted by a kind family.
Likes: Cats, Dogs, Chocolate.
Hates: Smoking, Weirdos, Lizards.
Other: nothing else
Appearance: ANIME GIRL- * - Play Jigsaw Puzzle for free at Puzzle Factory


Birdsong231☾ (pm before invs) (birdsong231) | 750 comments Any of the moderators... All if them seem to be ignoring the responsibility of this thread...


Birdsong231☾ (pm before invs) (birdsong231) | 750 comments Wait, what? What happened? Are they okay? Abd if I may ask, which one is it?


Birdsong231☾ (pm before invs) (birdsong231) | 750 comments Damn... That sucks...


Alpha : ♡ Senior Year ♡ (desiebookie) | 0 comments Sorry, Birdsong. A lot of the mods have gone inactive and I'm typically not the one to be approving the characters but, I'll do it this time just to be useful since we have had a lot stack up since our last mods were active.

Elijah Zane Sørensen - Approved
Ryder Lukas Moore - Approved
Zane Arrow - Approved
Adhar Jade Madadh - Approved
Joshua Page - How can you be the first werewolf in your family? You need the blood and if you're the first then the blood just magically appeared somehow.
Momoka - Approved


message 261: by Artoria (last edited May 18, 2021 04:40AM) (new)

Artoria | 100 comments Wolfie (Destiny) wrote: "Sorry, Birdsong. A lot of the mods have gone inactive and I'm typically not the one to be approving the characters but, I'll do it this time just to be useful since we have had a lot stack up since..."

Well being bit/slash/get blood or spit of a lycan into a wound would make them one. Or in more nordic tales of lycan, a ritual of the moon would make you a child of the moon, aka lycanthrope


Alpha : ♡ Senior Year ♡ (desiebookie) | 0 comments Joshua Page is approved!


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Artoria | 100 comments Name: Mina Darkthorn
Gender: Female
Age: Still a young vampire so 175
Race: Elf Turned Vampire
Sexuality: Pan
Personality: Mina is a kind girl, sometimes overthinking herself and such. But she try to stop those emotion. She's a brat and a knowledge freak.
Best friend: Not for now, new to the academy.
Relationship/Crush: Free
Dorm Partner: None
Backstory: Mina is born as a night elf, she is born in a normal family, but they made a mistake, rely on a vampire for living. At the age 21 she got bit by the vampire, as punishment for her parents to not have payed. and became one. Her first goal was to kill the one that transformed her, what she did. From that time she was wandering in the world, and though that the academy could be a fun place to settle down.
Her mother and Father are two night elf, her mother was a priestress and her father a sort of holy knight.
Likes: Moon. stars, blood.
Hates: Sun, light type of thing. Fish. Water.
Other: Her vampirics powers are more focused on the shapeshifting. Like other vampire she can control her blood, but her transformation in wolf, giant bat monster, swarm of bat and can access a sort of demonic form. Basically her wolf is bigger and more monster, her bat monster is more powerful and les bestial, her bats are bone bats, so take a bat form make it blood red, then put a skeleton armor on it.

She's a vampire of legends, meaning she has the blood manipulation and the creature of the night transformation, Power under the moon. But also the weakness, burning in sun, unable to dive in water, wood stick kill, garlic, holy water, can't enter where she's not invited.
Appearance:
Normal form
description
Giant bat form (For combat mostly)
description
Demon wolf form (Boosted wolf, more power)
description


message 264: by Alpha : ♡ Senior Year ♡ (last edited May 20, 2021 06:50PM) (new)

