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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I knew it was you," he whispered and started crying again as he hugged his daughter tightly.


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She didn't move. "I'm sorry daddy for leaving." She whispered.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Just don't do it again, please," he whispered as he cried into her neck.


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"It wasn't my fault I had to." She said softly.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments His arms just tightened around her.
Dave leaned against the door and watched them with a neutral face, knowing her father would probably blame him for not telling him.


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She smiled some. "Daddy your squeezing me." She said.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Sorry, I just missed you so much," he whispered. Then he caught Daves gaze and was immediately cross. "You knew about this!" He almost shouted.


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She nodded and looked over to Dave. "Yeah he did though the fact is I was drunk and I didn't want to tell anyone but he found out in his own." She said.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Dave kept quiet, "I respect Ky enough to respect her decision," he said and Christians face went red, "get out, I never want to see you again!"


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"Daddy no Dave did nothing wrong." She said.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He ignored her, "get out." He said again and Dave nodded and opened the door to leave. "See you around, Ky."


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After everything that happened. "Don't you dare leave Dave you promise..." Not to hurt me. She kept that to herself.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He stood next to the door, "i'll see you next to the car, okay?" He asked, his eyes flickering to her dad, wanting to give her time to talk to him.


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She looked at him nodded.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He nodded and left, going down to the car.


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She watched him walk away.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Christian stood to the side and watched her.


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She slowly turned to her dad. "You didn't have to do that." She said.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Yes I did, he should have told us," he said, cross but not shouting and not at her.


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She looked at him. "He was respecting my choice." She said. "Not yours or his mine." She looked at her dad. He seemed more concerned about Dave then why she left. She wasn't going to say anything.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He took a deep breath, "fine." He stared out the window for a while, "why did you leave?" He whispered. "You broke mine and your mums heart," he said quietly.


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"Because I was blacked mailed but I when I tried telling you that you more concerned on the fact of the video of me drunk which was part of the black mail." She said.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "What?" He whispered, his face falling.


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"I said I was blacked mailed. I got a letter saying if I didn't leave then the person will show you the video. I thought nothing of it until it actually happen." She said.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I'm so sorry," he started crying again. "I didn't know." He said.


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She nodded. "It's okay." She said.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Come on, let's go home," he said as he wiped his face.


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"I want to know how you can drop it? I waited for you and cried everyday waiting for you to come fine me and tell me everything was going to be okay but you didn't. You say you looked everywhere obviously you didn't or you would have found me in California in L.A." she said. "Then you had the nerve to yell at Dave. He never did anything wrong to you. He was.respecting my choice." She said snapped. She was.hurt.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "After everything, you can't say that." He shook his head as more tears dripped down his face. "Not after you changed your name and the way you look and everything else. That doesn't make it easier to find you," he said, "what do you expect me to do? Cry? I'm making a fool of myself right now doing so." He said, "you broke us, Kylee. We don't know what to do about it other than try to move on." He buried his face in his hands.


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She was making a fool out him. "I understand okay. I broke you guys. I caused your guys problems. Dave should have said something to you. Because we wouldn't want to leave. I was going to decided on today's interview if you really want me back. Because I was convince that you would be angry and upset at me. But Dave reassured me." She said. She had a temper like her dad. "Call Dave when your ready to talk to us both." She said and turned away. She walked down the stairs to Dave's car.

"Dave I'm rude I got really mad him for shouting at you"


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I'm sorry, Ky," he said then almost punched the window next to him.

"You shouldn't have," he sighed.


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"I'm sorry I did he told me that he was making fool of himself. I knew he liked to gloat but I didn't know crying because he found his long lost daughter was bad " she said. "Then out of blue he just dropped it. He didn't say anything like I'm sorry I will make sure something like that wouldn't happen again." She whispered.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "You shouldn't be so hard on him," he said, wishing he could wrap his arms around her and comfort her.


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"Yeah I know. Then he said I broke them. I mean I knew I left I came back but should you say that to someone." She whispered. "Then I said call if your ready to talk to both of us. He had no right to shout at you."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He sighed but didn't Argue, knowing there was no use because she was just too stubborn.


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She looked at him. "I thought he would be more comforting to me Dave."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I'm sorry." He said quietly, knowing this probably meant she was leaving again.


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She looked at him. "It's fine I guess I won't be going to his house anytime." She said.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He nodded, "you can stay at my house."


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"Okay." She whispered. "I remember where you live I just want some time to myself to think about it." She felt awful and shouldn't be alone because she is a flight risk.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Before she could finish what she was saying, he hauled her over his shoulder. "Not an option," he said and took her to the other side of the car.


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"Let me go please" she said. Trying to get lose but failed. "You can't control what I do or not do." She shouted.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He put her down and walked off, not letting himself flinch when she shouted at him.


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She watched him walked off. She let the tears come to her face. May be if she sat and waited for him he would come back. "I'm sorry." She whispered. Was he going to leave her?


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Are you going to stop shouting at me?" He asked, his tone bitter.


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She looked at him softly some. "I didn't mean to shout." She said.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "You know how much I hate shouting, like I hate touching. I can't deal with you if you're going to shout," he said quietly.


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She looked at him. He just said that. Her heart broke some. This day was supposed to be the best day now it was the worse day. "I'm sorry I shouldn't have came back you guys would have been fine and lived without me." She said. She felt bad like everything was her fault. She just wanted someone there to comfort her and tell her things will be okay.


message 1799: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I don't know what happened in Cali to make you like this but the Kylee I knew, respected my boundaries like I respect hers," he said. "I'm not trying to hurt you, but that's reality and as much as I want to comfort and help you, I can't do it if your going to shout. Or touch at that matter." He raised his hand sup in defense.


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"The Kylee you knew was also just a friend who had nothing to worry about." She said. "The girl you knew didn't need the comforting because she had her family to do it. And now she has none of that and the one person who she thought she had got mad at her" she said.

"I care about your about your boundaries but you picked me up like I was nothing." She said. "Like I was going to run off."


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