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onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"Stop that I never said I hated you." She snapped. "I don't want to share there's a difference."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "You do hate me," he signed and turned away, so he was lying with his back to her.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"I never said that"She said.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "You don't have to say it, for me to know it."


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"Yeah I do. Just because I don't want you to hang out with people that doesn't mean I hate you. People leave me all the time and then you did too. And I still came.back to you so I really must hate you."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "If you'd stop being so freaking selfish for one fucking minute, I wouldn't have to fucking get high or drunk. I wouldn't want to leave," he said, suddenly getting the energy to pull the IV out and get up. "You know what? What the fuck ever. The only reason you'd be alone is because of you, people wouldn't leave unless you pushed them to."


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"If took the time to realize that your not the only person with a problem. Yes I said I didn't want you hanging out with other people because I was scared you would leave like everyone else in my life. I thought you would understand that I'm going to be clingy." She said. "Go ahead leave its not like you ever cared about me I mean you lied saying BPD when you actually have Bipolar Disorder." She snapped. "Which explains why you act the way you do." She paused. "And the only reason I will ever be alone is because people like you gain my trust and then throw it away and leave me."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I thought BPD was Bipolar Disorder, okay?" He asked. "The way you acted with my friends was not clingy, that was plain bitchy. I wasn't going to leave. I was patient but I wont be patient and let you kick me when I'm down anymore," he signed. "People like me. People with fucked up life and a fucked up past. or people like me, who can't talk because other people are selfish. Or people like me who've been beaten up and bullied all their lives." He stormed out and slammed the door behind him.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"Thats not true people who take someone trusts and throw it away." She whispered. She didn't know what to do anymore. She was hurt. She let someone get close to her for this. She didn't want his friends taking him away from her.Annabelle slowly walked to her room slumping down. She now wished she would of died because someone like her doesn't deserve a place or anything. Wishing that something would happen to make all the pain she felt to stop. Her being selfish was protecting him from the people who would steal him. No one seemed to get that people left her all the time. And the one person who she thought wouldn't leave her and he came back just to leave her again.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He hung himself that night. He couldn't take it. Hours and hours of crying, wishing someone would save him instead of pulling him down.

Then he stood staring at the rope, tears blurring his vision. He should have chickened out and stopped but he couldn't. Not with Annabelle hating him so much. Not when he was lonelier than he ever was before. Not when he had no one.

So he stood on the chair and fit his head into the loop. He kicked the chair to the said then struggled for a bit before everything ended. There was nothing.

The police only found his body hours later when his cab driver reported that he took a rope in there and stayed for hours before coming out of the scary, haunted looking abandoned house.

Then the note in his hands could not be ignored. Again, his first words were 'I hate love.' Then he continued on with four words. 'Goodbye world. Goodbye Annabelle.'


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments ((IM SORRY. I COULDN'T HELP MYSELF))


message 1262: by onceuponatimeareview (last edited Feb 22, 2015 12:50PM) (new)

onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
((WHAT!!! No Happy ending. YOU SHOULD SEE MY FACE DROP))


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
((THIS LIKE A NOOOOO))


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
(( ))


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments ((LOL. I'M REALLY DEPRESSING LATELY SO I'M NOT THAT SURPRISED I WROTE THIS. PLUS IT SEEMED LIKE IT WASN'T GOING ANYWHERE OTHER THAN IN A CIRCLE. AN ENDLESS CYCLE))


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments ((Sorry caps lock was on LOL.))


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
((Thats fine it just shocked me a lot I was hoping for a big happy ending where they become less messed up.))


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments ((Me too. *sigh* we can do another rp if you want?))


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
((Yeah. Sure :) ))


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Do you have anything in mind?"


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
I could show you my different ideas I do have this one idea I really want to do but haven't done yet.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Kay can I see it?


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
Sure


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
This is one is based off of 50 Shades of Grey the characters are well at least some of them are. No we wouldn't do any hard core romance. I will explain more of it to you. I want to be Lillian but this one has doubles for it. So ask me

Six years ago Lillian Kylee Grey went missing more so she ran away. She left everything and started over some place else. No one knows why she left. She left her past behind her and thats where she wants everything to stay in the past where it belongs. Until one day her past collides with her future. How can she keep everything to herself when she meets the one person who she always falls in love with all over again. Then one day her secret is out about who she is. Will the one person who she loves stay beside her or leave her because of who she is?


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Great idea. We can do that.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
Thanks


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments you wanted Lillian right?


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onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
Yeah there's like doubles but they aren't in it forever. The most common one will be her love interest and her best Friend

Lillian
Her Dad
her Brother
Her love interest
Her best Friend
Her mom


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Okay, I'll take the love interest. And then both of us rp the rest?


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
Sure :)


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Okay, shall we jump right in?


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
Sure do to you want to go first?


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Can you? Please.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
((Sure))

Lillian closed her eyes as her best friend lead to her big surprise for her birthday. She was curious on where she was going to go. So far she could tell that she went on a plane and then in car now waiting for her to tell her where she is. As they made the long way to her old house. Everyone in her new life knew her by Kylee not thinking twice about her old life until the blindfold came off. Her faced pale. "What are we doing here?" She asked. This was her old house why was she here?