Alpha : ♡ Senior Year ♡ (desiebookie) | 0 comments Mina Darkthorn - Okay, so, there are a few things that I have seen that we can't accept. First of all, the elf royalty is not allowed with any characters so, that needs to be removed. Second of all, after reading the backstory I still see no reason for her to have had to be transformed; maybe she could have angered the vampire or something if you want to keep the transformation. Third, for people who are unable to research I will need to you add more detail explaining each and every form because after looking into details of 'vampires of legacy' I have been unable to find anything about any dragon, wolf, bat, etc. forms ( Discluding human because everyone is required to have a human form ). And a few requests that you don't have to add but, maybe a few details about her mother, father, siblings, etc, and maybe a bit of a more detailed backstory.


message 265: by Artoria (last edited May 20, 2021 06:56PM) (new)

Artoria | 100 comments uhm the transformation are in the more old legends, like original legend. In the statement: Vampire can control and transform into the creature of darkness and night. Most of the time it was bats, and mist, but some times some transformed into rats and wolfs as wolf are moon animals. Dragon are more in fantasy game, book legend. Coming from the name Dracula, meaning dragon in a language I don't remind. And the vampire could just transform people to have thralls and servant


Alpha : ♡ Senior Year ♡ (desiebookie) | 0 comments Okay, I understand but, I'll have to ask you to limit yourself to three transformations. For example, let's say I'm making a dragon. My first form is my plain human form, my second is the form that is human but with my horns, tail, and wings, and my third is my full dragon form.


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Artoria | 100 comments so human, wolf, and like feral vampire would work?


Alpha : ♡ Senior Year ♡ (desiebookie) | 0 comments Sure, you do whatever you want. But, on her profile, there are still four transformations on her profile. ( Human, Wolf, Demon Wolf, Giant Bat )


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Artoria | 100 comments yeah human count as form, so it will be demon wofly


Alpha : ♡ Senior Year ♡ (desiebookie) | 0 comments And please also pay attention to my other things in the post so I don't have to copy and paste it, please. I'm kinda busy with three things at once and so...


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Artoria | 100 comments ah yes family


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Artoria | 100 comments there, sorry was playing at the same time


Alpha : ♡ Senior Year ♡ (desiebookie) | 0 comments Okay, so, a few more things I see that I need/suggest to be changed.
1. You are invited to the academy if they didn't get invited they can't learn there
2. Her age states she is 175 and she was 21 when she was transformed so, did she wander for a total of 154 years?
3. She can't have an army ( that's what I believe the bone bats are, if not then please make that more specific )


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Artoria | 100 comments no the bone bat are just describing what she look like. I didn't find any pics

yes she wandered

and yeah she is invited


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| Important Stuff |

Name - lyra Sanula

Name meaning (Optional) - a lyre

Age - 16

Gender - female

Race: Bird of Prey ( half-human, half-barn owl )

| Personality + Likes/Dislikes Stoof |

Personality - tough | level-headed | practical | intelligent | kind | trustworthy
(view spoiler)

Likes -
↳ long drives
↳ travelling
↳ solitude
↳ rainy days

Dislikes -
↳ arrogance

| Relationship Stuff |

Sexuality - straight

Crush - James

Bf/Gf - reserved for james

| Appearance Stuff |

Picture -(view spoiler)

| Family Stuff |

Sibling(s) - Mae, Noah ( if anyone wants to make them just let me know! )

Mother - Claretta Sanula

Father - Charles Sanula

| History/Other Stuff |

History -to be roleplayed




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Name: James Henry
Gender: male
Age: 16
Race: avian (osprey wings and feathers)
Sexuality: straight
Personality: James is a kind soul. He likes to help out, and is nervous in most social situations. He is tough, and has good character. He is sweet and caring, and a little lonely. He is independent and sometimes overburdens himself.
Best friend: Lyra
Relationship/Crush: Lyra
Dorm Partner: none currently
Backstory: He previously attended the academy at Featherdown Moors before getting a transfer. He lived with his parents in the Rockies, his father a thunderbird and his mother an avian like himself. (Also osprey wings.) His father was disabled after getting mailed by a brown bear, and his mother was in bad shape after his birth, leading him to take care of the family.
Likes: chocolate, hot chili are, tuna fish, and chilling, and Lyra. He finds her wings quite alluring. Doggos, anime, manga
Hates: idiots, liars, and coffee. He hates large cats and guns, although his collection of carved guns back at home.
Other:
Appearance: James is about 6’4” and a little lanky. He is toned, but not super strong. He is lean. His hair is brown, with small feathers mixed in. His wings are brown and white, with some black feathers. He has green eyes and usually wears a sweatshirt and jeans.


