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CYOA Challenge 2020 > Chapter C Discussion

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message 1: by Kadi, Creator (new)

Kadi P (kadi_p) | 4303 comments Mod



message 2: by Kadi, Creator (new)

Kadi P (kadi_p) | 4303 comments Mod
You've reached the second chapter!!

Honestly, this was a fun chapter to write, and the end choice and the 2 chapters you can choose from to come after this are also really fun, which is why I like this path more than the other one... but enough about what I think about it!
What do you think about it? I'd love to hear your thoughts below!


message 3: by Kadi, Creator (last edited Jul 09, 2020 06:59AM) (new)

Kadi P (kadi_p) | 4303 comments Mod
My fave quote from this chapter: "No way can a practically ancient-looking handwritten book that’s been sitting on my father’s desk in his hidden bookshelf room for who knows how long actually be communicating a message to me."

I love writing sassy and incredulous😂


message 4: by Jawahir (new)

Jawahir the Bookworm Just finished Chapter C and my mind is in scrambles!


message 5: by Kadi, Creator (new)

Kadi P (kadi_p) | 4303 comments Mod
😂yesss! That’s what I was going for. I wrote this one a while ago and I totally loved how the ending was kinda like breaking the 4th wall because when it says “end of story” it’s really like 👀 is this the end of the actual story and not just an expression? There’s only one way to find out!


message 6: by Ilsen (new)

Ilsen | 517 comments I really liked this chapter too!! Her finding out the clues although I feel bad that I got her in a worse predicament and she thinks her dad is dead! 😱 But I hope they can make it out alive.


message 7: by Kadi, Creator (new)

Kadi P (kadi_p) | 4303 comments Mod
Ilsen wrote: "I really liked this chapter too!! Her finding out the clues although I feel bad that I got her in a worse predicament and she thinks her dad is dead! 😱 But I hope they can make it out alive."

😱I'm glad you liked it Ilsen! All the clues adding up is the best thing! This was definitely me trying to add some mystery elements into the story because I love mysteries. Also yes things really do go from bad to worse for your character. It's a hell of a ride😂


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