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message 651: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He typed on his phone because his arms were still wrapped around her, "you can go back to sleep, the trip is a few hours."


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"Are we going home?" She asked.


message 653: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "No," he mouthed cautiously.


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"Silly we are." She said closing her eyes again.


message 655: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He kissed her lips, unable to help himself.


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She kissed him back. She opened her eyes some again. Smiling she looked up at him.


message 657: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He smiled back and rested his forehead against hers.


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"where are we going." She asked.


message 659: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He sighed, "rehab." He typed, "there's something I have to tell you...."


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She looked at him and nodded. "What do you have to tell me?"


message 661: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I don't know if I can afford rehab," he typed, "I have a lot saved up but I just checked my account. I'm not sure if it's enough...."


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"Its fine you don't have to go." She said. "Its really fine." She smiled softly.


message 663: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I'm sorry. It's not okay.. I promised," he typed. "If it's not enough, I'll try visiting you all the time or at least calling you..."


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"Its fine like I said you don't have to come. Its okay you don't have to come. You can just visit."


message 665: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Are you sure?" He asked, unsure. He left her for three minutes and she threw a fit. Let alone left her there for weeks at a time.


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"Yeah I'm fine." She said. "Its really fine." She wasn't sure she was trying not to burst into tears to show she was hurt,


message 667: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He could see the hurt in her eyes, "i'll get a loan," he said quietly, even though it would probably take the rest of his life to pay.


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"No I said I was fine and that is was fine." She repeated. "You don't need the loan or anything. I'm going to go without you." She said.


message 669: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "You're eyes are at war with you're words," he typed, he looking away.


message 670: by onceuponatimeareview (last edited Feb 04, 2015 11:07AM) (new)

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"I said I'm fine again." She snapped. "I will not repeat myself I'm I don't need help I can go by myself." She wasn't going to try to explain herself.


message 671: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He shook his head and stared out the window, wondering why she hated him so much. Maybe he should stop helping her.. It hurt, he admit to himself and rested back.


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She moved by the window. She knew things were to good to be true no one loved her. She thought that he liked her and he would come with her. "Your right about hope is not worth having hope in the end."


message 673: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He looked at her and typed, "I told you I'd get a loan. You're the one who's arguing." He said.


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"I said no you don't have to do that and your the one who wouldn't let to rest." She said. "And you were right hope isn't worth it."


message 675: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I never said I was giving up on you," he told her. "I'm trying to be what you need but you keep pushing me away. Or are you waiting for me to shut down and push you away so that you get a taste of your own medicine?"


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"I didn't say anything except that it was fine and you keep nagging at the subject" She snapped. "I told you it was fine."


message 677: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "No, you snapped at me. I just told you what I see. It's your choice if you want me there or not, but it's my choice to pay and want to get better," he typed, his thumbs starting to hurt.


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She looked at him. "Whatever." She said.


message 679: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He ignored that and stared out the window.


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She felt bad. Things were going great then this.


message 681: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He closed his eyes, he didn't care what she said, he'd get a loa if it wasn't enough.


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"I don't want you to do that." She said. "I don't want you getting a loan and going out of your way."


message 683: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I want to do it," he said, "not just for you but also because for the first time in forever, I feel like I want to get better."


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She looked at him some. "I don't even know who you are. Your just a guy who I meant that I like really like." She whispered. "And I want that guy"


message 685: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments That stung so he didn't reply.


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Did she say something offensive she thought she was being sweet. She wanted this guy right in front of her thats what she just said. Tears ran down her eyes some.


message 687: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments 'No no no,' he shook his head when he saww rmm


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She looked down not wanting to talk to him.


message 689: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Saw her crying. He leaned down aaNd kissed her, "i'm sorry,' he mouthed, kissing her again and again.


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She blushed some. "I said I didn't know you and I don't and I really like you." She said.


message 691: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I know," he typed on his phone. "I really like you too," he admitted.


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She looked at him some. She smiled. "I didn't mean to offend you."


message 693: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "You didn't, I just misunder


message 694: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Misunderstood you..." He typed.


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She looked at him."I hope maybe one day i will hear your voice."


message 696: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He sighed, not sure what to say to her so he just mouthed, "me too."


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She looked in his eyes."You don't think that?"


message 698: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I don't think it'll happen but theres a possibility."


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"I think it will you just have to have hope." She said.


message 700: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He nodded and kissed her lips.


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