message 277: by leah-megan (last edited May 26, 2021 08:53PM) (new)

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Full Name: Marina (No last name)
Nickname: Mar, Rina, Ri
Gender: Female (F)
Age: 16
Birthday: August 9th
Place of Birth: N/A

The love in our Shiver flows strong and deep, leaving us with memories to treasure and keep.

PHYSICAL APPEARANCE
Height: 6 foot
Weight: 144 lbs
Body Type: Slender, hourglass
Skin: Gentle blue with white patches
Eyes: Pale Blue
Hair: Black (Appears blue) and long down to her waist, kept up in traditional Onac style.
Scars: A few on her legs and arms from fights between Shivers.
Tattoos: None
Species: Onac - Onac are a humanoid species, they are capable of breathing underwater as well as growing a long tail. They appear similar to humans, but with shark like qualities. Fins protrude from their skulls, their ears are slightly pointed, and they possess gills along the jaw and temporal bone. With generally longer necks and slender frames, they have a color range of grays, blues, and blacks.



FAMILY RELATIONSHIPS
Mother: Mira (F)~ 57
Relationship with Mother: Marina has a good relationship with her mother and they used to spend a lot of time to together since she was a role model in Marina's younger life.
Father: Caspian (M)~ 60
Relationship with Father: Since male Onac don't stay in the Shiver (a group of Onac) Marina never met her father and from what her mother has told her she has no interest in meeting him.
Sibling 1#: Wade (M)~ 17 1/2
Relationship with Siblings 1#: Marina used to spend a lot of time with her older brother but when he turns 19 he will be joining her father so she has on purpose emotionally detached herself from him.
Sibling 2#: Malik (F)~ 13
Relationship with Siblings 2#: Malik is the sibling Marina spends the most time with, since she is a female and the females stay with the Shiver, they are quite close.
Sibling 3#: Kai (M)~ 10
Relationship with Siblings 3#: Similar to Wade, Marina spends time with Kai but as he comes closer to the age of 19 she will again emotionally detach herself from him.
Relationship with other relatives: Having been in the Shiver for most of her life Marina is very close with all the females, and most of them are related. The males tend to stay together in another Shiver much farther away and Marina has only met a few of them.

Being part of a Shiver means you are a part of something very wonderful. It means you will love and be loved for the rest of your life.

SOCIAL RELATIONSHIPS
Sexual Orientations: Heterosexual
Romantically Involved: No
Spouse: None
Children: None
Friends: TBD
Allies: TBD
Enemies: TBD

My Shiver is a home that never leaves.

PERSONAL CHARACTERISTICS
Physical Strengths: Marina's physical strengths include she is an amazing swimmer, and quiet agile. She has strong powerful legs, excellent hearing, smell, sight, and taste, and touch.
Physical Weaknesses: Marina isn't as built for land making her more self conscious. She also has to take more time to transition from being in the water to being on land.
Mental Strengths: Marina is determined and this can be seen in how she works and spends her time, when she starts something she never stops half way through and doesn't let others tell her she'll fail. Loyal to the people she trusts and feels protection towards is something in her Shiver she was known for. She is calm and often more relaxed when in the water, she can think through and out of hard situations when in this state. Being very forgiving Marina rarely holds a grudge and this often ends up with her brushing off anything that has hurt her.
Mental Weaknesses: She can't be alone for to long, or she will start to feel a weight that she isn't needed in her gut. When in the shiver she is always needed and when she isn't shown that it can cause her to panic. Being a perfections it quite dangerous for her, if she isn't able to do something first try she gets flustered and irritable.

