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She heard Dave shout her name. She knew there was only a few more moments before she could jump and get away with it. She closed her eyes and took the last step to the edge. She jumped when she was hit the water she hit her head knocking her unconscious


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He jumped right in after her. He swam until he found her and when he did, he pulled her to shore. He picked her up and ran with her to her place to call an ambulance, his phone drenched.


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She laid there limply in his arms. She still had a pulse barley though.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He was crying by the time they had her safely in a hospital bed. He hugged her to him as he cried, "how could you do this? Again?"


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Her eyes started to fluttered some. She started to regain conscious. She heard his words at a muffle. All she heard was the word again and then she instantly felt worse than she did.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He cried for hours as he hugged her, eventually falling asleep next to her.


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She opened her eyes hours later. She winced at the pain her head. She noticed Dave beside her. She smiled some.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He was still asleep, his face tear stained.


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She looked around. Confused on how she got here. She was suppose to be dead. He looked sad. She didn't mean to hurt him more. She felt like she hurt everyone no matter what.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He woke up moments later.


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She saw that he was awake.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Kylee," he whispered and started crying again.


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"Dave why am I here?" She asked.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "You almost died," he whispered, "thats why."


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She nodded some. "I'm sorry." She said. "I felt like I was hurting you guys."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He was still crying as he hugged her.


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She looked at him. "David I'm sorry did that I broke down and felt bad "


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He nodded, telling her he forgave her.


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She smiled weakly. "Where's my parents." She whispered


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "You're dad wouldn't let your mum stay the night, andhe went to get coffee," he said as he wiped his own tears. "He wouldn't let me off the bed, wanting me to be there for you."


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She nodded her head.

The doctor came in. "I have a few questions. Do you think you are depressed?" He asked. "If your boyfriend can answer for you."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He sat up quietly and didn't say anything.


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"I don't think I'm depressed. I don't have any anxiety either. And my boyfriend will agree with me." She said.

"Do you?" The doctor asked turning towards Dave.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Do I have depression?" He raised his eyebrows, "whatever mental illness I have, I go to therapy and i am getting better."


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onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"No you girlfriend do you think she has depression or anxiety?" he said.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He looked at her, "yes. And paranoia."


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She didn't say anything getting upset. She wasn't either of those things.

"Okay she will deny it so I will be asking people close to her. Is her dad around?"


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "He went to get coffee," he said and tightened his arms around her.


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He nodded. "Okay well I have other runs to make but I will be back." He said and left the room.

Kylee stayed there upset and angry. She was not paranoid.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Suddenly his face turned bright red from lack of breath.


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"You can let go of me I know you can't hold me." She whispered softly.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments When she said that he scrambled out of the bed and sat in a corner, squeezing his eyes shut as he concentrated on calming down and breathing.


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She saw that he left and the comfort was gone. She hurt him again he couldn't breath because of her.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He managed to calm down and stand up. He sighed with relief and sat on a chair next to her. He clasped her hands in his.


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She smiled a little bit. "I'm fine." She whispered. "Can't I go home?" She didn't think there was nothing wrong with her.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "They didn't tell me anything but they told your dad."


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"Oh they probably didn't because your not related." She said. "I hope he comes back soon I want to know."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He nodded, "okayy."


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She closed her eyes not having the strength to hold them up.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Go to sleep," he requested softly.


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She smiled softly. Wincing at the pain in her head. "It hurts" she whispered.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Here are your meds," he smiled and reached for them and a water bottle.


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She sat up some taking the pills.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He sat back down and kissed her head again.


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She relaxed some. They were giving her pain pills plus the stuff on the iv. It was making her a little loopy. "Where's daddy?" She asked.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I'm here," he whispered hoarsely.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"Daddy Dave was making fun of telling the doctors that I was depressed and have anxiety. He also said I had paranoia." She said. She looked happy and relaxed something she wasn't for a long time.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Dave laughed softly and kissed her hand. Christian made his way to the bed and sat on it. "Baby, the doctor said you need to go to therapy sessions," he explained softly.


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"Daddy I'm not crazy I'm perfectly fine." She said. "See Dave keeps laughing at me it isn't funny."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Having a mental disorder is nothing to be ashamed of baby, a mental disorder doesn't mean your crazy," he said softly. Dave's laughs ceased because she was being serious. Christian continued, "it's just to make sure your okay." He said.


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