Beasts Made of Night
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Apr 30, 2020 10:33AM
Ok heres an idea, that would help this story have any kind of consistency and character development.. You already introduced Omar...he was a young new Aki....why didnt he get recruited into the ones Taj trained in the forest.(Even if he didnt get recruited we know Omar follows him EVERYWHERE, so he could have just followed him into the forest.) Then we would have a reoccurring character you could build on, someone to lead the aki in their place (instead of that random ass kid that had a 'streak of gray' in his hair you know...those kids with gray hair.) Can you imagine how much more interesting it would have been for during the final fight, the city almost seems over run, but then Omar shows up with his crew of "well" trained aki that turn the battle. Hell even kill Omar since it would actually mean something to Taj and us if we've been following him so long. But no...this character is completely pointless, and that ending battle is so dumb.
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