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onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"But I have nothing wrong with me." She said. "I'm perfectly fine I was always perfectly fine." She said.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Stop, Ky," he sighed, "we all know thats not true."


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"Yes it is. I have always been fine." She said. "I never had anything wrong with me." She said.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments They both said nothing.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"What did I have wrong with me? Please tell me I would like to be informed because obvious I wasn't." She said.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "You do have anxiety and you are depressed, otherwise you wouldn't have jumped off that waterfall." Dave said, he hadn't told her father about that. He gasped.


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"We all know that didn't happen Dave." She said. "The place where I was standing out was soft from the rain making me fall." She said. "Now I could someone answer my question one what was wrong with me before this?"


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Still those two," he shrugged. Then her dad suddenly started crying, "i'm such a terrible father. I'm a terrible father." He kept saying as he rocked back and forth.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"I never had depression or anxiety." She said. She looked at her dad. "Whats wrong daddy?" Did she do something wrong again? She wondered. She should have died she shouldn't be a burdened to the ones she loved.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He just kept crying and muttering i'm sorry's and that he was a bad father and that he hated himself.


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She turned to Dave. "Look what you did you hurt him by saying I jumped off." She said. "I didn't jump." She was lying of course. But she was also loopy too.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Just because you blame yourself for everything doesn't mean you can blame everyone else too. So, if you'll excuse me, I don't feel like any extra guilt on my shoulders," he said, "i'm going to get an energy drink." He mumbled because he hated coffee.


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She didn't say anything. She wanted to run because it was getting too much for her. She waited for Dave to come back. Her dad wasn't there but he was to busy crying. "I want out of here nothing is wrong with me I'm perfectly fine." She said angrily.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Christian just cried harder and then Ana and Dav came in at the same time. "Christian, whats wrong?" Ana rushed to him and hugged him tightly then made a beeline for her daughter. "I was so worried," she said then went to Christian.


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onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"I dont know whats wrong with he was talking to me then Dave made him this way." She lied


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "She tried killing herself, I told him, now he hates himself," he pushed off the wall. "You know how much i hate bitches, so when you stop being a selfish bitch to me, come talk to me and talk. Not shout," He said and stormed out.


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She nodded her trying to process everything that just happened. "I want to go home when I can go home." She asked.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Ana looked up with tearful eyes as she tried comforting Christian, "tonight." She said.


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She was hurting her family even more. "I don't even know why I'm asking you I can leave without your permission. I am 21" she said.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Why? So you can run away again?" Christian managed to ask again.


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She looked at him. "It's not like anyone wants me here I mean Dave is gone you barley say anything. Mom is more concerned of you and here I am."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Is this how we raised you?" He sobbed, "you keep saying how we're great parents but you don't want anything to do with us." He cried into Ana's chest.

"You're not crying, Ky. You look fine. If I asked you, you wouldn't explain you'd lie and say you were fine," Ana said. "For once in your life, be grateful for what you have, young lady!" Ana said and stood, pulling Christian with her before leaving.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"That is not true. Your the one's who seem not to care." She said. "For what? All you guys have been doing is leaving me." She said. Though they were both gone now. She wanted to leave but wasn't sure. She promise Dave.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "You know what?" Ana said, "go. Leave. We were better off before you came back, at least we weren't being selfish for the last few years." She said and slapped her before she left, crying.


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Her heart broke. She winced at the pain in her face. She looked down. "Dave said you guys cared." She whispered. She decided to stay. She told them to admit her in the physc ward. They moved her there and gave her more medicine that made her loopy and happy. Anything was better than remembering the pain.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "We do- did. But when you keep breaking our hearts over and over with your selfishness, I can't help but be bitter." She said and Christian passed out. When the doctors checked him up, they said he had a cancerous brain tumor.


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She looked at them. "Is daddy going to be okay?" She whispered.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Ana was crying, a lot. She shook her head, no, when Kylee asked.


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The doctor came in. "Good news the tumor can removed but the way you do it is the hard part. Laser surgery has the more successful rate and last about 10min and your home the same day. Then there is regular surgery which could lead to your death. Let me know I will be back." The doctor left.

"Daddy please don't die" She whispered.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He took a deep breath and stared ahead. He was depressed and too tired to say or do anything.
Dave came in, Ana called him.


