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message 1351: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I'll take you both to my place, just until you make your mind up," he said quietly and watched her walk away. He sighed and told the security to get the driver before telling Mr. Grey, "I'd hate to leave early but should go home. I'm really tired today and my cars in the garage. I took a ride in my friends lorry," Mr. Grey nodded, looking at him a bit worriedly. "Remember, don't hesitate to call if you need anything, son."


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
She couldn't find her friend. She swore under breath and went to find Dave. She found him talking to her dad. She walked up stumbling hoping David wouldn't be mad at her for drinking some more. "I couldn't find her." Not saying she probably went off with her brother. "Oh hi Mr.Grey." She said.


message 1353: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Hello, Lillian," Christian smiled
Dave forced a smile, "It's okay," he said. "Well, Mr. Grey, I should be on my way. I'll see you tomorrow." He said before pulling Kylee along to find her brother.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"Hi Dave and I have to find my best friend who is most likely sleeping with my...." She was cut off as she was pulled along. "Why did you do that your afraid I will tell him who I am?" She said.


message 1355: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "You're not sober, I don't want you to make any decisions you might regret later," he said quietly, "lets find your brother. If she's with him, we can leave her and tell him to bring her to my place tomorrow." He banged on her brothers door.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
She looked at him. "So are you mad at me for drinking some more" She asked as they knocked on her brothers door.

Her brother opened the door. Teddy stood there. "What I'm kinda of busy here?" He said. "Oh you look so familiar have we meant?"

"No." She said softly.


message 1357: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "No," He sighed and ignored Teddy's question. "Bro, Is her friend..." He realised he didn't know her friends name. He looked at Kylee for answers.


message 1358: by onceuponatimeareview (last edited Feb 25, 2015 08:43AM) (new)

onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"Addison." She said.

"I said I'm busy my lady friend and I are talking and doing things so scram." Teddy said.


message 1359: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Okay, ask her what his name is at least. If it's Lillian's friend then bring her to my place tomorrow." He crossed his arms.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"Her name is Addi." He said. "Now go." He shut the door.

"Thats her." She whispered. "We can go now." She said.


message 1361: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He nodded and took her hand, leading her outside to the car. He nodded at the driver who held the door open.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
She smiled and walked in. "Are you mad at me for leaving?" She asked.


message 1363: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "No," He said, "I used to be but not anymore."


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"Thats really good. I do regret leaving you guys I was just didn't know what else would happen and he wouldn't listen" She whispered.


message 1365: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He leaned forward and closed the window, separating them from the driver. "I'm not mad at you, but that doesn't mean I didn't wish you'd talk to me."


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"I thought it would go away." She said. "Look I still really like you but I know I have to earn your trust back."


message 1367: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Yeh, you do," he said quietly as he sat back. He stayed quiet then said, "I still don't remember anything."


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
She looked at him and nodded. "Remember what?" She asked confused.


message 1369: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "What happened before my parents adopted me," he said quietly, "the police wont stop pressuring me," he admitted. He wasn't trying to make her feel guilty, but he needed a friend.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"I'm sorry I really am." She said. "It's okay you will remember someday but today's not the day"She looked up at him. "Today's the day you get your best friend back"


message 1371: by Eden (last edited Feb 25, 2015 10:37AM) (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "It's okay," he said softly then said, "is that drunk Lillian, sober Lillian, drunk Kylee or sober Kylee talking? They all seem like different people." He tried teasing.


message 1372: by onceuponatimeareview (last edited Feb 25, 2015 10:40AM) (new)

onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
She smiled and laughed a little. "I guess I feel a little sober but I normally don't drink I just got carried away." She paused. "We are all the same."


message 1373: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He nodded, "well, I hope what your saying is what sober whoever you are would agree with." He said quietly.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"You think I'm going to regret saying that you have your best friend back?" She asked.


message 1375: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "No, but your not fully sober yet. I want to hear sober you say it too," he shrugged.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
She nodded her head. "Oh okay" she said. "I almost sober does that count."


message 1377: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I think so," he sighed.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"Cheer up. Please" She asked. Her eyes were slowly closing as she became tired from drinking too much. Her body was going to sleep it off.


message 1379: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Hey, don't sleep, we're almost there," he said softly and a few minuted later they reached. "Come on," he said and got down.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
Her eyes opened slowly. She got up and out of the car still in a drunken haze. "Can you carry me?" She asked. "Come on isn't that what Prince charming is suppose to do?"


message 1381: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I'm not prince charming," he said quietly. "Just.. Don't touch me," he whispered.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
She looked at him. "Why not it's no big deal. You didn't have a problem touching me when we kissed or when we're dancing" She said.


message 1383: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "We already talked about this. I don't mind touching people but Im not very fond of people touching me," he said quietly but picked her up, "when we were kissing I held your hands behind your back. When we were dancing, it was different."


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"An I annoying you?" She asked. "Fine I won't touch you. Maybe we should get you a nice drink so you can chill" She said with a smile. Her body curled into him like it was natural thing for her to do. Then her face paled worried he was going to yell at her.


message 1385: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He tensed and held his breath but said nothing as he took her inside. He laid her down in his bed and kissed her head, "get some sleep." His place wasn't the best. It was rundown and old but it was what he could afford.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"Okay goodnight" She felt bad. Her eyes closed as she drifted off into a deep slumber.


message 1387: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He sighed and went to sleep on the couch.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
The next morning she woke up with an awful headache. She looked around. How did she get here? She bit her lip some this wasn't good. Who knew who she really was? As all of these questions she got up and walked out of the bedroom hoping to sneak out and called for a ride.


message 1389: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Dave was already awake, "hey," he said in his bed head state.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
She looked startled up at him. "Hi." She whispered. She wanted to leave but he was so adorable that way. "Your cute that way." She walked over to him.


message 1391: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "What looks adorable?" He asked, running a hand through his hair as he sat up.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"Your bed head." She smiled and laughed a little. She sat down next to him.


message 1393: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He laughed softly, "so what now?" He asked, "are you staying or are you leaving?"


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
She looked at him. "Well I just can't quit my job." She whispered. "I'm going to stay here for awhile to see if I have anything here I mean I have you but I'm not sure if you feel the same way about me anymore. It would just be easier to go." She sighed. "Anyways have you seen my phone? I didn't have with me in my dress and I thought maybe you had it?"


message 1395: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Um, no," he said about her phone. "Of course I still feel the same way about you, Ky," he said softly, turning to her. "You know your dads rich, right?" He laughed softly. "But there are a lot of job."


message 1396: by onceuponatimeareview (last edited Feb 26, 2015 10:29AM) (new)

onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
She looked at him and laughed. "Yeah I know my dad rich he could probably buy me the new iPhone before it comes out." She said some. "I know there is but down there I'm not Kylee Grey give her a job or you dad will come after you." She smiled. "You do? Even after I left you guys and I hurt you." She said.


message 1397: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I carried you into the house didn't I?" He smiled a bit, a not fake smile. "Well, what did you always go as?"


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
She smiled some. "As Lilian they girl who came from nothing to something. I'm a reporter. Do you think my dad would an interview about the benefit?" She asked.


message 1399: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "You could just take his money and be an interviewer, and use the money," he shrugged.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"But since I'm my own boss I can work from anywhere." She smiled. "Lets go see if he would do interview unless if you want to call and ask him."


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