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This is a hard question. There are a lot of things that I wish I could change, Ish steering in the supply pod, the place where Minnie and John's EV landed, but then the story wouldn't be such a cliffhanger. I have to agree with Karen. John getting hurt was one of the worst things that could have happened at that time, so that would be the one thing I changed.
Susan wrote: "Karen wrote: "John getting hurt and so sick."I think that gave minnie the drive to say I can do what needs to do for both of us. To me she just kinda sat back and let John take charge. She has th..."
I agree. Once John got hurt, Minnie was forced to take over the leadership role and take charge. She was just as capable as before John got sick, but it seemed to me that since he was man in charge, she had to let him make the decisions.



What one thing that happened in part one would you change if you could?