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message 1301: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He didn't let her reach the door, "tell me why you left and I'll let you go," he leaned on it. "Don't bother lying. I wont even tell anyone that I saw you. Just tell me why," he pleaded. "I know you better than anyone. So, you know you can't run away from me."


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"I know you want to your friend back but I'm not her. My name is Lillian and live in California with my parents. This is my first time here in the state of Washington." She said. "Sorry sir but I'm not the girl your looking for."


message 1303: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Stop it," he said. "Im not letting you go anywhere. Your Kylee. You only dyed your hair. Not even alcohol can make me forget what you looked like and your familiarity,"


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"I'm sorry but I have to go my friend will be worried about me." She said. "I'm not Kylee I'm Lilian" She repeated again.


message 1305: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He moved out of the way, "please," he said quietly. "I love you," he said when she didn't respond. He let her go.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"You can't love someone you just meant." She said walking out of the room. She felt bad really bad. "Some things are better kept in the past."


message 1307: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "It's not easy to let go," he said quietly and brushed pat her.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
She looked at him slowly. She walked to get a drink but one turned into another. Alcohol and her didn't mixed so well after the blackmail video of her drinking too much and saying things she didn't mean her life quickly turned upside down. She was drunk so she just decided to look for Dave.


message 1309: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Dave stood out on the patio and sipped champagne. He had sobered up from the encounter with Kylee and he didn't know whether to drink it away like he always did or think about what happened.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
Kylee was really drunk. She wondered where Dave was. She walked to the patio and found him. "Hi I'm sorry about earlier." She slurred stumbling into him.


message 1311: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He set the champagne down on the railing, "hey," he said softly, holding her up with one hand on her waist, the other on her elbow. She smelt like Champagne. "You're drunk, Lily."


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"It's not Lily" She said like it was obvious that her name was actually Kylee. "I only had a little Champagne. " She had a lot.


message 1313: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Come on, let's get you a bed, Lillian." He said quietly, even though he knew she was Kylee with everything in him.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"No I'm fine I can't go in on a bed." She quickly. "My name isn't Lillian" She repeated disoriented in her drunken state. "I'm Kylee" Her voice quite and slurred.


message 1315: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Shh, don't tell anyone that." he said, putting his forefinger to her lips. "I'll take you and your friend to my place. You can stay there, I'll crash here,"


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She stumbled some more. "Why not this is my benefit" She said. "My friend is like dancing with my brother she won't notice I'm gone."


message 1317: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Lilly, you're drunk okay," he said, "you'll be blabbering about who you are. You left here for a reason, despite not knowing what it is, no one can know your here until sober you wants them to know."


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"I'm not blabbering anything." She said. "I'm just saying things about myself a little meet and greet for my benefit." She repeated. Her eyes wandered as her dad was coming towards them her faced pale. She looked over to Dave.

((Would you mind playing her dad I could if you don't want to.))


message 1319: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments ((What's supposed to happen? He knows it's her?))

He tracked her gaze, "shit," he cursed, "just act like anything but your old self."


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
((I was thinking he would act curious about her? Unless if you think it will add more he if suspects it her?))

"I'm drunk and saying things that I don't want to." She said. "Can I have another drink?"


message 1321: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "No," Dave shook his head just as her father reached them on the balcony. "David, son, how are you?" He patted his shoulder then looked at the girl. "I'm great and this is someone I just met. Her name is Lillian."


message 1322: by onceuponatimeareview (last edited Feb 24, 2015 10:42AM) (new)

onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"But..." Her voice was cut off. She messed this up her dad will know her dad will find out this wouldn't be any good. "Yeah nice to meet you." She said. She was trying to make sure she didn't slur anything. Not wanting to embrass herself.


message 1323: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Well, Lillian, you look nice," He smiled, "I've been wondering what's been distracting David today."


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
What would the old her do? Gloat? "Thanks" She said. She would gloat. Everything was so confusing.


message 1325: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments After a while of studying, he asked, "You look familiar, do I know you from somewhere?" He asked in his formal tone.


