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Nastasia Bishop-McHugh | 63 comments Hello!

I'd be very interested in swapping the first 5 chapters of my story with someone else's :)
And then swapping more chapters as time goes on!

It's a fantasy, hovering between adult and YA but probably a little more YA leaning.
Here's a WIP outline, let me know if of any interest. Thanks for your consideration! :)

Title: Kingdom of Stardust

"In an age where natural, magikal ability has been lost, only a physical spark can bring out the power within.

In the district of Sula, Zola Norsova is grieving her Grandfather's death when she is captured by the sovereign. King Lucan believes her to be his long lost niece but when the rebel group known as The Kasi find her missing, they'll do everything they can to get her back.
But does Zola want to be saved? The more she learns of her Grandfather's mysterious past, the more she is drawn in to the delights of the royal city of Jorvik.

Two generations back, Zola's grandmother, Mika, has risen up the ranks in The Kasi rebel group to become leader of the division of saboteurs. When a falling star leads to a chance encounter with a Prince-on-the-run, does she stay true to her rebel cause or risk everything to help him? "

Told in multiple viewpoints across two generations. The story is full of magik, Viking inspired fashion and fantasy technology.


message 2: by Shreya (new)

Shreya Vijay (shreyavijay) | 37 comments Nastasia wrote: "Hello!

I'd be very interested in swapping the first 5 chapters of my story with someone else's :)
And then swapping more chapters as time goes on!

It's a fantasy, hovering between adult and ..."


Hi Nastasia

The blurb sounds promising. I would love to Beta Read the book for you. Could you drop me a mail at vshreyatu@gmail.com and we can take it from there? :)

Have a Great day. :)


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