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Andres, Thaumaturge
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Sep 21, 2020 01:42PM

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2. Skyrim or largest sandbox at the time without field guide.
3. Animal crossing with time controls locked.
4. League of Legends
5. Warcraft 3 expansion with world editor.
If this is unacceptable then please ONLY give me a life subscription to crunchyroll and Pizza hut.

1. World of Warcraft 3
2. Pokemon Soul Silver
3. Yu-Gi-Oh XD
4. Pokemon Heart Gold
5. Plants vs Zombies
XD

My character attacked someone in a dream, and now he woke up realizing that his dream might really have happen in real life. how can I show this surge of anxiety and panic in him without sounding melodramatic?


My character attacked someone in a dream, and now he woke up realizing that his dream ..."
Also body language. You can look up "body language that shows ____ " on google and it will pull up articles on the subject.

He looked around his room, familiarizing himself with his whereabouts. He swallowed dryly, his forehead beaded with a cold sweat. He rubbed his shaking hand, speaking to it.
"It was only a dream." He sighed in relief. "Just a dream."

His bed was tussled. No, not tussled, ruined. The sheets were lying on the opposite side of the room. The mattress was frayed as though a cat had been using it as his personal scratching post.
Something lingered in the back of his mind, something that didn't quite feel right. He breathed in through his nose, attempting to calm his nerves. What had he been dreaming about? Whatever it was it caused him to create this mess and that filled him with worry.

And I'm nearly done with that scene! Just a few more edits. YeY!