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message 1551: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I love you," he whispered.


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She smiled at him. "I love you too." She said. "I will always be with you."


message 1553: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Good," he said softly.


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Her eyes wandered some. "If I weren't to stay what would you do?"


message 1555: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I don't know," he shrugged, "go back to doing nothing with my life." He said.


message 1556: by onceuponatimeareview (last edited Mar 09, 2015 08:00AM) (new)

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She bit her lip some. What was she suppose to do? She was leaving her choice in her dads hands. "David" She never used his real name. "I don't want you to go back to your life of nothing and I shouldn't play around toying with you on a little thread of hope that I will stay." She whispered. She took a deep breath. "I want to be with you forever and in order to do that I will have to stay." She said.


message 1557: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Then stay," he pleaded, turning to her. "You more than anyone know that I'm not best when Im left alone. I don't know what I'll do when looking for you used to distract me all the time from missing you."


message 1558: by onceuponatimeareview (last edited Mar 09, 2015 08:14AM) (new)

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"Why couldn't you come with me?" She shouldn't have asked that. "I'm sorry for asking that. I really am." She bit her lip. "I should go do something I feel like I'm playing with you and leading you on." She said. Those three words I will stay were hard to say. But with that came so many happy moments but also a chance of getting hurt.


message 1559: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I don't have the money remember," he shrugged.


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"I'm sorry you know its hard for me to be commitment to people." She whispered. "I know we all have our demons." Her body turned around. "I don't want to hurt you or the fact that I could get hurt." She said.


message 1561: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I know. But I don't mind being hurt by you."


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She looked at him and listen to him. "I will stay." She said. "I don't want to lose you again. I don't want to be without you ever again." She whispered.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He crashed his lips to hers and kissed her deeply.


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She let him kissing her. She didn't touch him. She just stood there enjoying the kiss.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He pulled back when he got too breathless.


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She smiled at him. She didn't know what say. There wasn't anything. She was staying. "You know my dad will probably want me to stay at the house."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I know," he shrugged. "So?"


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"So maybe we could like I don't get an apartment together?" She asked. "I mean your place is nice but its not like ours." She looked at him. "I'm going to fast aren't I?"


message 1569: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "No, you're not but I need a bit more time and I doubt your dad would say yes," he shrugged.


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She nodded her head. "Yeah your right he will probably say no any ways." She said. "We could I don't know go on a few dates." She was trying to push for couple things that she read or watch. Truth is she was nervous of getting hurt but she didn't want to show it. She knew he was the sweetest guy and would never hurt her.


message 1571: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "We will," he promised, "we'll do a lot of things." He smiled.


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She smiled all of her worry gone.


message 1573: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Just..." He took one of her hands and kissed it, "be patient."


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"Okay" She smiled. "I will be patient for you and you only "


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Good," he smiled, glad.


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She smiled


message 1577: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He smiled back.


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"Thank you." She said. "I'm happy that I have you "


message 1579: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I'm happy your happy."


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She smiled.


message 1581: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He stretched and smiled.


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She looked at him. "Can we do something?"


message 1583: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Like what?" He asked softly.


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"Like lunch or maybe a movie. Or we could go to the ice cream place and tried to eat we never done that when we were younger." She said.


message 1585: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He laughed, "let's go." He stood.


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She smiled. "I think we can win this." She said.


message 1587: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He grinned and grabbed his wallet and his car keys. "Lets go." He said and led her out.


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She smiled some and walked out following him to his car.


message 1589: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He held the doors open for her before going to the drivers side.


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She slid in sitting down smiling some.


message 1591: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He smiled and drove off.


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She was happy.


message 1593: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He stopped in ront of an ice cream shop.


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She looked at the ice cream shop. "This is going to be fun"


message 1595: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He grinned and got down, opening the door for her.


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She smiled and got out. "Ready"


message 1597: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Ready," he grinned and went inside with her.


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She flashed a smile back. "Duh I been ready my whole life." She joked.


message 1599: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He laughed, "you start."


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"Okay" She said as they brought out the huge ice cream sundae packed full of everything you can thing of. "Uh this is bigger than I remember it." She whispered.


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