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message 1: by Jonathan (new)

Jonathan Gemoets | 22 comments Hey everyone!

I have a manuscripts that could use a fresh pair of eyes. It has already been edited, and the next stop is beta readers before being queried. It is a 74k Suspense/Horror YA. If anyone is interested I would be willing to swap manuscripts and provide feedback. Here is my email: jgemoets1987@gmail.com

Thanks so much!


message 2: by Ackash (new)

Ackash Kumar (adkthehurricane) | 40 comments I would love to swap with you!


message 3: by Jonathan (new)

Jonathan Gemoets | 22 comments awesome! if you would like to send me an email in the address above, we can get the ball rolling


message 4: by O.M. (new)

O.M. David (inziko) | 96 comments Hi Jonathan - Let me know if you're interested in swapping your work for a Dark Fantasy novel. It's 155k words but I can only send you the first 74k (same length as your story) if you wish. Kindly see below info and let me know via PM/reply (or email at authoromdavid@gmail.com) if you're interested. Thanks. :)

Genre: Adult Dark Fantasy with Mystery and Horror elements.
Keywords: Prophecy, Kingdom, Mysticism, Dark, Atmospheric

Caleb - a mercenary with a mysterious past - escapes from his prison inside a high dark tower and is tasked with retrieving a long-lost journal which is the last hope for the salvation of his world threatened by a dark prophecy.

I can provide feedback on characters (voice, consistency, personality), worldbuilding (setting, description, exposition), plot, writing style and flow of story.


message 5: by Jonathan (new)

Jonathan Gemoets | 22 comments sure i will email you now! :)


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