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message 2001: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I don't hate you. I could never hate you," he said softly.


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She smiled. "That's okay."


message 2003: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He nodded and stared out her window, not moving closer to her but not leaving.


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"Dave I'm sorry for everything I did." She said. She looked at him. "You probably won't believe since they give me a lot of medicine."


message 2005: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I know," he said. "But words are nothing without actions." He told her.


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"Well I'm sorry I haven't been the same girl that you remember." She whispered.


message 2007: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He gave her a sad smile but said nothing.


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She bit her lip. "I'm sorry if you don't love me anymore."


message 2009: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I love you more than myself," he informed her.


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She smiled some. "That's nice I love you a lot too and I want to get better. I don't want to lose anyone." She whispered. Then her eyes wandered around the room. "Come sit by me please " she begged.


message 2011: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He brought a chair and put if in front of her bed before he sat down.


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She smiled. "You came." She said. "I'm so happy to see you."


message 2013: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He said nothing.


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"Dave why aren't you answering me." She said. "Fine let's do game let's tell each other out favorite memory."


message 2015: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "The waterfall," he said, "our first kiss was there." He was upset by that too. She chose to try to kill herself in the place he was happiest most. He hated the place now.


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"Mine was that time when we were on a our way home from the amusement park and I was tired. You let me put my head on your lap that was when I was so happy because that closes thing I came to being on your lap." She said with a smile." Dave why are you down."


message 2017: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "What?" He asked confused.


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"You look sad and upset and I asked why." She said.


message 2019: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Because I am," he said simply.


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She wanted to make him happy. "Dave please be happy."


message 2021: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I'm trying," he shrugged.


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She nodded. "Do you guys want me?"


message 2023: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Yes."


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She smiled some. "Dave do you think I should do th medicine?"


message 2025: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Yes, that and the therapy," he said.


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She looked at him. "Okay I will do it." She said.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He nodded.


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She looked at him some. "Please tell your not mad at me."


message 2029: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Not anymore," he said quietly.


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She smiled.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He stared out of the window.


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She looked at him some. "Dave what can I do to make it up to you"


message 2033: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Stop shouting at me is a starter," he said.


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"I only did that once" she said.


message 2035: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "But you still did it," he shrugged.


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She didn't want to argue. "Well you called me a bitch and said my parents cared about me when they don't." She said. "It doesn't matter I'm trying to make it up too" she said.


message 2037: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I didn't call you a bitch, I told you you were acting like a selfish bitch. You're family does care about you, but you're being insensitive." He stood up again.


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"I'm sorry" She whispered. "Please don't go."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He just walked closer to the window and leaned on it.


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"I didn't mean to act anyway I was hurting" she said


message 2041: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "And that's your problem. When you hurt, you get insensitive. You don't give a fuck about others and what others feel," he said.


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She was about to say some but she didn't. She bit her lip. "I'm not going to respond because I will make you just mad." She said.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Good," he said.


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She looked at him. "But your making me mad and it all anyone had to do was comfort me and say things will.be okay " she hissed through her teeth.


message 2045: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "You know I can't hug you," he said, "and I tried. Instead you took it personally." He said, "everyones's making you mad because you can't stop think about anyone but yourself. Earlier, you're mother begged you home. When your father was breaking down she went to comfort him while you lay fine in a comfortable hospital bed. Tell me how the fuck that's not self centered and selfish?"


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"Your lying yeah I was fine appearance rise but all I wanted was someone to be near me and tell it was fine. I wasn't fine I was hurting." She said."I didn't take it personally I hurt you because everytime you do hug me you can't breath I'm physically hurting you" she snapped. "Saying that I want you to stop hugging me is so selfish because that is so self centered" she said. "I totally want you pasting out because you can't breath " she said. She got up and walked over to him. "I'm not selfish" Her blue eyes wandered to his face "I ran away because I was blacked mail to the person warned for worse things. That makes me selfish for trying to protect every I love." She said. "I love you now and then and if leaving you were to protect you I would." She said. "The only time I'm don't hurt anyone is when I'm gone and away and or drugged up." She was letting all her anger go. "And if you walk out of this room again it's telling me you don't want me because I have an anger problem it makes me feel worse than I did. I'm not touching you or shouting you. All I want is you and my family's comfort is that much to ask for. And maybe I do get so upset that I don't think about anyone and maybe I do need help. But one thing I do need for sure is you."


message 2047: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "See, you do take it personally. Its not just you I can't touch or hug. It's everyone. You don't know how much it hurts seeing you hurt. Instead of running away you could have told the fucking police. Fuck you could have told me but instead you chose to fucking run away and motherfucking hurt everyone. I'm not defending myself. I don't give one fuck about myself but your parents did everything for you but all you see is the negative shit and the bad shit. Have you even noticed how your fathers eyes light up when he sees you? Or when you're mother thought she was a bad mother how much it killed her?" He asked. "No. You see nothing but yourself. Nothing." He said, "you can't look at them without thinking your the reason for their pain well fucking check again because there's a whole lot of other shit going on other than KYLEE. And you know what? I might just walk out the door and never come back. Actually find someone who gives a shit and actually wants me the way I am. Maybe even someone broken so we can complete each other because I'm fucking tired of being screwed over by you and alway being your second choice! It hurts. The one person you want, doesn't want you first. You know what, Ky? Go suck a dick because you're not the only one with anger management problems and your not the only one with a heart. Until you get your shit together, don't call me or even bother to call because I'm done." He stormed out.


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She collapsed on the floor crying. She lost the one person she wanted was gone. She was going to get him back. She had too. She was afraid if she didn't she would go crazy.

~~~~~~~

Couple months later Kylee was doing good. She was on the pills that they wanted her on. She was in therapy and she kept in touch with her brother who gave her news about her dad and his cancer and her mom. She was going to drive up to see them today. A surprise she was happy that she could feel ready to see her parents. She drove up the long drive way and knocked on the door.


message 2049: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments A couple of months later, he was in rehab because he overdosed on meth and was sent by Kylee's parents actually for help because they saw him as a son and wanted to help him. He took a deep breath, it was his first day out in the real world and he was terrified out of his mind. He had made friends and had managed to not fall back into his old bad habits. His first stop was the Grey's house to thank them for everything then he'd be touring the world.


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She waited for someone to answer the door. She was happy. Though she was nervous to see Dave if he was here. She didn't get updated on him. She was herself again. Maybe Dave didn't even want to talk to her. Or even worse he found someone else.


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