When I'm lost or forgotten, I know that the Shiver will forever be there to love and protect me.

EMOTIONAL CHARACTERISTICS
Listener or Talker? Listener
How long does it take for them to trust others? Being in such a close group for a long time, Marina takes a bit longer to trust other species and prefers not to.
Do they hold grudges? Not often
Do they like larger groups of people? If it's her Shiver then yes, other wise no.
Introvert or Extrovert? Ambivert
What makes them mad? Happy? Sad? For Marina she is happiest with the Shiver and in the water, and finds herself more shy and detached when away from them. This can make her either sad or depressed, which has happened to past Onac.
Who they have any biases or prejudices? Not often
What do they think of love? For the Onac love is temporary and she has little interest in it at the moment.
Do they think of self sacrifice? Anything for the Shiver, but other wise rarely.
Who is the most important person in their life? Her mother
Who is the person they respect most? Who do they despise most? She respects her mother most out of anyone and has a few other Onac her age in her Shiver she hates.

HISTORY
The Onac are a secretive species who aren't even recorded in myth or history books/stories, they have been seen on one or two occasions in history and by human's small standards considered 'sirens.' Marina was born into one of their many Shivers, these shivers consist of around 100+ adult female, and their children (pups). Male Onac are ordered by the females to leave and join a male only Shiver at the age of 19, which will happen in a year or two to Marina's older brother Wade. Her youngest sibing Kai will have the same fate, and perhaps join his brother and father's Shivers.

Marina was born to Mira and Caspian, since the Onac don't do last names and run through a list of first names Marina shares her name with at least 7 other Onac in other Shivers. She is the second born after her older brother Wade, who she has begun to emotionally detach herself from for Onac tradition. Never meeting her father has show to mean nothing in her daily life and she doesn't feel she ever needs to meet him. It is the same with the others in her Shiver, females out rank males and have higher standards.

Having been in her Shiver for most of her life, Marina feels like an out cast on the surface world and isn't strong on her legs quite yet. If she were to make friends it would be with the sirens or mermaids/mermen, but only a few of those species have ever met an Onac. Since they are quite protective of each other and avoid contact with other species. Having been chosen as the first surface world scout in over 2000 years, Marina was sent to the academy to observe and learn from the surface people.

OUTFITS
Tipos de Aesthetic ¡Encuentra el tuyo! #detodo # De Todo # amreading # books # wattpad




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All_Hales  | 9 comments Name: Arabella Camron
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Race: Unicorn human
Sexuality: Straight
Personality: She is friendly, sensitive, gentle and caring. But can somtimes get fiesty when it comes to bullies. She has rude thoughts but doesn't share them. For she was raised in a cottage in the woods so she also has a leadership and warrior feeling about her. But overall she is just a sweet and sensitive girl who just wants to be loved.
Best friend: TBD
Relationship/Crush: TBD
Dorm Partner: TBD
Backstory: Arabella was born July, 1st , 2004 on a rainy night. Her parents were both humans named Tyler Camron and Sophie Camron. She has no siblings. Now as I was saying, she was born during a big storm. A rainbow/pastel lighting bolt struck the old rickity house just as Arabella was coming out of the whom. From that she got a horn and magic powers. Her and her parents were shunned by socitiy for having a " Freakish baby". So her father built a small cottage in the woods to house their small family. Time passed and when she was 13 her parents found an old flyer for the academy. They contacted the head of the school and enrolled Arabella. She's been at this academy ever since then.
Likes: Pastel colors and hanging with friends
Hates: stupid people
Appearance: https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/Y1C...


message 279: by Ken (Got Shot Yet Again), *Stupid Noises* (new)

Ken (Got Shot Yet Again) (thesaladmaniscomming) | 2535 comments Mod
Maria and James approved.


