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[Jonetta]

Mercy and Truman get married! Your thoughts about their wedding, gift from Ollie and Kaylie and her reconciliation with her father?

[Charlene]

I was glad we got to the wedding, just in time, before the book ran out of pages. I would have liked a few more pages of preparation or of Mercy and Truman, Ollie and Kaylie coming to terms with what happened.

[Susan]

Beautiful wedding and so glad her father finally came to his senses. Too bad it takes a fatal sickness to bring them together. Love Ollie and Kaylie. What a great gift.

[Robin]

I liked that we got the wedding in this book. I really didn't think it would go that far in the future.

Loved the gift from Ollie and Kaylie. What a great idea.

[Jonetta]

I’m sorry this was so rushed. I would have loved to experience more but I’m also happy they got married. Such a thoughtful gift from Ollie and Kaylie.

Karl? Nice first step. I need more about his future behavior to give him a permanent pass.

[Sharon]

I loved the gift. That was one of those special gifts that touch the heart.

I'm with you. They needed a few more pages devoted to the wedding. When Kaylie told Mercy that Levi was there I admit I got a little teary.

Also missing:

Kaylie and Ollie were so upset when Truman told them that Mercy was missing. Elliot missed an opportunity to have them talk through their feelings when Mercy came home.

I wanted to see Karl talk to Mercy even if it was only a couple paragraphs. I felt a little cheated at the end.

[Jonetta]

Sharon wrote: "Kaylie and Ollie were so upset when Truman told them that Mercy was missing. Elliot missed an opportunity to have them talk through their feelings when Mercy came home.

I wanted to see Karl talk to Mercy even if it was only a couple paragraphs. I felt a little cheated at the end...."

I struggled trying to define what was missing for me. You stated it perfectly, Sharon.

[Lisa - (Aussie Girl)]

Yes, I would have liked to see the scene between Karl and Mercy. Definitely an omission in the story.