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Serafina and the Black Cloak (Serafina, #1)
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Robert Beatty (robertbeatty) | 9 comments Please add these characters to the character list:

Serafina, Braeden Vanderbilt, George & Edith Vanderbilt (historical figures)


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Alex | 2736 comments Done. I've also added biographical info to the pages for Edith and George Vanderbilt.


Robert Beatty (robertbeatty) | 9 comments Thank you.

I see that the characters are listed in alphabetical order. Is there any way to list the characters in order of importance? It would be Serafina, Braeden Vanderbilt, George Vanderbilt, Edith Vanderbilt. The book is entirely from Serafina’s point of view. She’s the main character. So it seems incorrect to list her last.

Also, if you could add these descriptions to Serafina and Braeden, that would be great:

Serafina is an unusual twelve year old girl who lives secretly in the basement of the vast Biltmore Estate. She is the daughter of the estate’s maintenance man. Serafina prowls through the shadowed corridors at night. She can see in darkness, creep without anyone knowing she is there, and detect the presence of intruders both large and small.

Braeden Vanderbilt is one of the two main protagonists of “Serafina and the Black Cloak.” Referred to as “the young master” by the servants at Biltmore Estate, Braeden is the twelve year old nephew of George Vanderbilt. Braeden is known for his expert riding skill and his profound connection with animals of all kinds, but especially his horses and his Doberman Gideon. Braeden’s uncle and aunt (George and Edith Vanderbilt) are historical figures in “Serafina and the Black Cloak,” but Braeden is fictitious.


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Alex | 2736 comments They weren't in alphabetical order purposefully, there were some issues with another Serafina already being in the database, so I had to delete her and recreate her to distinguish her, which left her last.

I have now deleted all the characters and recreated them to get the desired order. Added the descriptions to Braeden and Serafina.


Robert Beatty (robertbeatty) | 9 comments Excellent. Looks great. Thank you.


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