Storm and Silence
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Valentina wrote: "This book is the best book on Wattpad. Sir Rob has excellent grammar and spelling. His understanding on every subject is pure magic. His characters are hilarious and more importantly, relatable. :D..."Yes!! I love this book. I'm glad I have more to look forward to. :)
Totally a fan, but the editor in me has to disagree. While I can't fault the plot and have to admit that the sheer length of the book itself is a mark of his dedication, I'd have to say that of all things, it is his grammar that I find fault in. He makes an effort to right in an elevated tone, and in doing so honestly makes it too wordy.
Katie wrote: "Totally a fan, but the editor in me has to disagree. While I can't fault the plot and have to admit that the sheer length of the book itself is a mark of his dedication, I'd have to say that of all..."A lot of the writings, by women, at the time the story is placed were rather wordy. A stylistic choice is not a fault in grammar. When I first started editing for a company that produces a lot of historical-esque writings that was one of the biggest adaptations I had to make note of. That being said there are a couple of places that come to mind that do not fit the mold; though, those were typically on weeks he released the chapter early.
I am totally in love with the characters of Lilly and Mr Ambrose. Loved the way they have made Ifrit sound so cute :)Hats off to Sir Rob :)
Katie wrote: "Totally a fan, but the editor in me has to disagree. While I can't fault the plot and have to admit that the sheer length of the book itself is a mark of his dedication, I'd have to say that of all..."I think you mean write Katie. You don't right a book, you write it.
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Mr. Ambrose is the classic sexy businessman who takes no crap until he meets Lilly. I love their relationship and dialogue with each other. It's pure entertainment!
But this book has more than just main characters?! Karim is the coolest body guard. Lilly's sisters are at times super annoying, but all of them have a special place in my heart.
My only concern is: the ending.
THE ENDING!!!
THIS BOOK HAS A SEQUEL.
I REPEAT! A SEQUEL.
I will say nothing more.