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Critique Partners and Swaps > CP or Beta Swap/LGBT YA/Complete at 72,000 words

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Author56 | 110 comments I would be willing to read it. I am a young lesbian, so I could provide feedback on those elements. I am also looking for feedback for my novel. It's YA fantasy of around the same length (74K). Here's the description:
Detori hates the idea of marriage. She decides to do the only other option; become a priest. Even better, being a priest would mean moving to a monastery, a place where she could hide her identity as a refugee and avoid the hatred she's grown up with.
Leona would do anything to keep her friendship with Detori. Including going to the monastery with her.
But at the monastery, xenophobic priests there are plotting to destroy all of Detori's people. Including Detori. Leona receives information about their plan, and has to save her friend before it's too late.
Email me at lilliancm@gmail.com if you're interested.


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