Bailey and Arabella need more detail.


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what about lyra?


message 281: by All_Hales (last edited May 27, 2021 05:30AM) (new)

All_Hales  | 9 comments Ken *Anarchy Mama* wrote: "Maria and James approved.


Bailey and Arabella need more detail."


What kind of detail?


message 282: by Ken (Got Shot Yet Again), *Stupid Noises* (new)

Ken (Got Shot Yet Again) (thesaladmaniscomming) | 2535 comments Mod
A history would be nice but approved.


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All_Hales  | 9 comments Thx


message 284: by Ken (Got Shot Yet Again), *Stupid Noises* (new)

Ken (Got Shot Yet Again) (thesaladmaniscomming) | 2535 comments Mod
Galxay_Granger wrote: "Thx"

I was talking about Lyra...


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Ken *Anarchy Mama* wrote: "Galxay_Granger wrote: "Thx"

I was talking about Lyra..."


oh ok, i will see if i can figure something out for her, but what i usually do is when i start to rp my ocs i start adding to their histories. its easier that way lol


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Ken (Got Shot Yet Again) (thesaladmaniscomming) | 2535 comments Mod
Galxay_Granger wrote: "Ken *Anarchy Mama* wrote: "Maria and James approved.


Bailey and Arabella need more detail."

What kind of detail?"

Description of physical appearance, a bit more flushed out personality, Also do you mean centaur for the bottom one?


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All_Hales  | 9 comments Ken *Anarchy Mama* wrote: "Galxay_Granger wrote: "Thx"

I was talking about Lyra..."


I know I was thanking you for telling me what to add.


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Ken (Got Shot Yet Again) (thesaladmaniscomming) | 2535 comments Mod
Galxay_Granger wrote: "Ken *Anarchy Mama* wrote: "Galxay_Granger wrote: "Thx"

I was talking about Lyra..."

I know I was thanking you for telling me what to add."


Oh, sorry


message 289: by All_Hales (last edited May 27, 2021 06:07AM) (new)

All_Hales  | 9 comments It's okay. I added some more backstory and personallity for you.


message 290: by Ken (Got Shot Yet Again), *Stupid Noises* (new)

Ken (Got Shot Yet Again) (thesaladmaniscomming) | 2535 comments Mod
Top one needs a bit more backstory work. Also its brought not drought I think.


message 291: by All_Hales (new)

All_Hales  | 9 comments How does Arabella look now? I added moore backstory and personallity.


message 292: by Ken (Got Shot Yet Again), *Stupid Noises* (new)

Ken (Got Shot Yet Again) (thesaladmaniscomming) | 2535 comments Mod
Good enough, approved


message 293: by All_Hales (new)

All_Hales  | 9 comments Thx, for the approval this time lol.


message 294: by leah-megan (new)

leah-megan  ( ♥meg♥ )

So Marina is approved?




message 295: by Ken (Got Shot Yet Again), *Stupid Noises* (new)

Ken (Got Shot Yet Again) (thesaladmaniscomming) | 2535 comments Mod
Ken *Anarchy Mama* wrote: "Maria and James approved."


message 296: by leah-megan (new)

leah-megan  ( ♥meg♥ )

Thank you, I was confused because her name is Marina. Lol




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Ken (Got Shot Yet Again) (thesaladmaniscomming) | 2535 comments Mod
Oof


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leah-megan  ( ♥meg♥ )

:)




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Ken (Got Shot Yet Again) (thesaladmaniscomming) | 2535 comments Mod
Artoria wrote: "Name: Mina Darkthorn
Gender: Female
Age: Still a young vampire so 175
Race: Elf Turned Vampire
Sexuality: Pan
Personality: Mina is a kind girl, sometimes overthinking herself and such. But she try ..."


Approved, partly because she so cute


message 300: by Artoria (new)

Artoria | 100 comments btw sky, you wrote half-angle, and not angel


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