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It was all about timing. She had to say everything just the right amount time or her dad could find out that she was lying. She looked up at him dead in the eye. "No I never meant you in person but you are one of the biggest business owners in the world I read articles about and reports on the t.v" She said. "Trust me I would remember if I meant Christian Grey."


message 1327: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He smiled proudly at this, "Well, who are your parents? Maybe I've met one of them."


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"My parents are Mary and Robert Crunch they are both dead they died as soon as I graduated high school." She said.


message 1329: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Oh, wow. I'm sorry to hear so and no I don't seem familiar with them. What was your mother's maiden name?"


message 1330: by onceuponatimeareview (last edited Feb 24, 2015 11:29AM) (new)

onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"Parker was her maiden name." She said. She hope this didn't seem to fake.


message 1331: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He nodded, "I don't think I've met them but I'm sorry to hear about their deaths."


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"Its fine." She said seeing as she got by her dad. At the same time she was a little hurt but her dad was smart. He could be playing with her mind to see if she would mess up.


message 1333: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Oh, well, My wife is calling me. I should go see," he smiled, but suddenly suspicious of the expression on her face. "It was nice meeting you. Ana might want to meet you but she's not the best company right now because of stress."


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She wondered what kind of stress. She wanted to ask but didn't say a word. "Well I hope she feels better soon." Was all she had to say right? He didn't suspect her. "Nice to meet you Mr.Grey."


message 1335: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "You too," he said and walked off to find his wife but he kept his eyes on her.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
Her eyes wandered back to Dave. "Did I do a good job can I have one more drink" She said. "Please I'm thirsty" her mind was becoming clearer and she didn't want that. She didn't want to face the fact she left them.


message 1337: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "No more drinking," he said and held his arm out for her to take.


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She nodded taking his arm. "I just don't want to feel bad anymore"


message 1339: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "About what?" He asked as he lead her to where the dinner buffet was. "Would you like to eat?" He asked, picking up a water bottle and handing it to her.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"About everything." She whispered. "I didn't mean to leave I had to though." She said. Everything smelt so good. "Yeah whats the best?" She asked taking the bottle of water from his hand.


message 1341: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Everything, you really believe Mr. and Mrs. Grey would get anything less than perfect?" He asked, shaking his head, she knew how her parents were.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
She smiled some and she looked around these were all her favorite foods. "These are all my favorites." She whispered with another smile. "Sometimes I didn't think I would never get caught I know my parents and didn't think they would give up looking for me." She said. "I used to cry myself to sleep hoping they would come for me." She whispered. "They never did I went to live with this nice old couple. I didn't leave because of you. You do know that right?"


message 1343: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He stayed quiet, "then why did you leave?" He asked after a pause.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"Because a week before I left I got drunk really drunk. And someone got a video of it. Whoever the person was said if I didn't leave they will show it to my dad. I let it fly by I mean who would do it to me it was a bluff." She said. "I was on my way home and you kissed me and told me you loved me but when I walked it my house he had a video of me drunk. My dad never yelled at me or got mad at that matter more to my brother. I knew it wasn't a bluff then so I left that night. I was so heart broken I didn't even get a chance to explain to him what was happening." She said. "There you know what happen."


message 1345: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "You could've called, responded to my texts, emails, voicemails," he shrugged and shook his head, pausing. "That doesn't matter now," he said quietly. "Are you coming back or are you going to go back to ignoring me?"


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"I guess I can stay here for awhile." She said. "I'm sorry."


message 1347: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He stayed quiet, "you do know that your parents forgive you, right?" He asked, "they really miss you and they'd welcome you home with open arms," He crossed his own arms.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
She looked at him. "I will think about it." She said. "I miss them a lot too." Her eyes looked down.


message 1349: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He would have hugged her but he wasn't a big fan of touching and she knew that. How he tensed up whenever anyone touched anything other than his hands.


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She would love the comfort of his arms around her. Sadly he didn't like it. "Dave I'm going to look for my friend." She said and went looking for her. Taking another drink. She felt guilty. That's what most people did drink there worries away? She knew she had to tell them that she was here home. But something kept her from doing it tonight.


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