"We are her for a benefit for Mr. Christian Grey's missing daughter it took me forever to get tickets to go. Its super hard to get." Her best friend said.

"Thanks I love it." She said. "A party." Deep down inside she hid that she was afraid of everything she worked so hard to keep in would come out right now. All it mattered is she didn't run into anyone she knew from her old life.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments David always attended these things, for the sake that Kylee might come back. He was in an old suit, not his, since he couldn't even afford a tie, let alone a whole suit. It was one of his friend's suit.

He sighed as he sipped the wine he was offered and looked around. It was a good thing Mr. Grey let him in for free, knowing he and Kylee used to be best friend, despite him not liking Dave all that much.

He looked around and just like every other time, he scanned the room, wishing Kylee would come home and just like other times she never did.

She just left him. Alone. With. Nothing but a not telling him that she was leaving. She never answered phone calls and never answered texts or emails. Then when he found her new number and email, she wouldn't respond to those either except one phone call because she didn't know his number, but he told no one about it. Why wouldn't she just come home? Did he do something wrong? Or was it because he kissed her and told her he loved her the night before? He knew she freaked when it came to commitments but he wished she wouldn't run, either.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
Lilian smiled at her friend new name. This was her new name she even changed her hair color from brown to blonde and made sure to change everything about herself. As her and Addison walked up the sidewalk to the place her breathing became heavy. No one knew why she left she kept that part of herself. Smiling as her friend handed the guy at the door their invitations.

There was tons of people around waiting for her Kylee but that was her past this was her future. Her eyes quickly flickered at the room making sure to stay away from her best friend David and everyone else. She stayed closed to her Addison until she wandered off in the room.

This wasn't good alone in her old house with people she knew. She took a deep breath and held her head high. No one will know or find. She had to stay protected.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments ((I'm not good with long paragraphs. But i'll try not to do any one liners.))

Dave, everyone called him, scanned the room again. Still, no one, which only frustrated it. One day, he knew he'd have to let her go but he couldn't.

The later it got, the more people arrived. Suddenly overwhelmed by the amount of people, he slipped out of the room for some tequila before coming back drunk. He talked to a few people but mainly he stayed to the side, dejected from everyone, just like he always was. Even when Kylee was still there, she was his only friend. He barely talked to anyone else.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
((Thats fine it doesn't matter to me))

She didn't want to be with here because she was scared out of her mind. Though it was nice to be here in her old house. She yet to see anyone she knew. Wondering if her dad kept her baby grand piano a white one. But that didn't matter. Nothing matter after that night she was thinking of running away and decided to do it. It wasn't Dave's fault. She was surprise that he loved her she was so cruel to people at times.

Walking around seeing her dad was doing a meet greet. She quickly found Addison to stay near here. Hoping her dad and everyone else would stay away from them.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Some people started dancing and in his drunken stupor, Dave started walking to two girls who looked a like. "Hey," he smiled, "either of you care to dance?" He asked even though he just wanted to dance, not caring about the company one bir.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
There he was David or Dave she should go run away but he seemed drunk a little. "Lily go dance with him." Addison pushing her towards him. "I have dance partner for myself." She said turning to him.

Lilian got a quick glance her brother Teddy this wasn't good. "I guess I have to dance with you." She whispered.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He smiled a fake smile, as always and held his hand out for her. "I'm Dave. You are?" He purred her name.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"My name is Lillian but she calls me Lily." She said. She looked at him with a smile.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He, again, faked a smile. "You look fetching," he tried complimenting before he put his hands on her waist to dance.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
She smiled. "Thanks but you know you don't have to fake a smile when you don't mean." She said looking at him. The one thing she didn't change was her blue eyes.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "It's just to be polite," he shrugged as he started moving a bit.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"Yeah sorry thanks for being polite" She whispered. "I probably should show my friend that I'm having good time of mean this was an expensive gift." She smiled. "So you do seem like the kind of guy who goes to these things for fun."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "No, I come here for my friend," he said quietly, "and it's been a long time since I've had fun." He didn't tell her he couldn't even afford the ticket even if he was was supposed to pay.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"Oh so I'm assuming you knew this Kylee girl" She said. "Well to be honest I haven't either had fun but you should at least smile a real smile." She said. "I mean if a girl who works non stop can have fun so can you"


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I can't have fun or smile, not without my best friend," he said quietly before twirling her. Then it clicked why she seemed so familiar even if he was drunk. "Kylee?" He whispered, his hands falling from her waist. She was familiar in every way. From her hair, not the colour, to her tiny little hands and her figure. Then her eyes. They haven't changed one bit. He took her hand and pulled her away to a room and locked it.


onceuponatimeareview | 4906 comments Mod
"Um what are we doing my name is Lilian and your friend who is missing is name is Kylee." She said. "We need to get back to the party because my best friend will be worried about me." This wasn't good she needed to mislead him." Your drunk my name isn't Kylee" She repeated recurring him and herself


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