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"Daddy please answer me." She said.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Dave quietly talked to a sobbing Ana.
Christian said nothing. He stared at nothing ahead. It was evident he was depressed.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
She looked at him and looked down. This as her fault. She made her own father not want to talk to her. She got up slowly. She wanted to cry. Was crying selfish?


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Dave stopped her from leaving, "stop beating yourself up for shit you had no idea would happen." He said firmly. "He wants all of us to leave and leave him alone, it's not just you. He's depressed." Dave was still mad at her but not enough to let her beat herself up for her dads tumor.


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She looked at him and didn't say anything. "It is my fault. My dad refuses to talk to me because of what you did. My mom slaps me in my face. It doesn't matter that my head is hurting. She told me to go ahead and leave. She told me that did care. Not that they do care did." She said. She was slowly breaking down. She didn't realize that it was okay to get mad and it was okay to cry. Much like her father she bottled it up.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He shook his head at her, "whatever." He turned back to Ana. She was too stubborn and selfish, he couldn't even deal with her anymore. She wasn't the girl he fell in love with.


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She thought he would be there for him to comfort her. She started to breath heavily. She walked out letting the tears falling down her face. She had no where to go. Just as she walked out Teddy came.

"I'm so sorry I just heard about everything" He said. "Was that Kylee?" He asked. He paused. "I know you guys probably know this already but I think she is too much like dad to realize anything. I'm worried for her just as much as dad." He said.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Ana ran over to Teddy and hugged her son tightly, breaking down again. Dave shook his head, "


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Dave shook his head, "as much as I want to be there for her, she isn't exactly making that easy." He told Teddy.


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onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
He smiled at his mom. "Its going to be okay dad is fighter." He whispered. As he hugged his mom. He didn't let go of her. He backed up some. "I really want to help Kylee mom she's my little sister and I love her and I know we all love. I'm afraid she is going to do something stupid." Teddy was kind person worried about people around him. He turned to Dave.

"Yeah she is like my dad he isn't always easy to be around but he is great person once you get to know him. And when you get her on those pills to help her she will be as good as new."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Whatever," he said, too tired to deal with her. He liked Teddy, he was cool and nice.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
Kylee didn't go far she since she had no ride. She was in one of the bathrooms crying. Trying to think of what to do next. Every thought told her to kill herself but there was one thought that told her to hold on that there was hope. It turns out she was disturbing people so they brought her back to the room and drugged her putting her on her bed. She was soon fast a sleep.

"We had to drug your daughter because she wouldn't come back to her room. I think she is ready to leave but she needs her family to help her detox and get her on some of the pills we have." Her doctor said. "If you guys don't want to do this we will let her go own her way."

Teddy kept quite turning to his mom.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I don't know what to do," Ana cried, "she hates me. You go talk to her, Teddy."
"She hates me too," Dave said indifferently.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"Guys she doesn't hate you." He said. He walked to her room. "Hi." He whispered softly.

Her eyes opened some. "Big brother where is mommy and Dave." She whispered.

"Right now they both think you hate them." He said. She looked at him they thought they hated her. She didn't say anything. "Its okay to be upset and cry." He waited for a response but nothing. "Look they want to you to have your family to help you or they will send you on your own."

"Family? What family everyone I ever cared about hates me enough to make a lie up. I don't hate them if anything they hate me. I tried talking to Dave he doesn't even care anymore. My parents don't care. What do I have left? Nothing."

Teddy looked at her understanding where she was coming from but at the same time knowing where they were coming from. "They don't hate their upset at you and vice versa"He hated the fact that it came to that. "Listen I'm going to talk to them and I will be back." He walked to the back to the other room.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Ana was back with Christian and crying while she hugged him. Dave said nothing.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"Guys she loves you so much but she thinks you guys don't want her any more. " He said. "I know that isn't true." He took a deep breath. "Dave do you want to go see her? They are putting her on a lot of sedatives and pain medicine for her bump on the head so she will be loopy."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He nodded and went off to talk to her, even though he was still mad at her.


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"Hi Dave " she said smiling and waving.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He smiled sadly and stood next to the door, "hello, Ky."


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She smiled. "Dave big brother says you don't hate me She said. "That means we can be boyfriend and girlfriend."


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